高考英语 书面表达系列及参考范文（67）.doc

2014高考英语书面表达系列系列（67）及参考范文第一节 基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。【写作内容】 假如你是班长，提倡学生多了解艺术，并建议他们暑假去参观广州美术馆。下面是你在网上搜集的有关广州美术馆的基本情况，请在班会课上向全班同学介绍。地理位置越秀公园镇海楼东侧历史1957年建成，至今有60多年的历史面积约400平方千米藏品自宋朝到现代8000多件各类美术藏品，包括油画、书法等票价成人15元，学生半价开放时间9:00 am 5:00 pm （星期一闭馆）【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。dear boys and girls, _ thats all. thank you. 【参考范文】基础写作dear boys and girls, in order to have more knowledge of arts, my suggestion is that we should pay a visit to the guangzhou art museum during the summer holiday. the guangzhou art museum, which is located to the east of zhenhai tower, yuexiu park, was built up in 1957, so until now it has a history of over 60 years. covering an area of around 400 square kilometers, the museum contains 8,000 art collections including oil paintings and calligraphy from song dynasty to modern period. the admission ticket is only 15 yuan for one adult and students can even enjoy half price. at last, its important that we should pay attention to its opening hours, from 9:00 am to 5:00 pm except monday when its closed. thats all. thank you. 根据短文内容，从下框的a-f选项中选出能概括每一段主题的最佳选项。 a. a short history of naming hurricanesb. make use of the hurricane energyc. difficulty in forecasting the course of a hurricaned. huge energy stored in a hurricanee. forecasting a hurricane through satellite watchingf. different names for the same thingshurricanes 61. did you know that before 1950, hurricanes had no names? they were simply given numbers. the first names were simply alpha, bravo, charlie, etc. but in 1953, females names were given because of the unpredictability factor of the storms. in 1979, realizing the sexist (性别歧视的) nature of such names, the lists were expanded to include both men and women.62. hurricanes and typhoons are the same things. if they form in the atlantic, we call these strong storms hurricanes, from the west indian word hurricane, meaning big wind. and if they are pacific storms, they are called typhoons from the chinese “taifeng”, meaning great wind. to be classified as a hurricane, the storm must have maximum winds of at least 75 mph. 63. hurricanes get their power from water vapor as it gives out its stored-up energy. all water vapor gives out heat as it condenses (凝结) from a gaseous state to a liquid state over fixed points on the equator (赤道). to make a hurricane, you must have extremely wet, warm air, the kind of air that can only be found in tropical region.64. scientists have determined that the heat given out in the process of water condensation can be as high as 95 billion kilowatts per hour. in just one day alone, the storm can produce more energy than many industrialized nations need in an entire year! the problem is that we dont know how to make sure such great energy work for us. predicting the path of a hurricane is one of the most difficult tasks for forecasters.65. a hurricane moves at a typical speed of 15 mph. but not always. some storms may race at twice this speed, then suddenly stop and remain in the same location for several days. it can be maddening if you live in a coastal area that may be hit. the biggest advance in early prediction is continuous watch from weather satellites. with these, we can see the storms form and track them fully, from birth to death. while they can still kill people and destroy property, hurricanes will never surprise any nation again.第三部分：书面表达（25分） 假设你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题班会为健康成长的英语作文比赛。请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括：1，乐观的人生态度；2，努力学习；3，参加体育锻炼。注意：1，词数100个左右；2，可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯，开头已写好。 we all want to grow up happily and healthily ,for this goal we must do several things. 【参考范文】书面表达we all want to grow up happily and healthily , for this goal we must do several things.firstly , we should develop a good attitude to life. life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. we should be brave in front of difficulties. secondly,we must study hard .because knowledge is power .if we have the power ,we can help to build our county and enjoy life better .in order to study well ,we need to do sports so that we can keep fit .we can go running ,play ball games or simply take a walk after a day study .if we do those things well .we will be able to grow up happily and healthily. 第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分, 满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改 10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。mr. turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for he was very excited that he could not fall asleep. yesterday morning, he went to a big gardening company, knowing as green fingers, for the interview. mr. turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, looking forward to the job offered by the company. when he got to the company, he found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get the job. while waited, he helped the workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. unluckily, he was the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give the job to whoever he believed was helpful.【参考答案】短文改错：mr. turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for he was very excited that he could not fall asleep. yesterday morning, he went to soa big gardening company, knowing as green fingers, for the interview. known anmr. turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, wholooking forward to the job offered by the company. when he got to the was或lookedcompany, he found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get the job. while waited, he helped the idea waitingworkers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. unluckily, he luckilywas the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give becausethe job to whoever he believed was helpful.第二节 书面表达（满分25分）2月4日，星期天上午，你们班同学骑车到学校附近的公园组织了一次环保活动。请根据下表内容，写一篇日记，发表你对此次活动的看法。1组扫除：清理废纸、烟蒂、塑料袋等废弃物2组宣传：树立标牌，告诉游客要爱护花木3组演讲：向游客宣传“白色污染”的害处以及保护环境的重要性你的看法注意：1日记必须包括表内所有的内容，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；2日记格式及首句已给出，不列入总词数；3词数：100词左右。 4参考词汇：烟蒂cigarette end 标牌 boardfebruary 4, sunday finethis morning our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby park. 第二节 任务型写作（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。on a busy highway a serious traffic accident has just occurred. a motorcycle is lying on the road in flames. a badly damaged car is stopped near the motorcycle, and the fire is beginning to spread to the car. the motorcycle driver is stuck under the car. he might already be dead, but not for sure. the fire is spreading toward him. what are you going to do? for 14 or so passers-by, the answer was immediate and brave: they rushed in to help. the fire was moving closer. a few people tried to lift the car, but hardly moved it. then a larger group moved as one to the side of the car, and with all their united might, they lifted the 3,000-pound burning vehicle up onto two wheels while another person pulled the young driver out. the young man survived, with only broken bones to show for his brush with death. he has one other thing: a thankful heart. he knows that there were angels out there saving his life as the people came together and risked their lives to save him. 【写作内容】1. 以约30个词概括短文的内容要点；2. 以“unity is power”为题发表自己的看法，包括如下内容要点，该部分大概120词左右：（1）上文车祸中的年轻摩托车司机得救的原因；（2）这个故事给你的启示；（3）讲述一件你亲身经历的或者听说的“团结就是力量”的事件。【写作要求】1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】读写任务unity is power having seen a serious traffic accident on the highway, a group of passers-by united together and made concerted efforts to help the injured motorcycle diver out of trouble at the risk of losing their life. as we all know, the reason why the younger motorcycle driver could be saved at last is that all the passers-by offered their help as much as possible. every one of them knocks himself out to help the motorcycle driver out, which results in the success.