高考英语书面表达基础训练题（11）.doc

2014高考英语书面表达基础训练题（11）及答案【2014高考英语广东省中山市华侨中学二模试题】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。when sam first got to his boarding school with his parents, he was very happy. he thought he would be able to go home every weekend. when he was told he would not, he started crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy.he was given uniforms and all other things that he would need for the term. he started crying when it was time for his parents to leave. he was then taken to the dorm, where he saw other children happy. he tried as much as he could to fit in but could not because his mind was at home. he started feeling homesick (想家) and wanted to go homes as soon as possible.he got sick soon because he could not eat the school food. he could not concentrate in the classroom. all he could think was being at home with his family. he had no mobile phone or other means to get in touch with his parents. he was angry and felt lonely. he thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him in a boarding school.写作内容1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 以约120个词讲述一次你（或你的朋友）想家的经历，内容包括： 时间、地点和起因； 想家给学习和生活带来的影响； 你（或你朋友）是如何应对的。写作要求1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容何时，语句连贯。【参考范文】读写任务：version 1:sam, a student, was sent to a boarding school, in which he missed his parents very much, and thus he got sick and could not focus his attention on his lessons. (31 words) in fact, in real life, everyone must have an experience of feeling homesick. i remember when i was 10 years old, because my parents were busy, i was sent to my uncles in another city. right here, i would have to study in school for two years. although my uncle and his family were really kind to me, i still felt homesick. at first, i couldnt sleep well, because i didnt adapt to the climate there. and, since different teachers have different teaching styles, it was difficult for me to understand the lessons in the beginning. besides, i was new for the students there. as a result, hardly did i have any close friends. feeling terribly lonely, i couldnt help thinking my parents and my fellow guys in my city every now and then. however, as days went on, i slowly adapted myself to the new environment. it was because i actively communicated with my new schoolmates and made friends with them that my homesickness gradually disappeared.（167 words）【参考范文】读写任务：version 2:sam was sent to a boarding school and tried to adapt himself to it but failed. consequently he began to feel homesick and lonely and became reluctant with his study. (30 words)being homesick is not at all strange to anybody. in reality, i had a similar experience. in order to promote our competitive strength in exams, we were only allowed to go home once a month this term. it was the first time that i had had to stay in school for such a long time. so much did i miss my parents that on no account would i meet them without bursting into tears. it was this homesickness that had a bad effect on both my life and study. missing my family so much, i did find it difficult to have a good meal and fall asleep. i could not concentrate on my study and my study efficiency went down sharply. worse still, totally lost in the great pressure from study, i didnt know how to deal with it. i was about to abandon myself when my teachers gave me some advice on how to adapt to this busy school life. as a matter of fact, it was high time that i should study hard and independently. i then turned my homesickness into the motivation to study diligently. moreover, i made more friends and frequently participated in outdoor activities, through which i was able to relax myself and share my feelings with others. having seas of interesting things to do, i finally became accustomed to enjoying my school life. tough as it was to adjust to a brand new school life, i succeeded eventually. the experience of overcoming the difficulties has now become a precious memory and a sum of wealth in my life. (264 words) 【2014安徽省皖南八校第一次联考】书面表达（满分25分)据报道,我国学生近视率居世界第一。造成这一现象的原因是多方面的, 请你以 why are more and more children getting short-sighted? 为题, 写一篇英语短文。内容主要包括：1. 造成学生近视的原因；2. 如何保护视力？注意: 1.词数120左右；2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；3.短文的开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。参考词汇: 近视率 rate of myopiawhy are more and more children getting short-sighted?it is reported that the rate of myopia of chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world _【参考范文】one possible version:why are more and more children getting short-sighted?it is reported that the rate of myopia of chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world.the causes of myopia are complicated. firstly, too much homework leads to the lack of time for exercise and a good sleep. long time of studying makes it difficult to refresh eyesight. secondly, medical research shows genetic factors also contribute to poor eyesight. in addition, many students dont form good eye care habits. for example, when reading, some students hold books too close to their eyes.realizing the reasons of this result, its time for us to take measures to protect eyesight. i think the most important is to encourage students to engage in more outdoor activities and create a vision-friendly studying environment.【2013界广东深圳市第二次调研考试】基础写作（共1小题；满分15分）你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇你校开展“光盘”活动的报道。写作内容写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）at 4 pm on march 4th, monday, 2013, in front of the student canteen, more than 900 teachers and students participated in the activity with the theme “fight against wasting but encourage to eat up everything on your plate” organized by the students union. first, we saw pictures on the boards which had recorded the terrible phenomena of wasting in the campus. after that, we watched video clips, from which we have learned that every year about 10 million people are dying of food shortage. therefore, if we reduce food waste by 5% every day, we can save 4 million lives. and then everybody signed up to show our determination so as to cultivate our good habit, save food and refuse waste.第一节：一、基础写作评分原则1、本题总分为15分，按3个方面给分。2、评分时，首先根据文章句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性, 初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3、只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。4、评分时，应注意信息内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的准确性、上下文连贯性及语言的得体性。5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点：（可以有不同的组合）12013年3月4日星期一下午4：00, 学生食堂门口2学生会, 900多师生；反对浪费，鼓励光盘；3利用展板，展示我校的浪费现象, 播放录像，了解现状： 全球每年1000万死于饥荒;4如果每天减少浪费5%，可救活400多万人;5大家签名以示自己的决心:培养习惯，节约粮食，杜绝浪费。三、评分标准语言 言 言7-8具有很好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性高，词汇方面使用较好，只有少许错误。5-6具有较好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性较好，有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。3-4语言运用能力一般；语法和句子结构基本准确，语法结构或词汇方面的错误不影响理解。1-2语言运用能力较差；语法和句子结构基本不够准确，语法结构或词汇方面错误较多，而且影响了对句子意义的理解。0语言运用能力很差；语法、句子结构、词汇错误很多，句子意义无法理解。备注每多或少写一个句子，扣1分。内 容5包括了所有信息内容。4包括了大部分信息内容。3包括了基本信息内容。2包括了小部分信息内容。1包括了少许信息内容。0没有包括所提供的信息内容。连 贯2内容连贯，而且结构紧凑。1.5内容连贯性比较好，而且结构比较紧凑。1内容连贯性较差，而且结构不够紧凑。0内容缺乏连贯性，而且结构松散。备注文不对题，给0分。【2013界佛山市普通质量检测（一）】基础写作