高考英语书面表达基础训练题（17）.doc

2014高考英语书面表达基础训练题（17）及答案【2014高考英语湖北省武昌区调研试题】短文写作（共1题；满分30分） 请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。 as students in senior grade 3,we are under great pressure of the college entrance examination and quite often feel depressed however, if we are realistic about our abilities and do our best to achieve our goals, we can always be happy in school 注意： 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； 除诗歌外，文体不限； 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 词数120以上。【参考范文】短文写作（共1题；满分30分）sample writing:how can we be happy under the great pressure of the college entrance examination? the answer lies in the fact that we can have an objective understanding of our abilities and set a reasonable goal. furthermore, what really matters is that we have tried our best to achieve them.in junior middle school, i was one of the top ten students in my school. i was confident and happy. but things have changed since i started senior school. however hard i tried, i was unable to be listed on the top one hundred. i felt stressed and depressed. after thinking carefully, i painfully realized that i was not as smart as i imagined. to my comfort, i have always been doing my best and i have never wasted a single hour. what makes me proud is that all my hard work paid off at last.in our life voyage, we cant change the direction of the wind, but we can adjust our sails to reach our destinations. be realistic and hardworking, and we can always be happy enough to live through our hard school life.【2012届广西老牌高中联考】书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，广西某老牌高国的一中名高三学生因为某种原因无法参加本周日上午你班外教mr jackson组织的户外郊游活动。请就下列要点用英语给mrjaekson写一份请假条。 要点：1请假原因：昨天下午踢球扭伤了脚，医生建议你静养一段时间； 2恳请准假； 3表示感谢 4表达良好祝愿。 注意：1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3请假条的标题、开头和结尾已为你写好，不计a总词数； 4参考词汇：郊游，outing。 a sick notedear mr. jackson， yours,li hua【参考范文】（a）（20分钟）最近，上海博物馆宣布免费开放。消息传出，博物馆每天被闻讯涌来的上万名游客挤得近乎“爆棚”。这一现象引发了各方的热烈讨论：博物馆该不该免费开放？下图是某网站进行的一次社会调查，请你根据图示用英语给该网站的英语栏目写一篇短文介绍调查结果，并为三种不同的意见拟写各自的理由。注意： 1. 词数150左右（文章开头已经给出，但不计入总词数）；2. 可以有适当发挥，以使行文连贯。recently a survey entitled “should museums be free to the public?” has been conducted to find out peoples attitudes towards this question._【参考范文】opinions are found to vary.67.9% of the people surveyed believe that museums should be free to the public as they are important places for both education and entertainment. they say that free museum entrance will attract more visitors, which will no doubt contribute to promoting knowledge and culture. the more museums open their doors to the public for free, the more people they will benefit.14.9% hold the opinion that museums should only be free for certain special groups, such as students, soldiers and the disabled. besides, the times that entrance is provided free for the groups should be strictly regulated.however, 17.2% believe that, to keep the museums functioning well, museums should charge visitors an entrance fee. in addition, to attract more visitors, museums, should try to figure out visitors expectations and offer better service instead of free entrance. （b）（20分钟）作为中学生，我们应该如何理解父母对我们的严格要求和爱护呢？下面是三名高中生想对父母说的话，请你就此谈谈自己的看法。注意：1.词数150左右2.可适当增加细节。_【参考范文】one possible version:in china children are the centre of each family. all parents wish their children, especially senior high students, could go to top universities and have a bright future. so they always expect their children to make full use of their time to study. they dont allow them to watch tv, play computer games or go out to play with their friends .some students just complain that their parents are only concerned about their grades and not their other needs.in my opinion, our parents are responsible for us. perhaps they are sometimes too strict with us，but what they are doing is out of nothing but love. the most important thing ,i think ,is that we should learn to communicate with them. find the right time for a talk ,telling them that youll never let them down and will work harder to earn trust and respect from them. 【2014高考英语湖北省襄阳市统考试题】短文写作（共1题：满分30分） 请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。 a goal can guide us in the right direction, so a life without a goal is just like a travelling ship without a compass注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； 除诗歌外，文体不限； 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 词数为l20左右。短文写作：一、评分原则： 1本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。2先根据文章内容和语言初步确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。评分档次的确定应在内容符合题目要求的前提下侧重于语言的表达3词数少于100的，将分数降低一个档次。4评分时主要关注：内容切题，语言表达准确、多样、连贯、得体。5拼写与标点符号，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，但英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6书写较差，以至于影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、书面表达各档次的划分及给分范围第五档（很好）：（2530分） 要点完整，表达清楚，无重大语法错误完全完成了试题规定的任务。 所有内容与提示吻合。 应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇。 语法结构或词汇运用准确，虽有个别错误，但不影响意义的表达，具备较强的语言运用能力。 恰当地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（好）：（1924分） 表达基本清楚，缺少个别要点，有些语法错误。完成了试题规定的任务。 主要内容与提示吻合。 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，个别错误对意义的表达影响。-较恰当地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构较紧凑。 达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（适当）：（1318分）尚能表达，缺少多个要点，语法错误较多。基本完成了试题规定的任务。 主要内容与提示比较吻合。 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 有一些语法结构和词汇的错误，对意义的表达有较大影响。 基本能使用语句间的连接成分，全文结构比较松散。 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（较差）：（712分）表达含糊不清，不能成篇。未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 主要内容与提示基本吻合。 语法结构单调，应用词汇有限。 有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达。 语句间的连接成分运用不当，缺少连贯性。 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档（差）：（16分）动了笔，仅罗列了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。未能完成试题规定的任务。 主要内容与提示不太吻合语法结构单一，应用词汇项十分有限。 较多语法结构或词汇方面的严重错误，严重影响了意义的表达。 缺乏语法之间的连接成分，内容不连贯。 信息未能传达给读者。0分未能传达给读者任何信息，内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。【参考范文】one possible version:in order to succeed ,we should realize the importance of life goal without a clear goal ,we will feel confused and lost while if a goal is set ,we may make a sensible schedule and confirm to it i was not aware what i wanted to chase until the discussion what is my chinese dream was held in my class last term i used to believe that it made no difference whether i studied hard or not to our nation the fate of a country had nothing to do with the individual student