广东省肇庆市高考英语二轮复习 书面表达借鉴集（5）.doc

广东肇庆市2016高考英语二轮书面表达借鉴集（5）（2014福建卷）第二节 书面表达（满分25分）如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。 “success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm. - sir winston, churchill 内容要求： 1你对该引语的理解： 2你的相关经历： 3恰当的结尾。 注意： 1短文开头已给出，不计入总词数： 2文中不能出现考生的具体信息： 3词数：120左右。 this quotation from winston churchill tells us that _.【考点】考察开放性作文【写作指导】本文属于开放性作文，要求考生根据丘吉尔的名言“success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.发表自己的理解，并举例说明。属于议论文的一种，主要使用第三人称和一般现在时。在讲述各人经历时可以使用过去时。要点：1.该名言告诉我们：面对失败，我们不应该泄气，相反我们应该鼓足勇气充满热情继续努力。2.各人经历：学习骑自行车的例子。3.如果我们不尝试，我们就不可能成功，最重要的是我们要坚持下去。本文对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。【一句多译】回顾这一切，我感觉如果我失去信心，我就不能学会骑自行车了。（1）looking back, i feel i wouldnt be able to ride a bike had i lost heart.（2）when i looked back, i feel i wouldnt be able to ride a bike if i had lost heart.【参考范文】this quotation from winston churchill tells us that we shouldnt get discouraged right after failures. rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures. at the age of twelve, i got a nice bike as a birthday gift. so excited was i that i couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it. however, it was harder than expected. the bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. worse still, i took many falls off the bike. i was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. with more practice, i did better and better. looking back, i feel i wouldnt be able to ride a bike had i lost heart. actually, we cant succeed in everything we try. whats important is that we should stick at it.书面表达（a）（20分钟）2010年，中国“虎妈”蔡美儿以其给两个女儿列出绝对不允许做的“十不准”在全球一炮走红。由此而引发的有关如何教育子女的争论愈演愈烈。请就此给china daily投稿，阐明家长们的不同观点，并发表自己的见解。一些家长的观点子女必须沿着父母为其选择的道路努力必要时采用高压手段另一些家长的观点孩子应该自由发展赏识教育，好孩子是夸出来的你的观点（至少两点）注意：1. 对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。amy chua, a professor at yale law school, who listed ten “donts” to her two daughters became famous overnight she insists that parents should be very strict with their children it has caused a heated online debate_【参考范文】one possible version：amy chua, a professor at yale law school, who listed ten “donts” to her two daughters became famous overnight she insists that parents should be very strict with their children it has caused a heated online debate some parents insist that children should make every effort to live up to their parents expectations they believe it is necessary to be strict with their children they say parents who set high standards and push their kids to study and make achievements can ensure their childrens success in the future competition others, on the contrary, hold the opinion that children should have the right to make their own decisions and develop in their own way additionally, praise the children when they do well and encourage them when they are faced with challenges, and they will be great in my opinion, those who are raised with the strict chinese parenting style dont have the ability to think and act independently they lack imagination, creativity and social skills parents should not put so much pressure on the children just give them suggestions and show respect to their own choices so that they will learn to be independent2016书面表达训练假定你是小林，你的朋友李华马上要参加高考了，因此他很紧张，晚上经常睡不着觉。现在，请你给他发一封邮件，教他如何克服紧张情绪，内容包括：1.对李华表示安慰和鼓励 2.介绍消除紧张情绪的方法3.提一些生活和学习方面的建议 4.提出希望注意：不得写出真实班级和姓名；可以适当增加情节，使行文连贯；词数100左右，给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数。【参考范文】dear li hua, i am sorry to learn that you are feeling so nervous that you cant sleep well at night as the college entrance examination draws near. but in fact, you dont have to worry about it, and it is not as hard as you think.in order to get over the pressure, you should live a regular life and take more exercise to keep relaxed. whats more, you had better have a balanced diet, and milk, meat, vegetables as well as fruit are all good choices. time permitting, you can chat with your parents or friends about how you feelbelieve in yourself and make full preparations! i am sure that you will succeed . best wishes xiao lin书面表达（b）（20分钟）假设你是李华，你上个星期天去市图书馆看书时发现以下问题，你写信向馆长mr. li反映：1.新书太少; 2.书架上的书比较混乱；3.阅览室的一盏灯坏了；4.管理员工作时彼此闲聊。注意：1.词数120左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信的开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。dear mr. li,last sunday, i went to do some reading in your library. _ so, for the sake of readers, i suggest that you change all these mentioned as soon as possible.yours,li hua写作要点该篇短文按要求有四条要点需要写出，这就需要合理地安排四点的顺序并注意运用适当的连接词或过渡句子。另外还要注意适当发挥，以使短文符合词数要求。one possible version:dear mr. li,last sunday, i went to do some reading in your library. over the time 1 was there, i found something unpleasant. therefore, id like to voice my opinions, which, i hope, would be of help for you to create a more comfortable place for readers.so, for the sake of readers, i suggest that you change all these mentioned as soon as possible.yoursli hua2016书面表达训练随着电子商务的发展网络购物正日益成为青年人生活的一部分。china daily的社会生活栏目版展开了关于网络购物的激烈讨论。请你写一封信，谈谈网络购物的利弊以及你的看法。网络购物（1） 方便，快捷（2） 质优价廉1. 质量无法保证2. 售后态度不好3. 你的看法注意：1.词数100左右。2.新的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。dear editor, with the fast development of e-commerce, online shopping is increasingly becoming an unavoidable part of the youngs life.【参考范文】that the online shopping becomes so popular with the young definitely has its own reasons. first and foremost, online shopping usually means something you buy both cheap in price and better in quality. besides, goods you get online come to you fast as well as conveniently, saving your tiredness of shopping and walking. but the other side of the coin is also true. goods bought online are not as fine as that from the store which you can watch, feel and smell by yourself. some online shoppers become impatient or even unreasonable after you have paid for the goods.in my opinion, we should enhance our e-commerce laws to regulate the activities of online purchase. meanwhile, as the online customers, we should be cautious while shopping online.best wishesyours, li hua书面表达（a）（20分钟）在最近学校组织的一次社会实践活动中，你班同学参加了进行了关于一项青少年课余活动情况的调查，调查结果如下。请用英语写一篇短文， 简要介绍调查情况，谈谈你的看法，并提出建议。注意：1. 词数150个左右。 2. 文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。recently my class took part in the social practice organi