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智 课 网 雅 思 备 考 资 料 如此练习 雅思作文想不进步都难 智课教育出国考试 俗话说 Practice makes perfect 想要取得雅思写作高分怎能少的 了一定量的练习呢 通过练习 我们才会知道自己的不足之处 才会有针 对性的改进 下面 智课教育小编为大家分享一些改错练习 如此练习 雅思作文想不进步都难 考生可要充分利用 1 Futurism an early twentieth century movement in art rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion 2 But for a small group of students professional training might be the way to go since well developing skills all other factors being equal can be the difference between having a job or not 3 For a group of remaining in existence a profit making organization must in the long run produces something consumers consider useful or desirable 4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure 5 At the same time young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents 6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at for however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal 7 Numerous other commercial enterprises from theaters to magazine publishers from gas and electric utilities to milk processors bring better and more efficiently services to consumers through the use of computers 8 The American economic system is organizing around a basically private enterprise market oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that they want most 9 Thus in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximize their incomes which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it 10 The individual now has more information available than any generation and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated time consuming and sometimes even overwhelming 11 While talking to you your could be employers is deciding whether your education your experience and other qualifications will pay him to employ you and your wares and abilities must be displayed in an orderly and reasonably connected manner 12 With economic growth has come centralization fully 76 percent of Japan s 119 million citizens lives in cities which community and the extended family have been abandoned in favor of isolated tow generation households 13 After six months of arguing and final 16 hours of hot parliamentary debates Australia s Northern Territory became the first legal authority in the world to allow doctors to take the lives of incurably ill patients whom wish to die 14 The great interest in exceptional children shown in public education over the past three decades indicate the strong feeling in our society that all citizens whatever his special conditions deserve the opportunity to fully develop their capabilities 15 Your humor must be relevant with the audience and should help to show them that you are one of them or that you understand their situation and are in sympathy with their point of view 16 The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstances they want and if they cannot find them make them Such is the remark made by Bernard Shaw a great writer This view has been shared now by more and more people 17 The current passion to making children compete against their classmates or against the clock produce a two layer system in which competitive A types seem in some way better than their B type fellows 18 Science moves forward they say not so much through the insights of great men of genius as because of more ordinary things like improving techniques and tools 19 The shareholders as such have no knowledge of the lives thoughts or needs of the workmen employing by the company in which he hold shares and his influence on the relations of capital and labor are not good 参考答案 1 Futurism an early twentieth century movement in art rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion 错误 and并列连接两个谓语 应该是平行结构 所以attempts应 该改为attempted 2 But for a small group of students professional training might be the way to go since well developing skills all other factors being equal can be the difference between having a job or not 错误 培养良好的技能不是well developing而是well developed 3 For a group of remaining in existence a profit making organization must in the long run produces something consumers consider useful or desirable 错误 For a group of remaining in existence应该是For a group to remain in existence 只有后者才可以做一个目的状语 produces应 该是produce 因为在插入语in the long run的前边有must 4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure 错误 For a result of应该是As a result of 介词搭配不当 5 At the same time young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents 错误 should be encourage应该是should be encouraged 情态动词的被动语态 dependence in应该是dependence on 介词搭配不当 6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at for however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal 错误 their advocates应该是its advocates Its在这里指代的是a new movement in art 所以不能是their 7 Numerous other commercial enterprises from theaters to magazine publishers from gas and electric utilities to milk processors bring better and more efficiently services to consumers through the use of computers 错误 efficiently services应该是efficient services 这也是许多学 生经常犯的一个错误 副词不能修饰名词 必须得改为形容词 8 The American economic system is organizing around a basically private enterprise market oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that they want most 错误 organizing around a basically private enterprise应该是organized around a basically private ent erprise 这里应该是过去分词来做一个伴随状语 而不应该是现在分词 因为它是主语的承受者 in that应该是in which 因为只有in which才能引导一个定语从句 in which where 在引导一个定语从句时 后面需要加上一个完整句 而in that只能引导一个状语从句 because 9 Thus in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximize their incomes which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it 错误 which应该是that 与前面的it is构成一个强调句型 强调原句中的主语 10 The individual now has more information available than any generation and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated time consuming and sometimes even overwhelming 错误 one information应该是one piece of information 因为information是不可数名词 前面必须加量词修饰 11 While talking to you your could be employers is deciding whether your education your experience and other qualifications will pay him to employ you and your wares and abilities must be displayed in an orderly and reasonably connected manner 错误 While talking to you在这里没错 当主句的主语和状语从句 的指代的是同一个人或物时 状语从句的主语可以省略 这就是状语从 句省略结构 your could be employers is应该是your could be employers are 否则主谓不一致 pay him应该是pay him or her 12 With economic growth has come centralization fully 76 percent of Japan s 119 million citizens lives in cities which community and the extended family have been abandoned in favor of isolated tow generation households 错误 119 million citizens lives应该是119 million citizens live 否则主谓不一致 which应该是where或in which which引导的定语从句应该是一个不完整的句子 where或in which的后面才能加上一个完整句 13 After six months of arguing and final 16 hours of hot parliamentary debates Australia s Northern Territory became the first legal authority in the world to allow doctors to take the lives of incurably ill patients whom wish to die 错误 whom wish to die应该是who wish to die whom引导的定 语从句应该是一个不完整的句子 whom在定语从句中只能做宾语 而 在who引导的定语从句 who既可以做主语 也可以做宾语 14 The great interest in exceptional children shown in public education over the past three decades indicate the strong feeling in our society that all citizens whatever his special conditions deserve the opportunity to fully develop their capabilities 错误 Indicate应该是indicates 因为该句的主语是The great interest 否则主谓不一致 whatever his special conditions应该是whatever their special conditions Their在这里指代all citizens 15 Your humor must be relevant with the audience and should help to show them that you are one of them or that you understand their situation and are in sympathy with their point of view 错误 must be relevant with应该是must be relevant to 介词搭配不当 16 The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstances they want and if they cannot find them make them Such is the remark made by Bernard Shaw a great writer This view has been shared now by more and more people 错误 This view has been shared now应该是This view is shared now或者This view is now being shared 已经有了明确的时间状语no w 所以这里只能用一般现在时或者现在进行时的被动语态 17 The current passion to making children compete against their classmates or against the clock produce a two layer system in which competitive A types seem in some