最棒作文魔术训练补充 (2)

作文魔术训练最潮话题一、近四年作文题2011年 Team-work2012年 You can choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.2013年 We all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”, but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too.2014年 Small things can make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.二、魔术作文秘籍忠告1：注意事项：切题要准：第一段描绘现象，提出观点，题目中的英语key words 在整个文章中要反复出现。第二段事例要贴近实际和生活。最后一段总结到位，适当有点slogan(口号). 忠告2：每个考生进入考场前 都应该有自己的万能模板 例文两则In our daily life, we are often confronted with （描绘现状）difficulties, even great troubles. Some people do nothing but wait, while others face them bravely and conquer them. Personally, （提出观点）I think we should learn to face difficulties positively and make every effort to overcome them. My memory drew me back to four years ago when I was a junior middle school student. （举例套话）At that time, I had great trouble studying English. First of all, I felt it hard to memorize English words. Besides, I didnt dare to say anything in class when the teacher asked questions though I knew some answers. What annoyed me most was that I failed exams constantly. I was about to give up when my English teacher found my problem. He encouraged me and gave me some good advice. Inspired by him, I was determined to defeat it. Following his advice, I made progress gradually. （呼应主题）二、审题示范示范1：请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。（励志类 逆境）As a famous writer once put it, “Life is like a big pot, when you go to the bottom of it, as long as you are willing to go, each direction is upward.”审题提示：要抓住关键词，而且关键词语在文中要反复出现，如这里的关键词有：“life” “the bottom of life” the worst time in ones life; failure; difficulties; obstacles, etc. “be willing to go” dream; ambition; courage; confidence; perseverance; persistence; keep on doing; never give up; never lose heart; hard work; efforts; commitment; a strong will; determination; optimism; a positive attitude; Where there is a will, where there is a way. “each direction is upward” succeed; Ones efforts will pay off.Our life journey cant always be smooth, and we are bound to meet difficulties. Even at the worst time, as long as we have ambitious heart, we are sure to enjoy a happy and meaningful life.（提出观点） I still remember my toughest time when I came to senior school three years ago. Top student as I had been in junior school, I was horrified to find I was behind others in math however hard I tried. So pessimistic was I that I sank into desperation.（倒装句式） Fortunately my friend Xiao Ling noticed my depression and said: “Cheer up. Never give up.” Inspired by her words, I began to look at myself positively, which gave me the confidence to learn math. It was my positive attitude and upward desire that made me a happy and successful student again.（强调句式） I totally understand that as long as we are willing to do, all our efforts will pay off definitely some day. （结论）示范2：请根据以下提示，并结合自己的事例，用英语写一篇短文。Family tradition(家风) is a potentially invisible force influencing a childs mind and shaping a childs personality. （写文章之前先画出key words）Family is a warm harbor. Anytime, anywhere, we can turn to family for help and comfort while family is also the place where we get educated, have our mind influenced and have our personality shaped invisibly. (点题充分-Key words,变换句式, invisibly这个词也不能掉) Time flies. I still remember one thing which happened when I was in primary school.（根据自己的情况例子要生动具体）At that time our family was very poor. One day I found a lost wallet in school. On arriving home, I happily handed it to my father, hoping he would give me a kiss. “Why not turn it to your teacher?” My father said, scolding me seriously. Gradually I realized my mistake, determined to be an honest man. Also in my heart I suddenly realized how often my father helped our neighbors do farming work. As long as he was needed, he would try his best to help others. I wondered whether I should follow my fathers step and make a change. （这里的例子一定要有潜影默化的影子-呼应invisibly） From then on I did make a change. When my father helped others, I always joined him. He often told me stories about famous people and asked me to learn from them. In the process of my growth, my parents care, love, encouragement, and strict requirements are always accompanying me, influencing me and shaping me invisibly.（呈现关键词事例点题）Now, from my own experience, I understand we can never attach too much importance to family tradition.(表述重要性的金典套话) Family tradition is what brings out the best personality of you. （再次点题）It was my parents love that made me a happy boy. It was the family tradition that made me a successful man. When I have a child, Ill require my children to maintain our wonderful family tradition.（展望-有生活情趣-高分就是这产生的）三、最潮常用句子示范It is generally acknowledged that making mistakes is terrible, which is where I disagree. （发表观点）As far as I am concerned, making mistakes is what it takes to succeed. Mistakes, if not properly dealt with, may harm ourselves, but if wisely coped with, they will be a blessing to us.Mistakes are a double-edged sword. IfMany years of school life has taught me many things, the most important one of which （常用套话）is that we should learn from mistakes.Having gone through many ups and downs, I come to realize that it is of great benefit （多变句式）to learn from a bad experience.Bad experiences can not be avoided, but we should learn to get rid of all these frustrations and always be in the consistent faith that we will get what we deserve.（作faith的同从）Bad experiences are unavoidable; however, it is the attitude that we adopt （定从）that does make a difference. （强调句式）Frustrating as mistakes are, they can still become treasures as long as we have a positive attitude towards them.If it had not been for that fact that I tried my best to fulfill my dreams, I wouldnt have got what I had been longing for.With more attention paid to my studies, I made progress steadily.（with复合结构）Looking back on my school life, I was once cornered to a point where If my memory serves me well, there was a time whenI was fortunate to have such experiences, without which I wouldnt have built up my strength and character.（多变的句式）Problems are there to be faced and only through trial and error can we make some achievements.（倒装）I followed her advice and reviewed the mistakes I had made, ending up in success. （非谓）I paid a lot for the mistakes I had made.In the process of our growth, occasions are not rare when we are confronted with numerous obstacles and failures.It is our resolve to attempt to cope with them that contributes to our final success.Looking back, my own experience can serve as a case in point.（举例子的引导语）Time can never dim my memory about Hemingway. （举例子的引导语）. When it comes to this, memories come crowding in, swift as the tide. （举例子的引导语） Reviewing the history, tens of thousands of examples can be easily found to illustrate the viewpoint above. The case of Lin Shuhao can help us fully appreciate these words.Blessed with the capacity of attempting to achieve our goal, what we are supposed to do is to step forward and attempt. （套话）However rocky and twisted the way is and however tough our life is, as long as you attempt, you are worth a round of applause.（套话） Several years have witnessed my efforts to improve my math grades. It is clear that it was Hemingways spirits of being willing to attempt that lifted him above the crowd. . As a lecture master, Nick Vujicic, without limbs by birth, is the very person that I have been admiring. It is no exaggeration to say that making attempts is what it takes to succeed. Disabled as he is, he never sits around feeling sorry for himself, nor does he worry about his future. He has proved to the whole world that he can live as rich and full a life as a normal person. （多样句式） “Honesty is the cradle of success.” Im greatly enlightened by the quote.三、最潮话题作文示范NO.1：据下面句子所蕴含的信息，结合事例，发表观点，写一篇短文。Praise is a two-edge sword. When it comes to talking about “praise”, some people hold the idea that praise is necessary, for it will warm up ones heart, while others maintain the opposite view. There is always an argument on whether praise is actually good or not. （提出问题）As far as Im concerned, every coin has two sides. It has both advantages and disadvantages. As many people think, praise is a kind of encouragement. I remember that when I was in grade one, I met with much trouble in English study. It was my teachers praise that gave me power and confidence. When one has just made a little progress, praise may lead to a big success. However, any abuse of praise will do harm to the receiver. For example, one has succeeded in doing something small but he is too proud of himself. At this time, if you praised him again and again, he would feel he was the best one in the world and stop trying hard, thus making no progress later.（结合两方面的事例，呈现观点）To conclude, praise is necessary but it has a limit. So, think for a moment before you praise someone. Is it really good for the receiver？Sometimes praise makes good men better, and bad men worse. Please always remember praise is a two-edge sword. （得出结论，真诚呼吁）NO.2：（以貌取人） There is an old saying, “Never judge a book by its cover. ” What do you think of this saying? Write an article in120-140 words to express your opinion on it.A cover is to a book what appearance is to a person. Similarly, never should we judge a person by his appearance.（提出观点） The memory brings me back to the day when I was surfing the Internet, suddenly a picture caught my attention. A beggar in rags was donating all the money he had into the box. People nearby who witnessed this scene were all clapping their hands for his noble deed. A sense of amazement came from within and along with it came the respect to that beggar. He lived at the bottom of the society, but what he did was nobler than others who were in higher rank. As the saying goes: “Never judge a book by its cover”. (举例论证)So throw away your prejudice, thus making a more accurate judgment by its inner characteristic rather than by his appearance. （总结，呼吁）第二节：短文写作 (共1题，满分30分) 请根据下图的提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。Recently, “clear your plate” campaign is more and more popular in society, which advocates saving against wasting. （现象描绘）The campaign draws our attention to wasting on campus. （引入下段，引人思考）How time flies, but I cant forget what happened to me in the school canteen on the first day of this term(故事要编的真切实际) As is often the case with many other students Whats more, many a student spends much money buying junk food. (从身边的例子，再由小到大，简单阐明原因) In modern days more and more people get richer and richer and as they begin to live a happier life, they pay less attention to food-saving. Nobody worries about food and few can think of the people in hanger in the other parts of the world.(总结) In my eyes, its high time that we fought against wasting. Herere my suggestions.（解决建议） Firstly, I think our school should carry out various activities to arouse students awareness of saving. Secondly, relevant rules and regulations are supposed to be made to punish those who waste things. Most importantly, we should form the habit of saving from now. It is everybodys duty to save resources.（呼吁口号）请你根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。Life isnt about waiting for the storm to pass. It is about learning to dance in the rain.In our daily life, we are often confronted with difficulties, even great troubles. Some people do nothing but wait, while others face them bravely and conquer them. Personally, I think we should learn to face difficulties positively and make every effort to overcome them. （提出问题）My memory drew me back to four years ago when I was a junior middle school student. At that time, I had great trouble studying English. First of all, I felt it hard to memorize English words. Besides, I didnt dare to say anything in class when the teacher asked questions though I knew some answers. What annoyed me most was that I failed exams constantly. I was about to give up when my English teacher found problem. He encouraged me and gave me some good advice. Inspired by him, I was determined to defeat it. Following his advice, I made progress gradually.From my experience, I can draw a conclusion that difficulties are weak if you are brave enough. So keep up and try to defeat them whenever you have any. Never wait for the storm to pass; instead, learn to dance in the rain.四、话题知识积累（以下有些并非完整三段式作文，是一些好的话题句子罢了）作文3 (朋友)The substantial priceless treasures we own are our friends. They accompany us through thick and thin, comforting and encouraging us.Based on my own experience, it is just beyond calculation how significant friends are. Here is a story Im inclined to tell you to illustrate my viewpoint. There was a time when I cornered myself to a point where my dream was pale in comparison with reality, thus sinking into despair. It was my friends who told me to muster my courage up and give my passions another shot. I followed it and continued to try my utmost to achieve my goal, ending up in success.We are born to have close relations to people around us. Hence, without friends, our life is like a barren land where the flowers of happiness can never blossom.（也可以套用到别的话题） However, we can not dash at the number of friends thus ignoring the quality. That is to say, it is not wise to be devoted to fair-weather friends. It is the true friends that are really of supreme importance.（形式多样） Accompanied by friends, we have every reason to believe that we are bound to turn over a new leaf in life. （也可以套用到别的话题）竞争与合作请根据以下提示，并结合事例用英语写一篇短文。Many hands make light work. Cooperation is so important that we can never emphasize the importance of it too much. With the competition getting fiercer nowadays, cooperation, from my perspective, plays a more important role in our social life. Therefore, we cant overlook the significance of it. （提出观点）Looking around the world, we can easily find examples to illustrate the viewpoint above. Counted as the most successful IT companies in the world, Microsoft and IBM are both enemies and friends. At first, they just competed with each other to gain more market share, ending up suffering great loss. It was then that the CEOs of both companies realized the importance of cooperation. After that, IBM and Microsoft worked on software together, sharing both money and talents, thus making them stronger and step into a new era. （论据充分）As an old saying goes, “A single tree doesnt make a forest.” If you want to go fast, go with yourself, but if you want to go further, go with a group of people! Now that cooperation is of great benefit to us, why not learn to work together and embrace a brighter future? (结论与呼吁)关于“犯错”Mistakes, in my opinion, is a natural part of our life, which undoubtedly lays the foundation for success. Accordingly, its of critical significance to realize the importance of mistakes and make the best of them. （观点鲜明）Id like to share my own impressive experience with you. Lacking an informed attitude as well as practical skills, I always made numerous mistakes in my math exams, thus failing to face the marks. Through a long period of struggling, however, I calmed myself down and spared no efforts to analyze the cause of my failure. Only then did I realize that it was my carelessness and fear for failures that led to my disappointing math results. Confident and determined, I made several proper adjustments to my strategies with constant efforts. Eventually, I made it. From the experience, not only did I benefit from the correct attitude towards mistakes but also I decided to hold on to the extraordinarily precious attitude.A mistake is like a double-edged sword, if not properly dealt with, it will harm ourselves. But if wisely coped with, it will be a blessing to you. Therefore, cherish the mistakes, and a brilliant future is bound to wait for you.关于“友谊”The substantial priceless treasures we own are our friends. They accompany us through thick and thin, comforting and encouraging us.Based on my own experience, it is just beyond calculation how significant friends are. There was a time when I cornered myself to a point where my dream was pale in comparison with reality, thus sinking into despair. It was my friends who told me to muster my courage up and give my passions another shot. I followed it and continued to try my best to achieve my goal, ending up in success.In my eyes, without friends, our life is like a barren land where the flowers of happiness can never blossom. However, we can not dash at the number of friends thus ignoring the quality. That is to say, it is not wise to be devoted to fair-weather friends. It is the true friends that are really of supreme importance. Accompanied by friends, we have every reason to believe that we are bound to turn over a new leaf in life. Nowadays, more and more people, especially young people, enjoy doing volunteering work, which of course benefits others and makes out society harmonious.（定语从句） However volunteering can also benefit volunteers themselves.（提出观点）When I studied in junior middle school, I volunteered to accompany an old man in the nursing home for the elderly at weekend. The old mans only interest was to tell or listen to history stories. Unfortunately I happened to be the least interested in history and history was my poorest subject. In order to satisfy the old man, I began to study history very hard. Not only did I listen to my teacher attentively in class, but also I borrowed history books from the library and even studied history on the internet. Gradually I became fond of history and made great progress. Later, I even won the first place in a history knowledge competition. Ever since, history has been my best subject. （例子正中主题）My experience has convinced me that while helping others, we ourselves may also g