高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错58 .doc

2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。in order to realize his dream, bill gates, richest man in the world, gave up studying in harvard university, that is the most famous in the worldhe set up a company and researching the computer softwarean old saying go, “interest is the best teacher” i quite agree with this ideai began to be crazy about english when i was a little girli got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customsto meet me curiosity, i read in english stories every dayit seemed to be the best “meal” of a dayas a result, i always did very well in english examinterest is the key of success2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（a)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。i will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago. one of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. a few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale. they are quickly sent to a nearby hospital. doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. they were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. this accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. i strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to food safety.3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除： 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。this afternoon i went to see my grandfather by a bus. it was very crowded and i had to stand. besides me there was a woman held a little boyin her arms. in front of her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be sleeping. i heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “whats wrong withthe uncle?” i had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man. beyond her expectations, the woman answered with a smile, “be quiet. this uncle must very tired because of hard work.” the young man must haveheard the word. his face turned red and offered one seat for the woman at once. 4.第三部分:写作(共两节,满分40分)第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分) 下面短文中有10处语言错误.请在有错误的地方增加删除或修改某个单词. 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词. 删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉. 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在改词下面写上修改后的词. 注意:1.每次错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分. 例如: it was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you.luckily the i was completely then, so ill to say “yes”. ill arrive in bristol at around 8:00p.m am in friday evening on dear diary, here i am in the middle of a city 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. do you want to know why we move last week? dad lost his job, and as mom explained, “he was lucky to find other one.”his new job meant i had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else.i love in the world.to make matters bad, now i have to share a room with my younger sister,maggie. tomorrow is first day of school. i an awfully tiring, but i know ill never fall sleep.good night and remember you .dear diary.is my only souvenir from. me past the end only friend. yours, roedmary第二节:书面表达满分(30分) 请以“one thing im pround of”为题,用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文.记述一件你自己认为得意的事情.要求如下:1. 记述事情经过;2. 简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示.注意:文章的标题已给出(不计词数). one thing im pround of 5.第三部分 写作（共两页，满分35分） 第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。the book im reading of talks about afternoon tea in britain. it is said to have started in the early 1800s. have tea in the late agternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 oclock at night. this custom soon becomes another meal of day. interesting, it had a connection by the british porcelain(瓷器) industry. tea in china was traditionally drank from cupswithout handles. when tea got popular in britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit british habits. this made for the grow in the porcelain industry.第二节 书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，自制一些中国结（chinese knot）。给开网店的美国朋友tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：1.外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）2.象征意义3.价格注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头语已为你写好。第一节：6.i hardly remember my grandmother. she used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. i was only four when she passes away. she is just a distant memory for me now.i remember my grandfather very much. he was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. he had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. in a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. however, he was the gentlest man i have never known.试卷答案1.in order to realize his dream, bill gates, richest man in the world, gave upthestudying in harvard university, that is the most famous in the worldhe set up whicha company and researching the computer softwarean old saying go, “interest researched或去掉and goesis the best teacher” i quite agree with this ideai began to be crazy about english when i was a little girli got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customsextremely andto meet me curiosity, i read in english stories every dayit seemed to be the bestmy 删除“meal” of a dayas a result, i always did very well in english examinterest is theexamskey of successto2.1.story后加that/ which, 2. classmate classmates, 3.enjoy 后加the, 4.ourtheir, 5.arewere, 6.butand, 7.beforeafter, 8.to realize 去掉to, 9.strongstrongly, 10.payspay3.this afternoon i went to see my grandfather by a bus. it was very 删除crowded and i had to stand. besides me there was a woman held a little boy beside holdingin her arms. in front of her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be occupiedsleeping. i heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “whats wrong with curiouslythe uncle?” i had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man. that或去掉ifbeyond her expectations, the woman an