高考英语 书面表达一轮训练（13）.doc

2014高考英语书面表达一轮训练（13）附参考范文高考英语书面表达讲义：要点作文(3)(25 min.)(2012益阳一中月考)假如你是李明，你同学李华来信说自己每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封回信， 信的内容应包括下列要点： 焦虑症状： 头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等建议：1. 考前制定好合适的复习计划；2. 考试期间正常作息；3. 睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠；4. 其他建议(内容由考生自己拟定)。注意：1. 根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。2. 要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；3. 词数： 不少于120。参考词汇： 头晕dizzy(adj.)_【参考范文】one possible version：dear li hua, thanks for your letter. i am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.most of us feel nervous whenever were taking an important exam. some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and others will lose their appetite. in fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.first of all, in my opinion, its important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. they are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. in this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. we can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed, which might help us to have a sound sleep.wed better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.*结束(8)(25 min.)请以“特殊的寒假作业”为题，描述下面这幅漫画的内容，并谈谈你的看法。注意：1词数：不少于120；2参考词汇： 作业n. assignment盆n. basin美德n. virtue _参考范文one possible version：a special assignment in the winter vacationone night xiao mings parents are watching tv when xiao ming comes in with a basin of water in his hands. his mother feels very puzzled, asking, “xiao ming, why are you staying here instead of doing your homework？” xiao ming smiles, saying, “ mother and father, i come here to wash the feet for you. this is one of our assignments in the winter vacation.”i think it is a good idea. respecting parents is one of the good virtues of the chinese people. but at present many pupils are onlychildren in their families. they are often spoiled and dont know how to care for others. by washing feet and pouring cups of tea for parents, children will learn to respect parents and care for others. in the future, they will certainly become useful persons with good manners. *结束（广东卷）写作(共两节，满分40分第二节：读写任务阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文when sam first got to his boarding school with his parents, he was very happy. he thought he would be able（） to go home every weekend. when he was told he would not, he started crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy.he was given uniforms and all other things that he would need for the term. he started crying when it was time for his parents to leave. he was then taken to the dorm, where he saw other children happy. he tried as much as he could to fit in but could not because his mind was at home. he started feeling homesick (想家) 安定wanted to go homes as soon as possible.he got sick soon because he could not eat the school food. he could not concentrate in the classroom. all he could think was being at home with his family. he had no mobile phone or other means to get in touch with his parents. he was angry and felt lonely. he thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him in a boarding school.写作内容1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 以约120个词讲述一次你（或你的朋友）想家的经历，内容包括：时间、地点和起因；想家给学习和生活带来的影响；你（或你朋友）是如何应对的。写作要求1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容何时，语句连贯。【参考范文】the story is about what sam felt about his first boarding school life. as a child, he never left his parents, so he didnt get used to dealing with everything in school independently. once i had a similar experience. i finished my junior middle school in a boarding school. at the age of 13, i never delt with the daily things, such as washing clothes, taking care of money etc. especially i felt lonely because i hardly knew any people. at first, i could not get on well with my classmates and i always looked forward to being on holiday to meet my parents. i could not concentrate on my subjects. as time went by, i gradually adapted myself to the school life. i made several friends with our classmates and often took part in the activities, in which i improved my communicating skills. as i had a lot of interesting things to do, i finally enjoyed my school life. now, whenever i think of my first boarding school life, i think it instructive and unforgettable.【解析】1.这是一篇记叙文写作。此话题贴近生活，因为几乎每个学生都进过寄宿制学校，所以真实的经历让学生有话可写；2. 本写作具有一定的开放性。它要求考生充分发挥自己的想象力并运用熟练的语言知识将其表达出来。这充分考查了考生的能力。3. 注意文章的写作内容要齐全，按要求该文章应分为二段。第一段：以30词概括记叙文的主要内容；第二段：结合自己或朋友的实际情况描述自己想家的经历。内容包括：(1)时间、地点和起因；(2)想家给学习或生活带来的影响；(3) 你（或你的朋友）是如何应对的。4.文章应以过去时态为主。*结束高考英语作文（经典好句）（三）结尾句1.the most effective means to solve this problem is that _. in that case, _.解决这个问题的最有效的方法是。如果那样的话 2. everything has its own two sides, no exception with aaa. for one thing, _. for another, _.任何事情都有它的两个方面，aaa也不除外，一方面另一方面 3. my experience tells me that to _ need a thorough and persevering process, and in this process you had better abide by the principles mentioned above.我的经验告诉我需要一个细心而又坚持不懈的过程，并且在这个过程中你最好遵守这其中涉及的规则。 4. on the whole, it is high time that we recognized the significance of _.总体上来说，这是我们认识到的重要性的紧急时刻了。 5. as a result, we should take some effective methods to _.因此，我们应该对采取许多有效的措施 6. judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that _.通过分析这些数据，我们可以得到那样一个的结论 7. in a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of _. only in this way can _ in the future.一句话来说，整个社会应当对的问题给予密切的关注。只有以这种方式才能在将来 8. in my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of _.以我的观点来看，我们应当对的重要性给予重视 9. but _ and _ have their own advantages. for example, _, while _. comparing those two, however, i prefer to _.但是和具有它们自己的优势。举个例子，然而。对比这两者，我更喜欢 10. in my opinion, _ is just as common as _. if _, it may be very useful. whatever _, the key point (of) lies in _.以我的观点来看，就像如果，它将非常有效。无论重点在于 11. are their opinions correct? to my mind, the first idea seems _. as for the second idea, _.他们的观点正确吗？我认为，第一个观点看起来。对于第二个观点， 12. as a popular saying goes, _. in my opinion what really counts is not _, but _. i believe that as long as _, we will _. so i am for the opinion that _.一个普遍的说法是。依我来看真正的观点不是而是我相信只要我们将会所以我的观点是 13. in my opinion, both sides are partly right. when we _, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems, and then make the right decision.以我的观点来看，所有方面都部分正确。当我们时，我们应当考虑问题的所有方面，并且做出正确的决定。 14. personally, i believe that _. consequently, im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because _.一己之见，我认为。作为结果，我相信一个光明的未来在等待着我们，因为 15. people are coming to realize the importance of _. they have begun to try their best to _. we believe that _.人们逐渐认识到的重要性，他们开始付出最大努力来我们相信 16. all in all, we cannot live without _. but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with problems that would arise.总之，我们不可能离开来生活。但是同时对于即将出现的问题我们必须寻找新的方法来解决。 17. with the development of society, _. so its urgent and necessary to _. if every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.随着社会的发展，所以是急切并且必要的。如果每个人心甘情愿的为社会做出贡献，这将会好上加好。 18. it is difficult to say whether _ is good or not ，in general as it depends very much on the situation of _. however, from a personal point of view i find _.很难说是好还是坏，一般情况下，它在很大程度上取决于的情形。然而，从个人观点来看我发现 19. it is essential that effective actions should be taken to end for the situation.对于这样的情形将有效的行动坚持到底是必要的。 20. it is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of _.毋庸置疑的，对于的问题我们必须给予特别的关注 21. but both _ and _ have disadvantages. for example, _. which to choose, _ or _? careful consideration is necessary before you make your own choice.但是和都有缺点，举例说选择哪一个？或什么？在做出自己的决定时细心的考虑是必要的。 22. from what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that _.通过上面的讨论，我们将理智的得到的结论。 23. no doubt, if we ignore the problem, there is every chance that _ will be put in danger.毋庸置疑，如果我们忽视这个问题，无论怎样将会将给我们置于危险之中。 24. we need to take a second look at the matter from a wider standpoint, otherwise, we wont _.我们应该从一个更宽广的角度出发以另一种眼光看待这个问题，否则，我们不能 25. in conclusion, we should know about the problem of _, and object to _. only in this way _.作为结论，我们应当了解的问题，并且反对只有以这种方法 26. although it is affected by many factors, still there are certain ways that can make the situation better. the most import is _. another way is _. still another one is _.虽然它受很多方面的影响，仍然有许多方法可以使情形变好。最重要的是另一种方法是另一种方法是 27. many solutions are offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. the problem should be studied in depth.许多情形已经别提供在这里了，它们都有一定意义，但是所有的都不够充分，这个问题应当更进一步的研究。 28. it is clear, therefore, that the task of _ demands great attention.很清楚的，完成的任务需要很多的精力。 29. we may have a long way to go before we reach the final goal. but once we are on the way, the chance to reach it is greater.在我们达到最终目标前我们还有很长的路要走。但是一旦我们走上了路，到达这个目标的机会是很大的。 30. but for me, i would rather think of the matter in an optimistic way, because i believe _.但是对于我，我更愿意以积极的方式看待这个问题。因为我相信 31. if we cant take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is _.如果我们不能采取有效的方法，我们将无法控制这种趋势，并且一些不理想的结果将会不加预料的到来，所以我们必须做的是 32. however, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future. i believe _.然而，这个图表可能不能预料未来的全部情形。我相信 33. from the graph it is evident that _.从这个图表中我们可以看出是显然的。 34. taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _.将所有的因素考虑进来，我们将得到的结论。 35. for the reasons given above, i strongly recommend that _.通过上述的原因，我强烈的推荐 36. given the factors i have just outlined, i believe that _.通过对这些我刚刚概述的因素的研究，我相信 37. therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that _.因此，不难得出的结论。 38. recognizing the fact that _ should lead us to conclude that _.认识到的事实，将引导我们得出的结论。 39. in short, i support the statement that it is better to _ because _.长话短说，我建议这个状态对于是更好的因为 40. after pondering this question on many occasions, i have finally reached the conclusion that _ is something i truly want to do and it is worthwhile.考虑过这个问题很多次后，我最终得出是我真的想要做并且值得做的事的结论 41. my point