unit3 A healthy life：Writingppt课件.ppt

Unit3Ahealthylife Writing 1 2 英文建议信属于应用文写作范畴 是向征询建议者就某事提出写信人的建议和忠告 3 高考中此类信件多属于半开放性作文 要求考生根据所给的材料 多为征求建议信 提出合理化建议 或者给出有针对性的解决办法 4 建议信要写明写信的原因 建议的内容 提出建议的理由 并且提出的理由要合情合理 语气一定要委婉礼貌 此外 建议信要写得简明扼要 目的明确 语言要具有合理性和说服力 5 6 开门见山 表明写作意图 在本段中 写信人应该先简单介绍自己 然后陈述事由 表明写信的目的及原因 7 委婉地提出建议及改进措施 或提出忠告 8 礼貌地总结并期盼对方的回复 9 Readthisletterandimaginethatyouaretheadviserwhodealswithstudents problems WritealettertogiveXiaoLisomehelpfuladvice Writingtask 10 Dear Canyouhelpmeplease Mybestfriendhasjuststartedsmoking IdonotlikeitandItoldherwhatIthought ShelaughedatmeandsaidthatIwasnotgrown upenough 11 ThensheofferedmeacigaretteandIfeltsoembarrassed Ididnotknowhowtorefuseit Pleasehelpme Idonotwanttostartsmoking butIdonotwanttolosemybestfriend either Yourssincerely LiXiaolei 12 13 Dear Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto 建议的主题 andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere 14 Inmyhumbleopinion youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions 建议的内容 15 Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouto YoursSincerely LiMing useful furtherdetails 16 Yourfriendis smokingandyour towardsthismatter addictedto attitude 17 Ithinkitmoreimportantto thesmokertousegoodjudgmentandtoshow forothers callon concern 18 Youhadbetter hisoffer andhewill youatlast reject understand 19 巧列提纲 详略得当 针对问题需要提出什么样的建议 要讲哪些内容 应该先列出提纲 并要做到内容重点突出 详略得当 井然有序 达到提纲挈领的作用 20 Pointingouttheharmofsmoking Showingyouradvice 21 翻译要点 勾勒脉络 列出提纲后 可以尝试着将文章中涉及到的建议要点或忠告翻译成相应的英语句子 这样全文的骨架就已经形成了 在此基础上 可增加合理的想象以及适当的扩展 22 Smokingis toyourhealth especiallytoyourlung Ithinkitmoreimportantto thesmokertousegoodjudgmentandtoshow forothers Youhadbetter hisoffer andhewill youatlast harmful callon concern reject understand 23 巧妙构思 浑然成篇 增加适当的情节和一些过渡词将上述要点连接起来 加以适当润色 形成一篇地道 完整的英语建议信 24 Medicalscientistshaveexpressedtheirconcernabouttheeffectofsmokingonthe notonlyofthosewhoaresmokingbutalsoofthosewholiveintheair bytobaccosmoke health polluted 25 Smoking whichmaybe forsomepeople isaseriesof fortheirfellows apleasure discomforts Studiesshowthat suffermorethanthesmokersthemselves non smokers 26 规范书写 落笔成文 上述四个步骤是构思写作的基础 而规范书写是落笔成文的关键 在这个环节中 切不可因为书写潦草 乱涂乱改而让人看不出个所以然 结果使整篇文章黯然失色 27 DearLiMing Youhaveaskedmeformyadvice Yourfriendisaddictedtosmokingandyoustronglyobjecttoit Iwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere Sample 28 Asweknow smokingisharmfultoourhealth Medicalscientistshaveexpressedtheirconcernabouttheeffectofsmokingonthehealthnotonlyofthosewhoaresmokingbutalsoofthosewholiveintheairpollutedbytobaccosmoke 29 Smoking whichmaybeapleasureforsomepeople isaseriesofdiscomfortsfortheirfellows Andstudiesshowthatnon smokerssuffermorethanthesmokersthemselves 30 Inmyopinion itismoreimportanttocallonthesmokertousegoodjudgmentandtoshowconcernforothers Takingyourhealthintoconsideration youhadbetterrejecthisoffer andIthinkhewillunderstandyouatlast 31 Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails YoursSincerely LiMing 32 Homework Workingroups ImagineyouareproducingaschoolEnglish