广西凤山县高考英语二轮复习 短文改错专练（8）.doc

广西凤山县2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）专练（8）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。once, when i was a teenager, my father and i were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. finally, there was only one family among us and the ticket counter.this family made deep impression on me. there were eight children, both probably under the age of twelve. you could tell they didnt have a lot of money. their clothes was not expensive, and they were clean. the children were well-behaved, all of us standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, held hands. they were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants and another performances where that they would see that night. everyone could sense they have never been to the circus before.【参考答案】4.once, when i was a teenager, my father and i were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. finally, there was only one family among us and the ticket counter. betweenthis family made deep impression on me. there were eight children, both probably a allunder the age of twelve. you could tell they didnt have a lot of money. their clothes was not wereexpensive, and they were clean. the children were well-behaved, all of us standing in line, but themtwo-by-two behind their parents, held hands. they were excitedly talking about the clowns, holdingelephants and another performances where that they would see that night .everyone could other 删除wheresense they have never been to the circus before. had假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加: 在此处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出修改的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。we all have a strong desire to succeed. for some the desire is great than that of the average people. in fact, everyone wants to be successful so very few are willing to pay the price of hard working. success is an attitude and has no really secrets. it all start with your belief system. your belief system starts with what you feel about yourself. you must at first believe in yourself. on your journey to succeed, you will find that there are no shortcuts. you will never be able to completely master every detail of your life. attempt to do so will only lead to disappointment. besides, its necessary of you to have clear goals. youd better put your goals on paper where they are visible so that they can help to monitor your progress.【参考答案】5.we all have a strong desire to succeed. for some the desire is great than that of the greateraverage people. in fact, everyone wants to be successful so very few are willing to pay the butprice of hard working. success is an attitude and has no really secrets. it all start with your work real startsbelief system. your belief system starts with what you feel about yourself. you must at first howbelieve in yourself. on your journey to succeed, you will find that there are no shortcuts. successyou will never be able to completely master every detail of your life. attempt to do so will attemptingonly lead to disappointment. besides, its necessary of you to have clear goals. youd better forputyour goalson paper where they are visible so that they can help to monitor your down或 downprogress.短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）。并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。one rainy day while i was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. the driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. i stood there and couldnt believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. the man insisted, so i grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. this man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. it was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.【参考答案】6.one rainy day while i was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop friends besides us. the driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found beside an we were wet through. i stood there and couldnt believe in that a complete stranger is 去掉 was so thoughtful. the man insisted, so i grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched gratefullythe truck disappear down the road. this man might need the umbrella himself, and he but preferred to give it to everyone else. it was a lesson to us that it was possiblegive withoutsomeone toexpect anything in return.expecting短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线()划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。 although all the students seem very happily at our school, as 66_far as we concerned, the buildings would be more beautiful67_if the school could be decorated. we students thought the school68_looks like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in69_a rainy day. we would be much happier and are able to study70_better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters, 71_photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons72_and enrich our lives. original art work are too expensive, but 73_unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. using only a74_little money, it can make our school a nicer place. 75_参考答案、短文改错66. happilyhappy 67. we后加are 68. thoughtthink69. inon 70 去are或arebe 71.正确 72.thatwhich73.workworks 74. unlessif 75. itwe短文改错ill never forget the trip to europe last year. after i left76. a small village in the south of france, i drove on to the next77. town. in the way a young man who was very tall stopped me and78. asked me for the lift. as soon as he got into the car, i said79. good morning to him in french and he answered with the same80. language. except for a few words, i do not know any french81. at all. none of us spoke during the journey. i had nearly82. reached the town, while the young man suddenly said very slowly. 83. do. you., speak. english? i looked at him in surprising. 84. here was no people speak english. just then i understood that85. he, too, was an englishman.(二)76left had 77. 78. in on 79. 第一个the a80. with in 81. do did 82. none neither 83. while when 84. surprising surprise 85. speak speaking短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划一个（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误）；则按下列情况改正：此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。