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山东省潍坊市2014高考英语课外训练（9）及答案短文改错-1choose what to eat is no longer as easy as it once was. our eating habits 1. have changed , as have our way of life. and the fuel we need for our 2. body is also different. tradition diets often have too much fat and too 3. much calories for the 21st-century person. if we want to keep up with the 4. high pace of modern life, we had better to learn to make the right choices 5. about what and how we eat. because we have so much to choose, many 6. companies offer advice about what we should eat. its good if we spend our 7. time and money in buying food and keep a balanced diet. instead of eating 8. expensive diet or going on unhealthy diets, we can simply try to eat little 9. sugar and take more exercise. i hope that everyone keeps a good health. 10. 答案及解析 choose 改为 choosing 。动名词作主语have 改为has 。倒装句中助动词取决于后面的主语3.tradition 改为traditional 4.much 改为many 。calories 是calorie （卡路里）的复数5.better 后面的to去掉。 had better do sth 最好做某事6.choose 后面加from7.正确8.keep 改为keeping 。keeping 和前面的buying构成介词in的宾语9.little改为 less 。 less 和后面的more构成对应关系10.a去掉 。 health 是不可数， keep good health 保持身体健康短文改错which we all know, we are what we eat. therefore, its very important 1. for us to form into healthy eating habits. however, bad habits are still very 2. common among we students . some of us often go to school without 3. breakfast .some like to have snacks; some others are particular with food; 4. and still some eat or drink too many.all these bad habits will be bad for our health 5. to keep fit, we should have various health diets, which generally 6. include proper amount of fish, meat, vegetable, fruit as well as main food. 7. beside, we had better have meal regularly. 8. in my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up 9. a strong body. only in this way can we have enough energy study better. 10. 答案及解析：which改为as ， 非限制定语从句放于句首用as，再说as we all know 众所周知 into去掉， form healthyeating habits 养成健康的饮食习惯we 改为us with改为about ，be particular about为固定词组many改为much health改为 healthy vegetable改为vegetables ，vegetable是可数名词beside 改为besides ， beside 是在旁边，而besides是“除此之外”正确study 前面加to表目的 (东北三省三校第二次联考)yesterday, li mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)when she got there，she refused. the salesman said that he wouldnt take it back if she showed him the receipt. thinking it was no way out，li mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her. they found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful. many eyes were staring at her, what made li mei very embarrassing. luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.答案：yesterday, li mei to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)when she got there，she refused. the salesman said that he wouldnt take it back she showed him the receipt. thinking was no way out，li mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. suddenly two shop stopped her and began to search her. they found the shirt in the bag and looked at it . many eyes were staring at her, made li mei very . luckily, salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.甘肃省部分学校第二次联考)im a senior student from china, aging seventeen. while surfing the internet, i have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in singapore. with greatly interest, id like to apply for them. im an outgoing girl who like communicating with others. i could speak english well. my written english is excellent, either. i wish to join in the activities. for one thing, im willing to introduce china to other students from all over world; for another, i expect to learn from more about other countries. in addition, id like to make friend. the chance is so precious as im really looking forward to your approval.答案：im a senior student from china, seventeen. while surfing the internet, i have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in singapore. with interest, id like to apply for . im an outgoing girl who communicating with others. i speak english well. my written english is excellent, . i wish to join in the activities. for one thing, im willing to introduce china to other students from all over world; for another, i expect to learn more about other countries. in addition, id like to make . the chance is so precious im really looking forward to your approval.短文改错what should you do when your parents become1. _angry? if your parents got mad, try to have a conversation2. _with them about it . remembering not to shout 3. _at them. they usually will try to change, but they will 4. _take some time because they get angry all their life, and that 5. _is all they know . you might have to change for your6. _method a couple of times. do any nice things for your7. _parents that they dont expectlike cooking, doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean 8. _the floors. if this doesnt work , bring in friend that you 9. _feel comfortable, and have him or her help you.10. _答案及解析1. 此行无错。2. got 改为get。通读全篇， 可知道本文基本时态应为一般现在时。3. remembering 改为 remember。本句为祈使句， 表示建议， 主语省略。4. they 改为 it。they 前为转折连词 but， 表明其后为一个句子， 这里应用 it 代表前面整个句子。如： toms mother kept telling him that he should study harder， but it didnt help。此处的代词 it， 代替“toms mother kept telling him that he should study harder”这一句子的内容。5. life 改为 lives。这是考查名词的数， life 是可数名词单数， 句子主语用的是they， 与其一致应用lives。6. 删去 for。因为 change 作“改换”讲时为及物动词。如： can you change me one yuan note?你能兑换一元零钱给我吗?而 change for作“转换车到”解。如： where should you change for guilin? 你在什么地方转车到桂林去?7. any 改为 some。any 一般用于疑问句、 否定句、 条件从句中， 而 some 一般用于肯定句中。此处为祈使肯定式， 故用 some。8. clean 改为 cleaning。应与 cooking， doing， washing 一致， 作介词宾语。9. friend 前加 a。friend 为普通可数名词单数， 其前应加不定冠词 a。10. comfortable 后加 with。comfortable with 意为“与自在/愉快”。例如：she feels comfortable with those who speaks english。她和讲英语的人谈话觉得很自在。短文改错第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）i am worker at the tap water company. i find that 76._people were becoming more and more careful about 77._health .if the tap water appear a little bit unclear 78._and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again. 79._fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the 80._protection of water resources .for the sake of our 81._health ,we should take good care our water resources 82._and environment .there is a saying “whether we do 83._not careful protect our environment the last drops 84._of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85._【参考答案】i am worker at the tap water company. i find that 76._a _people were becoming more and more careful about 77._are_health .if the tap water appear a little bit unclear 78._appears_and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again. 79._or_fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the 80._unfortunately_protection of water resources .for the sake of our 81._ _health ,we should take good care our water resources 82._of_and environment .there is a saying “whether we do 83._if_not careful protect our environment the last drops 84._careful_of water we will see them will be our own tears.” 85. them短文改错-12013新课标i 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：把缺词处叫个娄子符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除： 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。i hardly remember my grandmother. she used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. i was only four when she passes away. she is just a distant memory for me now.i remember my grandfather very much. he was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. he had a deep voice, which set himse