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书面表达一、人物介绍类writing 1假设你的笔友(来自美国的mike)下个月将到你校交流学习，请你把mike的情况提前介绍给同学们。 要求： 1. 内容包括：(1)mike的家庭情况。(2)mike的性格特点和兴趣爱好。(3)mike的父母和同学对他的评价。(4)mike来中国的原因。 2. 词数：60-80。3.短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。_writing 2你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己的基本情况。短文应包括下列全部内容。姓名李华出生年月1992 年 2 月出生地山东济南学历1999 2005 光明小学2005 2010 山东省实验中学所学主要课程语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、电脑特长英语、电脑业余爱好游泳、滑冰、集邮、流行音乐 注意：1.情况介绍必须采用短文形式； 2.词数 80 左右； 3.短文第一句已为你写好。 生词：竞赛 competition (n) writing 3请根据以下提示内容，写一篇介绍我国科学家钱学森的英语短文。词数90左右。内容提示：1. 1911年出生于上海，三岁随父亲到北京；2. 1934年毕业于上海交通大学，一年后去美国学习；3. 1955年和家人返回祖国，从此以后，他致力于研究工作。他在新中国的导弹和核武器的开发方面作出了杰出的贡献，获得了“导弹之父”的荣誉。4. 2009 年10月31日不幸在北京逝世。提示词语：贡献contribute; 导弹missile; 核武器nuclear weapons_【范文及点拨】writing 1【思路点拨】该篇习作要求我们介绍有关笔友迈克的情况。具体行文可以这样展开：1. 开篇：开篇介绍背景,即迈克下个月要来我校学习。2. 正文：正文介绍迈克的具体情况。根据要点提示，我们可以从四个方面展开。这四个方面分别为迈克的家庭情况，性格爱好和特点、父母和同学对他的评价以及他来中国的原因。3. 结尾：结尾部分表达自己的愿望，希望大家能和迈克成为好朋友。【满分作文】my pen pal, mike, will come to our school to study next month. he is an american. he is fifteen. there are three people in his family. his father is an engineer, and his mother is a teacher. he is outgoing and he likes to help others. in his free time, he likes listening to pop music and playing basketball. his parents and classmates all think he is a lovely boy. he wants to learn chinese, and he loves chinese food. thats the reason why he will come to china. i hope you can make friends with him.writing 2【思路点拨】本文是要求写一篇申请书，做一个自我介绍，属于记叙文范畴。写作时我们以李华的身份和爱好进行介绍，根据表格中的内容提示，我们可以从两个方面写作：个人基本信息（包括年龄，含出生年月及地点；教育及学历；所学主要课程）和特长与爱好。本题写作比较简单，注意学会使用高级句型。【满分作文】my name is li hua. i was born in jinan, shandong province in february 1992. at the age of seven i went to school. i studied in guangming primary school from 1999 to 2005. from then on i studied in shanddong experimental middle school. and i graduated this summer. the subjects i have to learn at school are chinese, maths, english, physics, chemistry and computer. i am very good at english and computer. in spare time i like listening to the pop music and collecting stamps. and i like swimming and skating, too. writing 3【思路点拨】本文属于介绍人物的记叙文，从提示内容可判断，本文应按时间的先后顺序进行表达，即1911年(be born)1934年(graduate) 1955年(return to china)2009年(die)。为了句子的连贯性，中间可运用适当的连接词。【参考范文】qian xuesen is a famous scientist. he was born in shanghai in 1911. at the age of three, he went to beijing with his father. in 1934 he graduated from shanghai jiao tong university and one year later he went to study in the u.s. he returned to china with his family in 1955. since then, he has devoted himself to research. he contributed a lot to the development of missiles and nuclear weapons for new china. for his excellent research work, he was honored with the name “father” of missile. unfortunately, he died in beijing on october 31, 2009. 二、亲人好友类writing 4假设这周英语老师为大家布置了一篇作文，要求大家介绍自己最好的一位朋友。请你根据下面的要点提示完成这篇作文。 要点：1. 他的外貌特征。 2. 他的兴趣爱好。 3. 大家对他的评价。 4. 你和他成为朋友的原因。 要求：1. 词数:80左右；2. 根据提示内容可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。my best friend_writing 5父爱如山！假设父亲节即将来临，请你借此机会给你父亲写封信，和他谈谈心里话。写作要点：1.父亲辛勤工作，让我受到更好的教育，过上更好的生活；2.父亲在学习上对我严格要求;考试失利时，他鼓励我不放弃；遇到困难时，父亲鼓励我笑对生活；表达对父亲的感谢和祝福。温馨提示：1. 短文内容应包含所提示的要点，语言流畅，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥；2. 短文词数不少于80词，短文开头和结尾已替你写好，不计入总词数；3. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实的人名、校名和地名。dear father,fathers day is coming. id like to say something to you._writing 6你国外的朋友jason想了解你们的英语老师，请根据下表提示用英语写一篇题为“my english teacher laura”的短文。要求：1. 题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 介绍必须包括所给要点，但不要逐条翻译；3. 词数80左右。_【范文及点拨】writing 4【思路点拨】本文是一篇记叙文，根据题目要求可知，需要从三个不同的角度展开叙述。即：外貌、性格和成为好朋友的原因。具体写作时，我们可以从以下几个方面展开： 1.引出最好的朋友是谁。2. 根据要点提示中的信息，条理清晰地描述我的朋友的外貌、性格和兴趣爱好。3.介绍我和李梅成为朋友的原因。【满分作文】my best friend my best friend is my classmate, li mei. she is a beautiful girl with big eyes and long hair. she is neither tall nor short. she likes dancing very much. she started dancing when she was six years old. li mei is a warm-hearted girl. she is keen on helping other people. both teachers and our classmates like her. i showed no interest in learning in the past. after learning why, li mei helped me with my studies. with her help, i became interested in learning and made great progress. and we became good friends after that.writing 5【思路点拨】题目要求考生在父亲节来临之际表达对父亲的爱和对父亲的感谢。文章要求有两个要点：第一是父亲为了让我接受更好的教育和享受更好的生活，工作很辛苦；第二是父亲既对我严格要求又对我关心鼓励。基于以上两点在父亲节来临之际表达对父亲的感谢和祝福。【满分作文】dear father,fathers day is coming. id like to say something to you.you always work hard so that i can receive a better education and live a better life. you are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. whenever i fail an exam, you encourage me to be confident and keep trying. when i have problems in life, you always tell me to be brave and keep smiling.you have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. thank you for your deep love. thank you for all that you have done for me. i love you! i hope you will be healthy and happy forever!happy fathers day!yours, li huawriting 6【思路点拨】这是一篇以图表形式出现的介绍他人的人物类书面表达。写作要点：1.个人基本情况（姓名：laura；国籍：英国；年龄：29）；2. 人物性格：善良、严格、有耐心、有创造力；3. 表现出这些性格特点的事例；4. 你对她的评价。【满分作文】my english teacher lauralaura, my english teacher, is from england and is about 29 years old. she has blond hair and she always wears a pair of glasses on her nose.she is strict with us in our study, so all the students are well-behaved in her class. although she is strict, she can get along well with all the students because she is very kind and patient. whenever we have difficulty in english learning, she will help us to deal with the questions. we all like her lessons very much. thats because she is very creative. her teaching style is quite different from that of the others. she prepares her lessons well and corrects our homework carefully. in class she always encourages us to think hard and develop our ability to study on our own.in a word, i think she is one of the best english teachers i have ever seen. we all love and respect her.三、学校生活类writing 7学校生活有时让你开心，有时让你烦恼，作为学生的你一定有不少感想吧。请你以“my feelings to the school life”为题写一篇短文，简要谈谈你自己的感受。词数：80左右。温馨提示：1. 短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。2. 这些词汇也许对你有帮助：change, homework, bored, strict, relax_writing 8在初中三年的英语学习中，你参加过不同形式的课内外活动。请你用英语写一篇文章，描写你印象最深刻的一次活动以及你的收获，题目自拟。注意：1. 80词左右；2.文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。_writing 9为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长，学校决定向同学们征求建议。假如你是刘波，用英语向校长写一篇80个词左右的建议信。注意：文中应包含所有要点，并适当发挥；不能出现真实的校名和姓名。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。dear headmaster,im very glad to write a letter to you. these days we are talking about how to have a better school life. here are some of my suggestions. first, i hope our school will hope my suggestions will be helpful. thanks for reading my letter! yours sincerely, liu bo【范文及点拨】writing 7【思路点拨】此类话题是学生比较感兴趣的话题，和学生们的生活很贴近。在整个中学的学习生活中，学生们有开心也有烦恼，有很多东西值得去写。我们可以在题目中抓住两个要点：1. 叙述你的学校生活；2. 谈谈自己的感受。【满分作文】my feelings to the school lifemy feelings to the school life are changeable.when i do well in the exams, i feel excited and happy. but i often feel sad when i do badly in exams. if i spend lots of time doing my homework, i will feel bored and unhappy. my parents are always strict with me. but if they dont understand me, i will be very disappointed. i like playing with my friends and it makes me relax.in short, my feelings to the school life are a very important part of my life. i love my colorful and interesting school life.writing 8【思路点拨】通过审题，我们可以发现这几条信息非常重要，即“初中三年的英语学习”、“一次课内外活动”、“印象深刻”和“收获”。所要描述的事件是应该能够给作者留下深刻印象的事例，或是对作者的生活或学习有一定教育意义的典型事例，比如“第一次参加英语角”等。【满分作文】my first experience in english cornerit was a beautiful sunday. our teacher told us that there would be an english corner after class. i set off soon after the last class in the afternoon.to my joy, the english corner had just been on for a few minutes. i joined them in their talk. at first, i was afraid that my english was so poor and limited that i couldnt follow them or make myself understood. i was also afraid that someone might laugh at me. but a smiling face here and an encouraging nod there soon put me at ease. i became bolder and came to speak english with them freely.the day was unforgettable. i learned a lot of knowledge and made a lot of friends. through practice, we all improved our english. though we spoke only in simple english, we all believe that tomorrow we will make greater progress.writing 9【思路点拨】本题是一篇应用文。要求学生根据要点提示，给学校写一封建议信。本文同时也是一篇材料作文，由于所给的材料非常具体，无论是行文结构还是内容立意都没有什么难度可言。写好本文的关键就是设法让文章意义之间自然衔接，句式不重复单调。谋篇布局时一定要避免直接串联材料中的句子，注意选择恰当的连词，并做好语境的自然过渡。首先，针对学校提出建议，包括下列内容图书馆的开放、课外活动的课程设置、组织考试的频率；然后，针对老师方面提出建议，内容包括课堂的效率、作业布置等。要分层逐一分析原因。【满分作文】dear headmaster,im very glad to write a letter to you. these days we are talking about how to have a better school life. here are some of my suggestions. first, i hope our school will open the library more often so that we can read all kinds of books. and our school should organize more after-class activities. its better if we can get more time for sports. and i really wish we can have fewer exams. also the school meals should be better. as for our teachers，i hope they could make classes more interesting and talk less but more clearly in class. and the students will be unhappy if teachers dont finish class on time. we will be happy if teachers give us less homework. some students also hope that teachers could give them more chances to speak in class.hope my suggestions will be helpful. thanks for reading my letter! yours sincerely,liu bo四、暑假计划类writing 10中考马上要结束了，考完后你就可以做你喜欢的事哦。假如你是david，你的美国笔友fred来信询问考后你想做什么。请给他写封回信，告诉他你喜欢做的两、三件事情，并说明理由。词数：80词左右。 writing 11你的笔友sammy想了解你这两天的考试情况以及暑期安排。假定你是陈涛，请根据sammy在电子邮件中的提问，给他写回信。字数在80字左右。from: sammywde.ac.uksubject: how are you?hi,how are you? i know youre busy with your english exam right now. how is it all going? and how was everything yesterday? anyway, itll be all over soon. what are you going to do during the summer vacation? and are you ready for your new school life? please e-mail me and let me knowsammyfrom: csubject: im ok._writing 12今年的九月，你就要开始高中生活了，这个阶段是我们人生中的一个重要时期。在即将到来的暑假，为了更好地适应高中的学习生活，你打算做些什么？词数：80左右。 【范文及点拨】writing 10【思路点拨】这是一篇以暑假计划为主题的作文，题材现实感强，不仅在内容上贴近同学们的生活实际，而且也是大家感兴趣的话题。由题目给出的信息可知这篇习作共有两个要点：一是你中考后想做的两、三件事；二是陈述其理由。另外，由于是给朋友写信介绍“你”的暑假生活，可以确定人称应为第一人称i，时态应以一般将来时为主。【满分作文】dear fred，you cant imagine how happy i was to receive your letter.i have many plans for after the exam. first of all, ill do more housework for my parents because they have been so busy, not only working but also taking care of me. whats more, i am going to buy a few interesting books so that i can have a meaningful summer vacation. last but not least,i will go on a trip to yunnan to enjoy the beautiful views, of which im extremely fond.how about you? i hope youll have a wonderful vacation. i am looking forward to hearing from you.yours, davidwriting 11【思路点拨】这是一篇看来信写回信的作文。题材与同学们的生活和学习息息相关，贴近现实生活，是大家所熟悉的内容，因此易于动笔。根据来信的内容，一定要把对方询问的考试情况、暑假安排以及对新学期学校生活的渴望分别表达清楚。另外，由于是给朋友写信的文章，可以确定人称应该是第一人称i。【满分作文】dear sammy,great to hear from you!i am really satisfied with my english exam. it is english that i have always been good at as well as interested in. generally speaking, i had a busy and tiring day yesterday but i was quite pleased with the support i received from my family. as for the summer vacation, i have quite a few plans. for example, i will go to visit my grandparents who looked after me for years. in addition, i am going on a trip to sichuan, which is to my mind the most beautiful place. most importantly, i cant wait to enjoy my new school life and meet new friends.hope you are well.chen taowriting 12【思路点拨】这是一篇谈论暑假计划的作文。这个话题非常贴近同学们的生活实际，如何为高中的学习生活做好准备是我们每位同学所面临和必须考虑的问题。写这篇文章时，所有的暑假计划都要围绕是否能对更好地适应高中的学习生活有帮助这一主题。【满分作文】i will enter senior high school in september. i therefore plan to do something useful during the summer vacation in order to help me adapt to my new school life.first of all, i will spend almost a month reviewing what the teachers taught me in junior high school. in addition, i am going to take more exercise, which will help keep me physically strong. most importantly, i will make myself well prepared by previewing the lessons in senior high school so that i can have a better understanding of them.i do hope that i will live a wonderful life after implementing the above plans.五、人际关系类writing 13英语课堂上，老师要求学生就“与人相处”的话题展开小组讨论。请根据以下你所在小组的讨论结果，以“how to get well with others”为题，写一篇英语短文。 注意：1. 词数80100；2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3. 文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校。how to get on well with others writing 14在学习与生活中你一定帮助过他人。你校校报正在开展以“我助人，我快乐”为主题的征文活动，请根据提示用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你助人的故事，让大家与你一起分享助人的快乐。1. 写作要点提示：（1） 帮助的对象、时间、地点、原因；（2） 助人的具体过程（你是如何帮助他人的）；（3） 被助人的反应及你助人后的感受。2. 写作要求：短文的内容包含所提示的要点，语言要流畅，可围绕提示要点适当增加情节，以使短文的意思连贯；短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名；短文的字数在100词左右。 writing 15假设你是王威，你的朋友马华上周来信说，他的同桌上课经常找借口跟他说话，这使得他非常苦恼，不知道如何处理。请你给他写封回信，提出一些建议并帮助他解决问题。短文的字数在80词左右。 【范文及点拨】writing 13【思路点拨】这是一篇建议如何与他人相处的书面表达。根据中文和表格提示，可以看出这篇书面表达的要点包括两个：1.小组讨论出来的有关“与人相处”的建议；2.“我”对“与人相处”的建议。【满分作文】as we know, good relationship can make us happy and comfortable. but how do we get on well with others?first of all, we should respect others. everybody has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other. we can share happiness and sadness with our friends. whats more, we should be kind to others and try to offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.in my opinion, treating others in an honest way is also a good way to get on well with others. i am sure these suggestions will help us to get along well with others.writing 14【思路点拨】这是一篇叙事性文章，结构可以用总分总的形式，内容重点在于叙述和描写，要重点把who，when，where，why，what，how写清楚，即：谁在哪里何时做了何事，为什么要做，及最后的感受。1.帮助的对象、时间、地点、原因；2.助人的具体过程（你是如何帮助他人的）；3.被助人的反应及你助人后的感受。【满分作文】everyone needs help and ive learned a lot from helping mike.i was not good at math in the beginning. months ago, my teacher asked me to help my classmate mike with his math because he wanted to give it up after he failed some exams. before helping him i felt a little nervous, so i went over the