山西省霍州市高考英语书面表达训练及参考范文（10）.doc

山西省霍州市2014高考英语书面表达训练（10）及参考范文【2014高考英语广东省梅州市质检试卷】读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。right after the second world war, germany was in ruins. almost all the houses, factories and schools were destroyed. plenty of people were homeless as well as jobless. worse still, the supply of water and electricity was often cut off in the city. two american journalists interviewed a german family living in the basement. the husband was disabled from the war and the wife was just dismissed from a clothing company. worse still, there were bills for them to payfour children to care for and food to buy. life was hard for them at that time.after the interview, the journalists chatted with each other on the way back to the company.“do you think the germans could rebuild their homeland?”“absolutely.”“but i cant see any hope for the country at all. how can you be so certain about that?”“have you noticed what they put on the table in the basement? there was a vase of flowers. a nation, suffering at such moment, hasnt forgotten about flowers. it shows that hopes are not lost. they are still able to dream. a nation with hope can create miracles. they are sure to be able to rebuild their homeland.”【写作内容】1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；2. 以约120个词就梦想改变命运的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：(1) 你赞同文中的观点吗？(2) 举例证明你赞同或不赞同的原因；(3) 谈谈你对梦想的看法。【写作要求】1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】one possible version:two american journalists interviewed a german family after the war. though living a poor life, the family still placed flowers on the table, which convinced a journalist that germans were bound to rebuild their homeland.as is often the case, a man who can dream will try hard to overcome any difficulties in front and make it in turn. therefore，i agree that dreams can change ones life. lisa is my friend and former classmate. she was an energetic girl who always dreamed of becoming an actress. however, at the beginning almost everyone tried to persuade her out of her dream because she was no more than 1.55 meters tall. there is no denying that actresses are usually much taller than her. however, she didnt lose heart. with great determination, she wrote a play by herself and eventually acted as a leading role in it. the show was a success.as far as i am concerned, one who has a dream can see further, work harder, and gain much more. please hold fast to your dreams.读写任务评分说明读写任务是有材料作文：要求考生在阅读的基础上写一篇相关主题的作文；主要考查考生的篇章概括和语言表达能力。在评分时，应注意以下几方面：1 按照评分标准，实行分析综合法评分；2 概括的要点包括：two american journalists interviewed a german family after the war. though living a poor life, the family still placed flowers on the table, which convinced a journalist that germans were bound to rebuild their homeland.二、读写任务评分标准项目分值评分标准概括5 按照要求概括了全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。4基本按照要求概括了主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。3基本按照要求概括了主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息，有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。2不能按照要求概括主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，有较多的抄袭。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。0-1没有按照要求概括主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，大多数句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。写作18-20包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。14-17包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。11-13包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。7-10包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性一般。4-6只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄源文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。1-3只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。0以下几种情况，给0分：1）完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）2）文不对题3）只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容书面表达 （满分25分）你校学生会举办义卖活动以资助贫困地区儿童上学。请你写一份通知：介绍活动的目的号召大家踊跃捐献不用物品，并参加义卖活动义卖时间、地点：周六上午9点，校阶梯教室注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。参考词汇：义卖：charity sale；阶梯教室: lecture hall_【参考范文】one possible version：the students union of our school is scheduled to hold a charity sale on saturday to raise money for children in the poverty-stricken area. the efforts to be made are to support these children to continue their school education.you are kindly asked to donate some of your items temporarily not used by you and that might be of some use to others, such as some school supplies and used textbooks.at 9 am. this saturday, the charity sale starts at the lecture hall of our school. we are expecting you to come and offer a helping hand. and remember all the money will go to the support of those needy children. 【广东省2012届高三考前冲刺卷(八)】读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。there is a story telling of a religious master who is said to be capable of moving mountains.a man came to him asking for a demonstration.the master sat in front of a mountain for a moment，then went to the other side of it and declared the end of the demonstration.all the audiences were greatly puzzled and begged him for an explanation.he said，“there has never been a way of moving mountains；what you can do is to go to the mountain if it doesnt come.”one of my friends，though with the makings of a merchant，was bent on being a painter.he resigned from office and devoted himself entirely to painting at home.several years，however，saw no progress in this regard.a painful retrospection brought him to his senses.he made up his mind to take up business in place of painting.it took him only a few years to become a rich businessman.meanwhile he spent his spare time exchanging experience and skills in painting and calligraphy.his works finally won acclamation by expert painters and were on sale in art galleries and grand hotels.he had his collections published and his dream of becoming a painter came true at last.写作内容请就以上的文章写一篇读后感，内容包括：1以约30词概括短文的内容要点。2然后以约120词就“学会改变”为主题，发表你的看法，并至少包含以下的内容要点：(1)根据你的生活经历，当所面对的事实无法改变时，是否应该改变自己？(2)简述一个改变自己的例子。(3)你认为有时候改变自己，才能最终改变属于自己的世界吗？写作要求1你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。2标题自定。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。_读写任务【参考范文】get yourself changed when facing something unchangeablea religious master and a painter tried to change themselves when they were faced with something unchangeable，and as a result they both achieved an eventual change of the world around them.the stories remind me of my cousin who used to complain about english learning.he thought it unnecessary to learn a foreign language and ignored it at all.as a result，he fell behind the others in his class and even failed in the exam.after realizing that it was not only a main subject but also the most widely spoken language in the world，he developed a good attitude.thanks to his english teacher，he was well involved in english classes.he practiced listening and speaking english after class.whats more，he kept an english diary，which helped him think in english.a year later，he became one of the top ten students in his class.believe it or not，he was even awarded in an english contest in his school.as far as im concerned，change your attitude when you find the environment unchangeable.only in this way can you achieve an eventual change of the world around you.【2013嘉定区】guided writingdirections: write an english composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in chinese.我国部分省份己经开始了教科书的循环使用（recycling textbooks)，请就此用英文写