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2014高考英语书面表达系列系列（39）及参考范文第二节：写作请阅读下面一则短信（message）:中国人在食品里完成了化学教育。从大米里认识了石蜡；从火腿里认识了敌敌畏；从咸鸭蛋、辣椒里认识了苏丹红；从银耳、蜜枣里认识了硫磺。今天三鹿奶粉又让中国人知道了三聚氰胺（melamine）食品安全（food safety）已经给中国人的健康敲响了警钟，谈谈你的认识。词数：100左右。【参考范文】作文：one possible version:from the message mentioned above, we can see that food safety has gradually drawn peoples attention.why do the immoral phenomena happen so frequently in china? driven by profits, some illegal businessmen add poisonous stuff like melamine to food regardless of peoples health and safety. what they do has violated laws and regulations. additionally, some relevant departments fail to supervise them effectivelyactually, only a small number of manufacturers have been fined, giving rise to such terrible events as listed in the above message.in my opinion, apart from profits, manufacturers should bear some social responsibilities. meanwhile, government should spare no efforts to regulate the market of food and laws must be passed to limit and regulate the food safety. solving the problem needs the joint efforts of the whole society. only in this way can we prevent the tough, disturbing problems from happening again.*结束2013高考英语：写作综合训练 -【1】假如你叫李华，你的美国网友jim发来一封email，向你了解我国传统节日端午节的情况，请你根据中文提示和图片利用本单元学过的词汇写一封图文并茂的电子文档发给他。节日日期：中国农历五月初五节日由来：爱国诗人屈原投江自尽划船找他的尸体往江中投粽子(以免鱼损伤他的躯体)。节日活动：家人团聚，观看龙船比赛，吃粽子，纪念先人。参考词汇：端午节the dragon boat festival/duanwu festival；农历lunar calendar；自杀commit suicide；汨罗江miluo river 【1】-【参考范文】dear jim，thanks for your interest in my countrys traditional festivalsand im delighted to introduce the dragon boat festival to youthe dragon boat festival, also known as the duanwu festival, is one of the most significant traditional chinese festivalsit falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to chinese lunar calendarthe festival is said to be in honour of qu yuan, a great poet as well as one who tried all his best to help his own country but failed and committed suicide by drowning himself in miluo river the folks respected and loved him so much that they threw zongzi into the river to prevent fish from eating his body later it became a custom for people to eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races on that daynow we can have a oneday holiday on this festival when all family members can stay together and enjoy a big meal as far as i am concerned, it is a chance for people not only to have a day to have fun, but also a day to recall the memories of our ancestors and to give thanks to the ones who have helped us although qu yuan was gone, his spirit will always live with usyours，li hua*结束2013高考英语：写作综合训练 -【2】its easy to see how the sawfish got its namethese frightful creatures can grow to be more than 6 meters longtheir bodies are flat and winged，like underwater airplanesand their noses are shaped like chainsaws sawfish are food hunters of the seawhen a sawfish is hungry，it waves its sharptoothed snout (口鼻部) through a group of fishthen，it lifts its nose and uses its mouth to draw the injured victimshardy (适应力强的)population of sawfish thrived in warm waters along coastlines around the world for thousands of yearsover the past 200 years，however，human actions have severely endangered sawfishthreats include fishing nets that trap the huge animals，often by mistakesome people collect sawfishs snouts as prizes：one snout recently sold for nearly $ 1,600 onlinein some asian cultures，the toothy snouts are used in ceremonies to drive evil and disease awayand sawfish are also deliciousa growing demand in asia for the fishs fins for a pricey soup has contributed to the fishs lovescompared with other fish，sawfish give birth late in life and at slow rates，which makes it hard for them to recover from overfishingnew efforts now aim to restore sawfish populationbeginning next month，an international agreement will provide protection for all seven of the worlds sawfish speciesscientists are hoping that its not too late to save the sawfishuntil 1998，“this fish had never been formally studied in the united states，”says tonya wiley of the mote marine laboratory in sarasota，fla“we didnt know such basic things as where they live，what habitat they use，how often they breed，how many young they haveeven what age sawfish are when they begin breeding”through historical studies and field research，scientists have become aware of how much the fishs numbers have decreasedtoday，there may be 90 percent fewer sawfish than there used to bewiley estimates that only 3,000 to 6,000 sawfish remain in us waterssawfish1 size2 3 body：flat and wingednose：like a chainsawways to hunt for foodattacking fish with 4 drawing the injured victims with its mouth5. sawfishs disappearance6 sawfishs snouts relates businessasians interest in eating fishits 7 and slowly which makes it hard to recover from overfishing8 only 10% sawfish left3,000 to 6,000 remain in us watersefforts9 measureto restore sawfish population10 to all seven of the worlds sawfish species【参考范文】1descriptions/features/characteristics2shape/appearance3over 6meter long4its sharptoothed snout5factors/reasons for/causes of6peoples fishcatching activities7giving birth/breeding late 8present/todays situation9aim/goal/purpose10offering protection*结束2013高考英语：写作综合训练 -【3】baloney is a kind of sausage that many americans eat oftenthe word also has another meaning in englishit is used to describe somethingusually something someone saysthat is false or wrong or foolishbaloney sausage comes from the name of the italian city，bolognathe city is famous for its sausage，a mixture of smoked，spiced meat from cows and pigsbut，boloney sausage does not taste the same as beef or pork alonesome language experts think this different taste is responsible for the birth of the expression baloneybaloney is an idea or statement that is nothing like the truthin the same way that baloney sausage tastes nothing like the meat that is used to make itbaloney is a word often used by politicians to describe the ideas of their opponentsthe expression has been used for yearsfifty years ago，a former governor of new york state，alfred smith，criticized some claims by president franklin roosevelt about the successes of the roosevelt administrationsmith said，“no matter how thin you slice is，it is still baloney”a similar word has almost the same meaning as baloneyit even sounds almost the samethe word is blarneyit began in ireland about 1600the lord of blarney castle，near cork，agreed to surrender the castle to british troopsbut he kept making excuses for postponing the surrenderand，he made them sound like very good excuses，“this is just more of the same blarney”the irish castle now is famous for its blarney stonekissing the stone is thought to give a person special powers of speechone who has kissed the blarney stone，so the story goes，can speak words of praise so smoothly and sweetly that you believe them，even when you know they are false1whats the main idea of the text？(no more than 5 words) 2according to americans，what does baloney refer to？(no more than 8 words) 3what do you know about the lord of blarney castle，near cork？(no more than 6 words) 4why do people kiss the blarney stone？(no more than 6 words) 【参考答案】1the other meaning of baloney2it is something false or wrong or foolish3he was a clever man4to get special powers of speech*结束写作话题议论篇 诚信是处世之本。但是在中学生当中，考试作弊、抄袭作业、欺骗家长和老师等现象屡见不鲜。请你对以上种种现象作简要描述，并以how to guarantee honesty为题，从三个方面，谈谈如何保证学生做到诚信。注意：1词数：120左右；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。how to guarantee honestyas we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. much to our regret, however, _ honesty is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.【参考范文】-one possible version:as we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. much to our regret, however, it is nothing new that some middle school students cheat in exams, copy others homework and fool their teachers and parents. therefore, how to guarantee honesty should come to our attention.personally, i think honesty education is necessary. for instance, courses on honesty can be offered to students; activities like story-telling and lectures are also worthy trying. with the concept of “being honest” rooted in their minds, honesty can be reflected in their daily life and study. besides, related rules and regulations should be laid down. detailed criteria should be applied to evaluate students in aspects such as homework, tests, relationship with teachers and parents.then, strict measures should be carried out to punish those who cheat, and consequently, they must assume responsibility for their bad behavior, thus considerably reducing chances of cheating next time. honesty is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.本文是一篇开放式的作文，只提出了一个话题“how to guarantee honesty”,话题非常切合学生实际生活，让每个学