高考英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析（第二部分） 专题三 图表式专题练评2.doc

2013届高考英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析（第二部分专题练评）（专题三 图表式2）每个同学对紧张的学习生活都有不同的减压方式。假设你对本校100名学生的减压方式进行了调查，请你根据调查结果（如下面饼图所示）写一篇150词左右的短文向某学生英语报投稿为读者进行介绍，并结合自己的实际提出你的看法和建议。可根据需要适当发挥。讲 评一、图表信息描述 审图表抓要点通过审图表，提炼要点如下1.占29%的学生以听音乐的方式来减压； 2.占28%的学生以看电视上网的方式来减压；3.占18%的学生以睡觉的方式来减压；4.占15%的学生以锻炼的方式来减压；5.占10%的学生以其它方式来减压。由此我们得出结论：100名学生中对紧张的学习生活有不同的减压方式（这也是本篇的话题）。化要点为句子（注意多重表达），这是本篇表达时描述饼图的难点所在。因此我们在动笔前首先要在脑中重点收索一下有关词组不同的表达方式。然后再将要点转化为句子。减压：relieve stress, relieve pressure释放压力：release pressure, release stress放松：get relaxed, make oneself relaxed, relax oneself消除压力：get rid of the pressure以方式：the way to do sth.turning to sth.the method of doing sthwith the aid(help) of sth.1.占29%的学生以听音乐的方式来减压29 percent of the students choose listening to music as their favorite way to relieve stress.29 percent of the students are better willing to listen to music to release pressure.29 percent of the students relax themselves by listening to music.29 percent of the students turn to music to get relaxed. 2.占28%的学生以看电视上网的方式来减压the percentage of those who turn to tv and the internet to get rid of the pressure reaches 28.28 percent of the students take advantage of watching tv and surfing the internet to release pressure.28 percent of the students get rid of the pressure with the aid of tv and the internet.28 percent of the students get relaxed by watching tv and playing computer games on the internet.3.占18%的学生以睡觉的方式来减压； 18 percent of the students get out of their worries by sleeping for more time.in order to release pressure, 18 percent of the students make great use of their spare time to sleep for more time.there are some students, taking up 18 of them, sleeping more time to get rid of the pressure.the percentage of those who get rid of the pressure by sleeping for more time reaches 18.4.占15%的学生以锻炼的方式来减压15 percent of the students like taking exercise to get relaxed.in order to release pressure, 15 percent of the students take exercise.it is a good way for 15 percent of the students to take exercise to release pressure.doing sports is a good way for 15 percent of the students to release pressure.5.占10%的学生以其它方式来减压 10 percent of the students to take other measures to release pressure.taking other measures to release pressure only takes up 10 percent.本篇的话题：你对本校100名学生的减压方式进行了调查，发现他们对紧张的学习生活有不同的减压方式。i have recently made a survey among 100 students in our school about how they relieve pressure in their daily school life. and i have found that their ways vary from person to person.i have recently made a survey about how students in our school relieve pressure in their daily school life. among 100 surveyed students, we can see different students have different ways to relieve pressure.连句成篇连句成篇的关键在于怎么样理顺表达的顺序。我们认为有两种方法可以参考。1.引出话题按图表反映的数据由大到小来进行表达i have recently made a survey among 100 students in our school about how they relieve pressure in their daily school life. their ways vary from person to person. as the chart shows, up to 29 percent of the students choose music as their favorite way to relieve stress. the percentage of those who turn to tv and the internet to get rid of the pressure reaches 28. besides, 18 percent of the students get out of their worries by sleeping for more time. surprisingly, only 15 percent students like taking exercise to get relaxed and only 10 percent students to take other measures to do so. 2.引出话题将相关的要点进行合并来进行表达i have recently made a survey among 100 students in our school about how they relieve pressure in their daily school life. from the chart, we can see different students have different ways to relieve pressure. up to 29 percent of the students choose music as their favorite way to relieve stress while the percentage of those turning to tv and the internet to get rid of the pressure reaches 28. besides, 18 percent of the students get out of their worries by sleeping for more time. surprisingly, exercise and others take up only 15 and 10 percent.二、结合自己的实际提出看法和建议 结合自己的实际提出看法和建议的时候，我们认为三种方法可以参考。 1. 结合自己的实际从图表中选择一种你喜欢的减压方式来进行叙述 2.结合自己的实际从图表中选择一种你不喜欢的减压方式进行评论，然后谈谈你所喜欢的另外的减压方式in my opinion, watching tv is not a good way to keep us relaxed, because some exciting tv plays can make us more excited and we cant keep calm. as for me, i prefer to go on a natural trip. not only can i relax ourselves, but i can enlarge our horizon. so i hope the way is really helpful to both your health and study. 3.结合自己的实际谈谈其它的减压方式dear readers, here are some of my suggestions about how to reduce our pressure. first, you should often remind yourselves that you are the best one and that you can do well what you want to do. second, when you feel stressful, read funny stories which help you to get relaxed. finally, if you cant get rid of the pressure by yourselves, you can also ask your teachers or parents for help, they will solve the problems which you are facing.参考答案（一）i have recently made a survey among 100 students in our school about how they relieve pressure in their daily school life. their ways vary from person to person. as the chart shows, up to 29 percent of the students choose music as their favorite way to relieve stress. the percentage of those who turn to tv and the internet to get rid of the pressure reaches 28. besides, 18 percent of the students get out of their worries by sleeping for more time. surprisingly, only 15 percent students like taking exercise to get relaxed and only 10 percent students to take other measures to do so.personally, i prefer taking exercise to get relaxed. exercise can lift my mood and build up my strength. every time i feel stressed, i take exercise and all the worries will disappear with the sweat. besides, regular exercise can also contribute to sound sleep, which makes me more confident and optimistic. to sum up, exercise is a perfect way to reduce anxiety. 参考答案（二）i have recently made a survey among 100 students in our school about how they relieve pressure in their daily school life. from the chart, we can see different students have different ways to relieve pressure. up to 29 percent of the students choose music as their favorite way to relieve stress while the percentage of those turning to tv and the internet to get rid of the pressure reaches 28. besides, 18 percent of the students get out of their worries by sleeping for more time. surprisingly, exercise and others take up only 15 and 10 percent.in my opinion, watching tv is not a good way to keep us relaxed, because some exciting tv plays can make us more excited and we cant keep calm. as for me, i prefer to go on a natural trip. not only can i relax ourselves, but i can enlarge our horizon. so i hope the way is really helpful to both your health and study.参考答案（三）i have recently made a survey among 100 students in our school about how they relieve pressure in their daily school life. their ways vary from person to person. as the chart shows, up to 29 percent of the students choose music as their favorite way and the percentage of those turning to tv and the internet reaches 28, while 18 percent get out of their worries by sleeping. surprisingly, exercise and others take up only 15 and 10 percent.dear readers, here are some of my suggestions about how to reduce our pressure. first, you should often remind yourselves that you are the best one and that you can do well what you want to do. second, when you feel stressful, read funny stories which help you to get relaxed. finally, if you cant get rid of the pressure by yourselves, you can also ask your teachers or parents for help, they will solve the problems which you are facing.同步练习近期某网站就校车安全问题进行了一次社会调查，结果见下图。请根据图示用英语写一篇短文，介绍调查结果并谈谈你的看法，供有关部门参考。注意：1.文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。词数150左右。 2.提示词：报废车abandoned vehiclesrecently, a survey on school buses has been conducted on a website 参考答案recently a survey on school buses has been conducted on a website. the result i