高考英语书面表达基础训练题（9）.doc

2014高考英语书面表达基础训练题（9）及答案【2014高考英语安徽省六校联考】书面表达 (满分25分)手机和我们的生活越来越密切，让我们的联系变得更加方便，可有人认为手机并不利于真正的交流。校报英文版正在开展征文活动，发起对这一话题的讨论，你认为手机对人与人之间沟通的影响是利大于弊还是弊大于利？请你以“mobile phones, good or bad for communication?”为题写篇短文向校报投稿，表达你的看法。注意：1. 词数120左右； 2. 短文题目已拟好，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不可出现与本人相关的信息。淮河两岸 mobile phones, good or bad for communication?_ _【参考范文】one possible version mobile phones, good or bad for communication?the technology of mobile phones has made many things easier for people. someone can reach us or we can call someone wherever we are. however, people are unaware of the negative effects of mobile phones on communication.due to the convenience of mobile phones, many people have started to engage in social interaction in person less than before. in addition, mobile phone communication lacks facial expressions and body language, without which communication becomes less personal. consequently, some people get confused and nervous while talking to a person face to face because they mostly talk to people on mobile phones. they even do not know the manners of communication. as far as i am concerned, we should use mobile phones in a wise way and try to avoid depending too much on them.【2013界广东珠海市高三上期末质量监测】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）the train was forced to slow from 200 kilometers per hour to 120 km/h, a police officer with the shenyang railway public security bureau told xinhua news agency. the smoker, a 23-year-old from dalian, was fined 200 yuan ($30) for violating regulations. smoking is strictly forbidden on high-speed trains, even in the toilets, washing rooms and connecting areas between cars, xinhua quoted the unidentified officer as saying. smoking can trigger fire alarms or even cause a fire on the train. violators may be subject to warnings, fines or administrative detention for disturbing order on public transport facilities, he said. on saturday, the first day of the harbin-dalian high-speed railways operation, a passenger was found smoking on a train to harbin, capital of heilongjiang province, leading to a deceleration of the train, railway police said. the next day, a passenger in his 20s smoked in a washroom on a train also heading for harbin, triggering the fire alarm. his actions nearly resulted in an emergency braking, according to zhao yang, chief conductor on the train. it is not uncommon for smokers to cause trouble on bullet trains. on jan 11, a bullet train traveling from shenzhen to changsha was forced to brake after a smoker activated the emergency braking system. the halt delayed more than 20 trains. in december 2008, a passenger was given three days detention because his smoking caused a bullet train from tianjin to beijing to automatically brake just a minute after it had departed tianjin railway station. 写作内容1以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2以约120个词写出你看完这篇报道后的想法，内容至少包括：（1）吸烟可能对公共安全造成的危害和对他人的影响。（2）你对在公共场所“吸烟”的看法。写作要求1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）the passage reports a fact that a smoker smoked on a high-speed train and caused it to automatically slow down abnormally. some more cases are offered to show that smoking on a bullet train causes trouble and danger to others.as is known to everybody, smoking is very common in china. almost everybody just considers it as a personal affair and does it at free will wherever they feel like it. not only do people smoke in their own homes, but they also smoke in almost every public place, from their offices to the theatre. they feel it their private freedom, and few regard it as an offense to other people. but i do think smoking is not a personal affair but a social problem. when one smoker is enjoying his smoke, what he produces in his smoke affects the surroundings. he is at the same time forcing the people around to smoke second-hand. i once read a news story that a tourists smoking caused a fire on the top of mount huangshan. and i frequently read about fire disasters in homes or factories caused by smoking. i quite agree that trouble-making smokers should be severely punished with a view to cutting down smoking. i suggest that smoking be banned in all public places.【评卷建议】读写任务：内容概括要表达出吸烟造成火车减速的具体事件并总结出吸烟给高速列车造成麻烦和危险。表述部分主要表达读完此报道后对于吸烟危害的思考，可包括对吸烟很广泛的客观现实的认知，必须表达吸烟对他人的危害，可包括使别人被动吸烟、引发火灾给别人造成损失、导致火车延误给别人造成麻烦等，必须表达个人对于在公共场所吸烟的看法。内容概括：1-3分：句子正确但只有部分要点或有全部要点但句子的拼写、语法错误多。4-5分：句子正确、包括全部要点、字数不超过40。表述部分：1-5分：只写出极少内容或部分相关词汇。6-10分：内容少，有部分句子，拼写、语法错误较多、字迹潦草。11-14分：内容多，但不够连贯，拼写、语法错误较多，字迹清楚。15-17分：内容充实，叙述清楚，但拼写、语法错误较多，字迹清楚。18-20分：内容充实，语句连贯，没有或极少语法错误，字迹工整。【2014高考英语模拟题】短文写作（共l题；满分30分） 请根据以下提示，以my understanding of happiness为标题，用英语写一篇短文。the understanding of happiness varies from person to personmaterial basis doesnt necessarily equal happinesshow to enhance（提升）the sense happiness is of vital importance.注意；1、除诗歌外，文体不限； 2、文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 3、词数为120左右，如引用提示语则不计人总词数。【2013届广东省六校第二次联考】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）你是校报小记者，最近学校进行了一次问卷调查。以下是这次调查的情况: 时间: 上个月对象: 本校的学生主题: 请家教情况结果: （1）请家教率: 大约25；（2）家教时间: 大多在周末或假期；（3）学生的不同看法：a：家教能提高学习成绩；b：家教占用休息和娱乐时间。家教private tutoring；家庭教师：private tutor【写作内容】根据以上情况给校报写一篇报道，并包括如下内容: 1. 调查的时间、对象和主题； 2. 调查的结果；3. 你对请家教的看法。 【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内容【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）a possible version:a survey on private tutoring was carried out among the students in our school last month, which indicates that about 25% of the students have private tutors for a variety of reasons. most of them choose to have private tutoring at weekends or during holidays. some of the students believe that private tutors enable them to raise academic achievement. others think it takes up so much of their free time that they can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment. in my opinion, some students may become too dependent on their tutors, which will weaken their learning abilities.【2013届广东省六校第二次联考】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。around twenty years ago i was living in seattle and going through hard times. with rich experience and a masters degree, to my shame, i could only drive a school bus to make ends meet.later that afternoon, i dropped off a little girl in a quiet suburban neighborhood. as she passed she handed me an earring, saying i should keep it in case somebody claimed it. the earring was painted black and said be happy. it hit me. i had been putting all of my energies into what was wrong with my life rather than what was right! i decided then and there to make a list of 50 things i was grateful for. at first it was hard, then it got easier. one day i decided to up it to 75. my life was completely changed. i know that it was because i changed my attitude to gratitude, which is the key to happiness. i spent the next year conducting training workshops all around the seattle area and then decided to risk everything and go back to scotland where i had lived previously. i closed my one man business, bought a plane ticket and got a six month visa. one month later i met my wonderful english wife and best friend of 15 years now. we live in a small beautiful cottage, two miles from a paved road in the highlands of scotland. 【写作内容】1. 以约30个词概括以上短文的主要内容；2. 然后以约120个词就“幸福”话题写一篇短文，内容包括：(1) 请讲述一件你经历过的幸福的事情；(2) 简述你对幸福的理解。【写作要求】1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）概括应该包括以下要点：1、作者一直觉得生活不顺利；2、女孩给他earring，让他等失主；3、他意识到：对生活心存感激才会享受到幸福。one possible version:being a school bus driver, the author has been feeling unsatisfied with his life until the girl gave him the “be happy” earring, which was waiting for its owner. he learned that being grateful will lead to happiness. (37)actually, i experienced great happiness last weekend when my parents came from home to meet me for a dinner. with heavy schoolwork in senior three, i have been staying in school for nearly one month,