湖南省汝州市高考英语二轮复习 短文改错基础选练（4）.doc

湖南汝州市2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）基础选练（4）短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加上一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。last year, i was addicted with playing computer games. i found it hard to breaking away from the bad habit. my teacher talked to my parents about this, and they made me to promise not to play those games again. i tried hard, but i found it uselessly. the moment my fingers left the keyboard, i would feel very uncomfortable. because i was determined to forget the games, i still could not concentrate on the lessons giving in classes.fortunately, psychological advisor in our school came to know this. he talks with me about his problem. at last, he offered his advices on how to get rid of the addiction. now i can manage to control myself. 【参考答案】3.last year, i was addicted with playing computer games. i found it hard to breaking away from the bad habit. to breakmy teacher talked to my parents about this, and they made me to promise not to play those games again. i tried hard, but i found it uselessly. the moment my fingers left the keyboard, i would feel very uncomfortable. uselessbecause i was determined to forget the games, i still could not concentrate on the lessons giving in classes.although/though givenfortunately, psychological advisor in our school came to know this. he talks with me about his problem. a talked myat last, he offered his advices on how to get rid of the addiction. now i can manage to control myself. advice【2015届河北省石家庄二中高三开学考试】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）patience is of great important in our daily life. once i waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. both upset and annoyed, i decided to walk on feet. but no sooner had i left when the bus arrived. i thought if i had waited for one more minute, i would have caught it. if i chose to take a next bus, i would have to wait for other 30 minutes. only then do i realize my problem. being impatient will possibly waste all the effort that we have put it in. now whenever i am close to lose my patience, ill think of this experience【答案】【知识点】短文改错记叙文【文章综述】本文以自己等车这件事为例说明耐心的重要性【答案解析】1. importance 考查固定句型。句意：耐心在我们的生活中非常的重要。be of importance 等于 be important 。2. waited for (加for) 考查固定短语。wait for sth 等待。3. past-passed 考查动词的时态。句意：30分钟过去了，但没有一辆车来。根据but no bus came用一般过去时。4. on foot 考查固定短语。句意：沮丧又着急，我决定步行去。on foot 步行5. when-than 考查固定句型。no sooner .than 一。就6. take the next bus 考查固定短语。 句意：如果我选择下一辆车的话，我还得再等待三十分钟。the next bus 下一趟车。7. another 30 minutes 考查搭配。句意：如果我选择下一辆车的话，我还得再等待三十分钟。another 30 minutes 再三十分钟。8. did i realize 考查倒装 句意：只有这时我才意识到我的问题。only +状语 +部分倒装 。9. put后it去掉 考查定语从句。句意：耐心会浪费掉所有你所投入的努力。that we have put in 是all the effort的定语从句。10. losing 考查固定短语。close to 靠近, to是介词，故后面用动名词的形式。【短文改错】my wife and i go to the theatre whenever wehave time. but before we buy ticket, we would 76. _like to know whether the play is good and bad. 77. _when a new play open, we usually read the 78. _reviews on our local newspapers to get information 79. _about it. last week a new comedy opened at the 80. _theatre. the newspaper story said it was very amused, 81. _so we decided to go on the saturday night. it took 82. _my wife a long time to make her mind what to wear 83. _and we left a little later. by the time we got there, 84. _the first act already begun. we were sorry we missed 85. _part of the play, because the rest of it was very funny.【参考答案】76.ticket 改为tickets 77. and改为or 78.open改为opens79. on改in 80. 81. amused 改amusing 82. 去掉the 83.make后加up84. later改late 85. act后加had(2013昆明市适应性检测)we had a discussion on “overnightfame” last week. nowadays, many people were crazy about instant fame and wealthy. to be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but i dont agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. we all know “easy come, easy go”. lets take li an as the example. only after his hard works did he become successful. or we can list more similar cases if need. what i do believe is that the process in which you try our best. it is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy mostly.【参考答案】：we had a discussion on “overnightfame” last week. nowadays, many people crazy about instant fame and . to be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but i dont agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. we all know “easy come, easy go”. lets take li an as example. only after his hard did he become successful. we can list more similar cases if . what i do believe is the process in which try our best. it is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy . (2013浙江省五校联考)a young man called lowcarbon brother become a hit on the internet in 2011. he suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. for example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. while he is watching tv, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. some people think what he is doing is just a show. no one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. as far as i am concerned, i am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.【参考答案】：a young man called lowcarbon brother a hit on the internet in 2011. he suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help carbon dioxide in the air. for example, always picks up some waste paper on the street uses the blank side to write something. while he is watching tv, he always turns the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. ， he goes to work by bike instead of driving. some people think what he is doing is just a show. no one can live such a life with so many modern around us. as far as i am concerned, i am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, he at least can enjoy a healthy life.短文改错at chinese new year, my family and i have a very busy76._time. two days before new years day, i went out with my 77. _friends from school to the seafood restaurant in pudong. 78. _it was the noisiest restaurant i had ever been to, and the 79. _food was delicious. afte