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2012广州一模 基础写作必用句型 doasurveyonsthamongsbcarryoutasurveyaboutsthamongsbsurveysbonsth whether how 句子 1他们将就人们过去20年的生活如何改变做一个调查 2上周我们在2600个学生中对 whoisyouridol 做了一个调查3近来我在我的同学中做了一个有关他们对新的英语教科书看法的调查4近来我在高三学生中做了一个有关体育锻炼的调查 10 ofthe IrecentlysurveyedmyclassmatesabouttheirviewsonthenewEnglishtextbook RecentlyImadeasurveyofsenior3studentsonphysicaltraining Lastweek wedidasurveyamong2 600studentsabout Whoisyouridol They llcarryoutasurveyonhowpeople slifehaschangedinthepast20years Theycarriedoutasurveyabouthowpeople slifehaschangedinthepast20years Lastweek wedidasurveyamong2 600studentsabout Whoisyouridol IrecentlysurveyedmyclassmatesabouttheirviewsonthenewEnglishtextbook RecentlyImadeasurveyofsenior3studentsonphysicaltraining IrecentlysurveyedmyclassmatesabouttheirviewsonthenewEnglishtextbook Accordingtothesurvey 80 ofthestudentswerequitesatisfiedwithit 15 dislikeditand5 hadnoopinion Studentswholikeditsaidthepictureswiththetextswereveryattractive whichgreatlyarousedtheirinterestsinlearning Moreover thebookwasveryinteresting coveringmanyhottopicsandprovidinglotsorculturalknowledgeoftheworld studentswhodislikeditcomplainedthereweretoomanynewwordsanddifficultsentences makingthetextsdifficulttounderstand Inconclusion thenewEnglishtextbookhashelpedmoststudentsimprovetheirEnglishenormously while However 1 调查问题及调查对象 2 主要活动 3 感受及原因 4 期望 Recentlywesurveyed368middleschoolstudentsonhowtheyspentthe2012SpringFestival 30 saidtheyspentmostoftheirtimewiththeirparentsvisitingrelativesandfriendswhile25 wenttravelingwithclassmatesorparents 45 ofallthosesurveyedindicatedthattheyjuststayedathometodohomework WhenaskedhowtheyfeltabouttheSpringFestival mostsaidtheyenjoyeditbecausetheyreceivedlotsofluckymoney butsomefeltunhappybecausetheamountofhomeworktheyweregivenleftthemhavingnotimeforfunactivities Manystudentsexpressedthehopethatnextyeartheywillhavelesshomeworkandmorefreetime 你参加学校的研究学习小组并对高三学生的体育运动的状况进行研究 最近你对高三学生的体育活动现状进行了调查 写作内容 请根据下列图例 用英语写一篇报告 并陈述你的观点 写作辅导 1 写作有可能用到的主要短语和单词 设施facility 提供资金的援助offersomefinancialaid 体育活动physicalactivities 体育训练physicaltraining 健康状况差beinpoorhealth 2 本文因为是对高三学生的体育活动现状进行了调查 属于普遍性问题 故应该使用一般现在时作为主流时态 RecentlyImadeasurveyamongsenior3studentsonphysicaltraining Only35 ofthesurveyedstudentsdosports Thereasonsareasfollows halfofthestudentshavingtoomuchhomeworkandnotenoughtimetodoexercise 30 ofthemcomplainingaboutnoplaceswheretheycanrelaxthemselvesandnotenoughtrainingfacilities 10 livingtoofarawayfromtheplacesandsomeevennotknowinghowtotakeexercise Becauseofthelackofphysicalactivities manystudentsareinpoorhealth soweshouldrealizetheimportanceoftakingexercise andmeasuresshouldbetakentoimprovethepresentsituation Itwouldbegreatlyappreciatedthatourgovernmentandsocialorganizationsaswellcouldoffersomefinancialaid 基础写作 共1小题 满分15分 上周 我们以 谁是你的偶像 为题 在2600名学生中进行了一次调查 survey 以下是调查数据 偶像 idol 女生男生伟人18 18 父母25 11 影视明星50 14 体育明星6 48 没有偶像 1 9 写作内容 根据以上数据 写一篇短文 包括以下内容 1 调查时间 调查问题以及调查对象 2 男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异 3 父母 在男女生偶像中的排序差异 4 男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同 5 你的偶像及理由 Lastweek wedidasurveyamong2 600studentsabout Whoisyouridol ThesurveyshowsthathalfofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridols while48 oftheboysfavorsportsstars Asthedatashows parents ranksthesecondforthegirls butthefourthfortheboys However thepercentageoftheboyschoosing greatfigures isthesameasthatofthegirls Asforme ThomasEdisonismyidol becausehisinventionshavegreatlychangedourlife 你们班同学上周五就 应该送什么样的礼物给同学或朋友 的话题展开了讨论 下面是讨论记录 你的看法 AsfarasIamconcerned itisbetterforustomakepresentsbyourselvesbecauseThereceivercansenseourloveandbestwishestothemingiftsmadebyus957 LastFriday ourclassmadeadiscussionaboutwhatshouldbepresentsforfriendsorclassmates Theresultsareasfollows 60 peoplethoughtitgoodtobuypresentsinshopswherethegiftsareelegantandbeautiful theyarefitforbeingprizes Therestsupportedthattheycouldmakeitthemselves andtheyheldtheideathatnotonlycanitshowoneself stalent buthelptostrengthentheawareofsavingaswell AsfarasI mconcerned makingpresentsbyyourselfisaspecialwaytoshowyourwishestoyourfriends whichtheycouldfeelthesincerelylovefromyou Finderrorsinthefollowingsentences 1Mostofthestudentsconsideredthatweshouldpresentagoodsasagift2OurclasshadadiscussionaboutpresentsforclassmatesandfriendsonlastFriday 3Itisagoodchoicetogivepresentsbuyingfromshop 4Ifwithouttime wehavenochoicebuttobuythegiftfromstores Theyhadadebateonwhethertheyshouldstopvehiclesonthehighwaytorescuethedogs OurclasshadaheateddiscussionlastFridayonwhatgiftsweshouldgivetoourclassmatesandfriends Sixtypercentofourclassmatessaidthattheywouldbuygiftsfromashopbecausetheythinksuchgiftsaredelicateandpretty thusproperforgiving However theothersprefertomakethegiftsbythemselves Ontheonehand thiscanshowtheirpersonaloutstandingskillsandhelpthemdeveloptheirabilitiestodothingsthemselvesandontheotherhand theycanusematerialsfromhometomakegifts whichcanstrengthentheirawarenessofimportanceofsaving Inmyopinion givinggiftsmadebyourselvesisabetterwaytoexpressourfeelings consider believe Dearmum I vejustreceivedyouremailexpressingyourconcernthatIambeingdistractedfrommystudiesbecauseofmymanyafter schoolactivitiesandtheconsequencesofthisformyfuture 或I vejustreceivedyouremailexpressingyourconcernaboutmyparticipationinsomanyafter schoolactivities theeffectofthisonmystudyperformanceanditsconsequencesformyfuture Iappreciatewhatyousayandamsorrytohavecausedyousomuchworry I malsotouchedthatyouunderstandmyreasonsforbeingattractedtosuchactivities It struethatIhavebeenspendingalotoftimewiththesegroupsbutpleasedon tworry Ifindthatthesegroupshelpmetorelax developmythinkingandactuallyimprovemyschoolperformance althoughmyteacherisrightthatIdosometimesfeeltiredinclass 来源 Z xx k Com Forthisreason andtoalsorelieveyouofyourworry Ihavedecidedtolimitmyparticipationtoonlytwogroupsthisterm ThiswayIcanstillenjoytheoutsideactivitieswithoutaffectingeitheryouormystudyperformance 第二节读写任务 共1小题 满分25分 阅读下面的书信 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文 DearDavid Iamwritingyouthisemailbecauseyou resobusyeverydaywithyourstudiesandafter schoolactivitiesthatweseldomhavechancestotalkface to face ThereissomethingthatIamveryworriedabout Youhavealwaysbeenanactiveboy willingtohelpothersandalwayslookingforanopportunitytotrysomethingneworlearnsomethingdifferent IthinkthesearewonderfulqualitiesbutIamconcernedthattheymaybeaffectingyourstudies Inthepastthreemonthsaloneyouhavejoinedatleastfourdifferentstudentclubs Iseetheseactivitiestakingupmoreandmoreofyourtime You realwaysdiscussingsomethingwithyourclassmatesorsurfingonline You realsodevotinglesstimetohomeworkandevenyourteacherssayyouarelookingverysleepyinclass Iknowthatthesekindsofactivitiesarefunandcanhelpyourdevelopment butIthinktheyhavestartedtodamageyourperformanceatschool Pleaserememberthemostimportantthingatthisstageofyourlifeisyourstudies Rightnowyoushoulddoyourbestinyourexaminationsasitwillgiveyoumorechoicesisyourfuture IbegyoutofocusonyourmaingoalandnottothrowawayallyouryearsofhardworkYourlovingmother 写作内容 1 以约30词概括书信的主要内容 2 以约120词谈谈你对参加学校社团或俱乐部活动的看法 内容包括 1 你读信后的感受 2 你是否赞成你妈妈的观点 并陈述理由 3 你对你妈妈的承诺 认真审题 审体裁 抓要点 Dearmum I vejustreceivedyouremailexpressingyourconcernthatIambeingdistractedfrommystudiesbecauseofmymanyafter schoolactivitiesandremindsmeoftheconsequencesformyfuture letter Summary2 Dearmum I vejustreceivedyouremailexpressingyourconcernaboutmyover participationinafter schoolactivitieswhichhasabadeffectonmystudyperformanceandremindingmeofitsconsequencesformyfuture Dearmum Iamsorrytokeepyouconcernedaboutmystudyperformanceandfutureduetomyover participationafter schoolactivities 你对参加学校社团或俱乐部活动的看法你1读信后的感受 Thankyouforremindingmeoftheimportanceofmystudy Readingyourletter regretsandappreciationarefilledwithmyheartandsoul Iappreciatewhatyousayandamsorrytohavecausedyousomuchworry I malsotouchedthatyouunderstandmyreasonsforbeingattractedtosuchactivities It struethatIhavebeenspendingalotoftimewiththesegroupsbutpleasedon tworry Ifindthatthesegroupshelpmetorelax developmythinkingandactuallyimprovemyschoolperformance althoughmyteacherisrightthatIdosometimesfeeltiredinclass Ontheotherhand asaSenior3student Ishouldbeambitiousenoughtoattachgreatimportancetomylessons Afterall timeandtidewaitfornoman SoIwilltrymybesttobalanceactivitiesandstudy tryingtomakeactivitieshelprefreshmyselftostudymoreefficiently 2 对于学校社团或俱乐部活动 你是否赞成你妈妈的观点 并陈述理由 你对你妈妈的承诺 NowIhavemadeupmymindtolimitmyparticipationtoonlytwogroupsthistermandhopetorelieveyouofyourworry ThereforeIwillsparenoeffortstobreakawayfromthebusysocialactivities instead Iwillattachenoughimportancetomystudyanddevotemyselftomylessonstostruggleforabrightfuture DearPatti I mwritingtoyouforsomeadviceonmystudies Asyouknow footballisaverypopularsportintheworldandIamattractedtoitandIhavefallenindeeplovewithit whichmakesmefeelsocrazy Ihavebeenspendinglotsoftimedoingmanythingsrelatedtoit likewatchingfootballmatches readingnewspapersandmagazines andsearchingtheWebformoreinformationaboutfootball Asaresult ithascertainlydisturbedmynormalstudy ThoughIknowtobeafootballfanismyhobbyandmymajorobjectiveistolearn Iamstillaseniortwomiddleschoolstudent andI llhavemyownbusinessevenwhenIgrowup soIamnotlikelytodoajobinthefieldoffootball ButnowIcan tstopmyselffromgettinginvolvedfurtherwithfootball SoIfeelverydepressedandwanttoknowhowtodealwiththecontradiction 矛盾 betweenmystudiesandhobbies Yourssincerely LiMing DearLiMing Thankyouforyourletter Fromyourletter I veknownsomethingaboutyoursituation Youareverydepressedbecauseofthecontradictionthatyoucan ttearyourselfawayfromfootball whichhasbeendisturbingyousomuchthatyoucan tconcentrateonyoulessons Hobbiesareveryimportanttoaperson withoutwhichlifewon tbeascolorfulasitshouldbe Theycancheeryouupandimproveyourcomprehensiveabilities buttheyalsorequiretimeanddevotion Youarestillastudent whosemaintaskshouldbegainingknowledge soyoumustknowwhichismoreimportantthingtodoindiffe