短文改错公开课ppt课件.ppt

ProofReading短文改错 生活中 人人都会犯错 有错就知改 写作中 人人也会犯错 有错也要改 1 Playagame Findthewrongwordsandcorrectthem bestrictatsbberesponsiblewithsb sthbeinbusinesshavesthoncommonhaveaneffectinsblosetheheartmakeagreatprogressthewarwasbrokeouttheaccidentwashappenedinthehurrysharesthforsbapairofshoealotofequipmentsgeneralspeakingassoonaspossibly withforoninon awithShoesequipmentGenerallypossible 2 Whatisproofreading 知短文改错则百战不殆 1 correctsomegrammarmistakes2 connectionbetweensentences3 themainideaofthewholepassage 3 设错方式 改错格式 多词缺词错词 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中共有10处错误 每句中最多有两处 错误涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改10处 多者 从第11处起 不计分 4 改错步骤 1 Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea 浏览全文 掌握大意 2 Readthepassagesentencebysentenceandfindthegrammarmistakes 分句阅读 逐行找错 3 Readthepassageagain checkyouranswers 检查核对 敲定终稿 5 Ioftendreamofateacher Idreamofstandingonthe platformintheclassroomandgivelessonstolovelyboys andgirls Iteachthem playwiththem butwatchthem growingup IamalwaysyoungwhenIwasstaying withthem Iknowthereisnoteasytobeateacher You havetolearninordertoteach Withoutenoughknowledges youcanneverlearnwell Whatismore youhavetobe friendswithyourpupilsandtakegoodcareofhim Onlyinthiswaycanyouareagoodteacherandwin respectfromthem ThoughIamastudentnow Iwillworkasveryhardtomakemydreamcometrue being giving and am it knowledge teach them be Homework Checkyouranswers 6 HowmanykindsofmistakesinthisProofReading 7 HowmanykindsofmistakesinthisProofReading ProofReading 动词 名词 冠词 代词 连词 介词 形容 副词 8 近5年全国新课标卷短文改错题考点一览表 9 小组合作 讨论学案中的突破考点内容 Discussingroups 3minutesQuickly 10 小试牛刀 1 2010全国 Ontheboxwasacardsay 25centseach 2 TheGreatWallofChinaisoneofthelargestconstructionprojectsevercomplete 3 2012全国 Iwinanationalprizeforpaintinglastweek 4 2013全国 TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles 5 Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs 6 Amongthepark streesthereareasciencehall anartcentre agym and saying won drunk completed hold is 一 动词 11 归纳总结 错误主要错在 时态 语态 主谓一致 动词短语 非谓语动词 todo doing done 12 小试牛刀 1 2010全国 Iftheyhadsaidwastrue Iwouldhaveachanceofwinningtheprize 2 13全国 Infact mygrandfatherevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme 3 IwillbeverygladwhetherIcanworkwithyou what when if if whether 如果条件状语从句 是否及物动词后的宾语从句且没有ornot 是否通常引导名词性从句 二 连词 13 小试牛刀 归纳总结 错误主要错在 并列连词和从属连词的漏用和错用 上下文逻辑关系理解错用 4 2011全国 IboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloorandthenIrealizedthatsomeonehadstolenit 5 Ireceivedmymother scalltellingmeshewouldcome butIhadtocanceltheappointmentswithyou and so 14 小试牛刀 1 2011全国 Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages 2 2014全国 WhenteagotpopularinBritain therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits 3 AfterlearningEnglishforseveralyears Ihavemadeagreatprogress 4 IfIchoosetotakeanextbus Iwouldhavetowaitforanother30minutes 5 Allinall Joeyisaveryspecialdogbecausehehasovercomeunpleasantstartinlife luggage cups the an 三 名词四 冠词 15 名词错误主要错在 单复数 可数与不可数 归纳总结 冠词错误主要错在 泛指与特指 a an the混用漏用和多用 16 小试牛刀 1 2012全国 MyfatherwassopleasingthathesuggestedIgotoEnglandforaholiday 2 2014全国 Thefruitsaresmallinsize butjuicyandtaste 3 2014全国 Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost 五 形容副词 pleased tasty 4 BeingamemberoftheStudents Unionmakesmecapableoforganizingvariousactivities However IamconvincedthatIcankeeptheclassorganizedandlively Therefore 5 Wegaveourthankstoourteacherswhohadbeeneducatinguspatient patiently wonderful 17 归纳总结 错误主要错在 词性错用 副词混用 原级 比较级最高级的混用 18 小试牛刀 1 2010全国 Beforeherleaving Ipreparedagifttoshowmybestwishestohim 2 Tomakemydreamcometrue IhavetoldmeoverandoveragainthatI llconcentratemoreonstudies 3 Everyyearmoreandmorepeoplestartastampcollectionofyourown 归纳总结 错误主要错在 六 代词 her myself 指代错误 人称代词和反身代词的误用 主格宾格 关系代词和连接代词 复合句 名词性 定语从句 their 19 小试牛刀 1 2011全国 LuckilyIhadallmymoneyonmypocket 2 2014全国 Nearlyfiveyearsagoandwiththehelpbyourfather mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoesinourbackgarden 归纳总结 错误主要错在 七 介词 in of 固定搭配 20 聚沙成塔 Summary 动词时态和语态主谓一致勿忘记还要注意非谓语名词多考单复数连词并列和从属上下逻辑要清楚形容副词看词性代词前后要一致介词搭配要记牢还有冠词a an the改完复查敲定稿 21 Attention 三不改 四原则 标点符号不改字母大小不改词语顺序不改 以保持句子原义为原则改动以最少为原则实词以改变词形为原则虚词以添加或删除为原则 22 Challengeyourself 23 1 MyfriendNicktoldmestoryabouthisexperiencebackintheUS whichwasveryinterested 2 IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou 3 Sincethen foralltheseyears wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease 4 TherewasUncleChen gentlemanlivingnearmyhouse whowasaverymuchfamouswriter 2010 2014全国卷 a buying has a interesting 24 5 However myfatherhadtoreturntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon 6 Forawhilemyparentsboughtmenewtoys Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhichwashappening 7 Howmanytimeshaveyouwalkedoutofaroomandleavethelightsortelevisionwhennooneelsewasthere flew left what 25 Mydreamschoolstartsat8 30a m andendsat3 30p m Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon Wedidn tneedtodosomanyhomework Therefore wehavemoretimewithafter schoolactivities Forexample wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings Wecanlieonthegrassforarest orsatbythelakelisteningmusic Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends 2014全国卷短文改错 There don t much for hours looks sit to helpful 固定句型 动词 介词 名词 动词 冠词 动词 动词短语 形容词 形容词 26 Whathaveyoulearnedtoday Summa