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1. Just as an old Chinese proverb says ：Aspire to inspire until I expire! 正如中国一句古老的谚语：生命不息，奋斗不止！2. Simple as the picture is, the meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.尽管图画很简单，但寓意很深刻苦。3. The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took effective measures to tackle this problem. 问题如此严重了，是时候采取有效的措施去解决这个问题了。4. It is imperative that laws and regulations be introduced and enforced to curb and harness this urgent problem.我们必须制定（work out）并执行一些法律法规（laws and regulations）来解决这些问题。5. In no country other than China, it has been said, is the problem of environment more serious. 在中国环境问题是最严重的。6. There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper. 报纸上有一张图画引起了人们广泛的关注。7. The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owning to the reform and opening-up policy being carried out, bringing some problems at the same time, with the following one being the foremost.8. 写作要点（1）内容：有话可说（万能理由P52，万能例子），避免跑题 (内容趋同,先字后图)PS:常考话题：1.成功品质（03 / 04 / 07 / 08 / 12 / 13） 2.环保类（99 / 00/ 11/旅游） 3.爱心和社会道德（01 / 05 /11） 4.文化交流（02 / 10） 5.科技传播（98 / 09） 6.偶像崇拜（06） 7.健康话题 （身心健康/宠物） 8.学校话题 （课程/教师/生活/就业13）（2）结构：分段 段落安排，永恒三段落，各短句子数量和字数推荐2-4, 4-9, 3-4 30-60,100-120, 30-60（3）语言： 句式复杂多变 用词多样P117 9. 作文三段分别要求：(1) 描述图画（ describe ）(2) 阐述寓意 （interpret ）(3) 评论、举例（comment，example）10. 第一段 第一句 万能开头句 6.7句第二句 图画描述句 KK三步法：先解读后描述 Step 1:确定中心对象在图中所在的位置（用完全倒装来描述） 系动词表达be exist lie run walk stand swim fly float 万能位置 in the middle ,in the picture/sunshine/darknessStep2:对中心对象的动作和状态进行描述（非谓语动词，非限定定语从句） PS:可以多个位置并列，也可以多个动作并列Step3:对中心对象周围事物，或中心对象的某一部分进行描述。（用独立主格进行描述） 配图文字：不处理 处理：（1）用谚语表达 （2）独立主格揉入上一句如with a line going like thisPS:如图所示 As is shown above图画描述练习：As is shown above, behind the Lost and Found counter sits an old lady, waiting for the owners of the lost article, with lost items put on the shelf behind her, among which are love, responsibility , sympathy, conscience and the like ,used to be valued by all of us.复数名词，among which are A,B,C，and the like (列举句型)名词：定语（a d j ,分词）As is shown above, in the river dangerously floats a paper boat, symbolizing moral training, containing some bread and fruit, which is symbolic of safety.symbolizing.Which is symbolic of As is shown above, in front of a football, representing unqualified products, stands a man, symbolizing the misleading ads, aiming to shoot the products to the customer, who is almost completely vulnerable.As is shown above, on the ground and in front of the basin kneels an adult man, putting his hands into the water and washing feet for his aged mother, who is smiling and looking at her dear Son, with a line gonging like this: love for mom starts with caring her feet.As is shown above, in the middle of the picture happily run a lot of youngsters, rushing to the donate box from all directions, trying to contributing their love to the people in the need of help.As is shown above, in the middle of the picture and on the road stand a group of people, hesitating to move on, intimidated by three big pits facing them, the fake commodities and medicines and the high price of healthcare.As is shown above, in the middle of the picture and on the computer screen stands a so-called famous and influence star, hawking a medicine, boasting its magic function and exaggerating that it can cure all diseases, with a caption reading that: celebrity endorsement.As is shown above, on the road helplessly, lies a little girl, knocked down by a running-away car, eagerly anticipating assistance from others, with a lot of people around her whose love and conscientiousness have lost ignoring her tragedy, wandering away ruthlessly.11. 第二段写作策略：段落展开： 科学论据法举例法 虚拟语气法科学论据法:积累一些组织机构的名字1., suggests a survey.2. according to the survey3. according to one of the latest surveys conducted by a certain international organization.例句：每年，北京市民花费在养狗上的费用价值1000000美元，可够日本人吃一年。According to the latest survey, money spent on pets in the city of Beijing is much as $100,000,000, which can feed all the Japanese in the world for a whole year.Money spent on sth is as much as.Money spent on sth has reached as much as Money earned/collected/raised is as much as.举例法1.,for example,.2.,for instance,.3.someone(个人信息) ,perfectly exemplifies(主题),I argueBarack Obama, US President, the excellent embodiment of American dreams, who went through unusual growth history, achieve his own glorious accomplishment and gained far-ranging support. Perfectly exemplifies the characteristic demonstrated aboveindependence, I argue.take sb (个人信息) for instance （P93）It is （主题） that helps sb achieve his glorious personal accomplishment and.(成就)4.各种举例的套话P58Our society,Our college life,3.虚拟语气法：对论点进行强调如果没有改革开放的政策，我们就没机会吃到麦当劳和肯德基。If there were no reform and opening-up policy, we would never taste the Mc Donald”s or the KFC.Were there no the Hope Project, those children never taste the precious knowledge.句型：were there no sth, sb would never do sth（通常用于正面主题）If the situation were to continue as it is, we would pay the high price.Our future generations would not bother to think of excuses for us. (负面主题)P4512. 写作练习:希望工程（P58）1. Our society has been filled with a variety of example of love, with the Hope Project being the foremost.我们当今社会与爱心相关的例子很多，希望工程是最有说服力的。2. In the west of China exists some families. Being so poor that hardly can they support their children”s education. 在中国西部有些家庭 ，他们是如此的贫困以至于无法资助他们的孩子上学。3. Pathetic as they are, people coming from all walks of life began to help them, which is so called Hope Project.4. 尽管他们很可怜，但来自各个行业的人们想他们伸出了援助之手，这就是所谓的希望工程。5. According to the latest survey, money collected annually has reached as much as about $ 10000000, which can help 3 million children finish their primary school. 根据一项调查，每年希望工程 募集到的资金价值，这些钱可以6. Were there no such precious help, those children would never taste the knowledge and live in the darkness forever.人如果没有这些帮助，那些孩子将永远无法得到宝贵的知识，永远生活在黑暗之中。13第三段写作策略评论：1. 正面话题：第一句：取其精华，去其糟粕。 第二句：如何面对 第三句：展望未来第一句：It is imperative that the essence be absorbed and the drawbacks be neglected，during this process, especially in the times of knowledge explosions, when the news, facts, opinions even rumors have been bombarding us from every corner of the word. (万能时间状语)第二句：In view of the complexity of such an issue, we must treat it socially, economically and culturally.第三句：Only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.People can enjoy.主体 can enjoy 对象 （根据文章而定）2. 负面话题第一句：背诵句3 （情况很紧急）第二句：句群（解决方案）1. 背诵句4（法律）2. 专家学者想办法：In this issue, researchers, scholar, and experts are expected to work out up-to-date solution to sth.3. 大众提升意识： For another thing, the general public is supposed to enhance their awareness that_ 第三句：展望未来：可以使用正面话题的句子 总结句 伴随着一个恰当的法律和警觉的民众，这个问题迟早可以被解决。 With a proper law and alert public, it will only be a matter of time before the problem becomes things of the past. 更多句子P5913. 写作练习：1. Being=seeming = remaining2. Symbolic meaning3. The past decade has witnessed a huge development in education owning to some policies being carried out, bringing some problems at the same time, with the above one being the foremost.可以使用指示性的词表达主体词（陌生的主体词）：代词，such ,one ,the one, the one mentioned above,According to a survey, the number of papers published in 2009 is 10 times as much as that of 1999, with the students” abilities remaining still.Our universities have been filled with a variety of examples of the phenomenon mentioned above, with the following one been the foremost.You will get one of frequent answers-to find our professor, when asking any student of a university to list some difficult things happened in campus life.4. As is shown above, on the playground runs a young man, rushing to the final of the full mark of major courses, such as., and so forth, neglecting the importance of morality and it like.Tired as he is, he has to continue his running as his parents wishes.And its like 等等 Nowadays， the college has been filed with a variety of examples of such things, with Majiajue being the foremost. 同时，多用指示性代词，增加句子间的关联性5. 举例的时候可以只举例不展开 14. 考研作文题材：议论文第一段：引入第一段， 结构的重新搭建第一句：图画描述句：As is shown above,第二句：万能开头句（图画描述不充分时）There has been a heated discussion about this picture in the newspaper recently. （注意句子间的关联） 第三句：总结句第二段：论述第二段， 重新搭建结构第一句：提出观点（主体很重要，主题很有害）P51第二句：强调观点（换个表达，具体）P55第三句: 表明公众态度（重视、不重视）P52第四句：强调态度第五句：句群，展开P52(1) 平行展开法(2) 举例法(3) 科学论据法 最后一句：结尾句（虚拟语句法，利弊句型） 第二段第一句：(1) The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with +重要主题 (2) The picture does reveal that 有害主题 is not only harmful, but also damaging+状语 第二句：也可以使用5,7 有害主题：(1) The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owning to some policy being carried out, bringing some problems at the same time, with the above one being the foremost.(2) In no country other than China, it has been said that, is the problem mentioned above more serious. 重要主题：（1）The past decade has witnessed many great changes in China, with the above one in the most far-reaching. （2）In no country other than China, it has been said, is this phenomenon more obvious. 第三句：Whats more, the public fails to attach due attention to(有害主题) Whats more, the public attaches due attention to(重要主题) 科学论据法的扩展：(媒体) China Daily, interviewed four people from four professionsa surgeon, a lawyer, a civil servant and a steelwork. The survey discovers that al of them are of the idea that 主题很重要 According to the survey conducted by China Academy of Social Science.( CASS) 定语从句和比较级的结合： 追星的孩子更容易浪费时间， 自信的人更易成功 合作的人更能建立事业 Those who 动词（主题相关） are more likely to + 动词（11方向的动词）， compared with who do ( are) not. 对于，平行展开法的提升：1. More than （肯定）这不只是一个挑战。 This is more than a challenge.互联网不只是能提供及时，具体，准确和生动的信息，它还是一种有启发意义的娱乐方式；The World Wide Web is more than a form to get up-to-date, concrete and accurate and vivid information, but an instructive mode of entertainment as well.2. Far from being (否定)这远不是一个挑战It is far from being a challenge3. 中国远不是一个世界的领导者。China is still far from being a world economic leading nation.Country to a popular assumption , China is still far from being a world economic leading nation.Contrary to a common belief, with our sustainable development facing many drastic threats, environmental preservation should have priority over economic growth.4. 双重否定的使用It is not unrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any job.背诵句These days, it is not uncommon that many graduates will elect being a civil servant as their top choice when hunting a job for many clear advantages (e.g., secured position, stable income or better social welfare).Not surprisingly, students who are under constant stress in their studies may suffer from psychological problems or even commit crimes.5. Anything but (否定)Nothing but （肯定）6. Be 动词被替换 Internet is form of entertainment.Internet is well received as a form of entertainmentInternet is well received as an instructive form of entertainment.Internet has been well received as an instructive form of entertainment.be= have been well received as well considered as well deemed as well regarded as文艺复兴：Rinascimento Renaissance Leonardo Da Vinci7. Not the least (最高级)Not the least of the factors that make for success in any field of endeavor is.8. 并列动词的使用Physical exercise can shield us from damaging effects brought by sedentary lifestyle, and stressful working conditions and prevent us from collapsing in front of a screen every night.9. Do A, doing B and thus doing C （现在分词连接）With the confidence, we can accumulate wealth, establishing our career and thus fitting into society.10. Not only but alsoNot only will they accumulate their wealth, but they also will fit into the society.11. Not only A, but also B, and such benefits(problem) as C and D. P5212. In terms ofThe world will be changing constantly in terms of technology and the internet is key to all the knowledge and information available in the world today.(主题) will give them an advantage in terms of copying with the challenges of student life.13. Admittedly.Nevertheless.Admittedly, as a source of entertainment, advertisements are very popular among children. Nevertheless, they may give young viewers some misleading impression.14. While/whereasWhile some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships.15. Even thoughThe cost of traveling, even though it is at present increasing due to an economic slow-down globally, is still relatively affordable to many people.16. Sth is not restricted to., but is also evident amongThe benefits of being independent are not restricted to improving ones energy, enthusiasm and charm.17. be itorThe road to the victory may not be so long as we expected, but we have no right to count upon this. Be it long or short, rough or smooth, we mean to reach our journeys end.(by Churchill)Traveling can not only enhance your understanding of different customs but also rid of many damaging effects brought by sedentary life style, be it physical diseases or lake of mental courage.18. 状语结尾Traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways.Time should be cherished by everyone, especially in the times of knowledge explosion. 17. 状语前置 To do this To become successful By doing soObviouslyIn many waysIn some casesUnfortunatelySurelySpecifically19. 进一步解释Put it another way, to put it mildly, to put it strong-that is to say In other words, which means., which suggests that Which is best characterized that With the underlying assumption that第三段： 举例的写法1. 如果题干要求举例，就一定要举例2. 可以举例子不展开，也可以举例+ 评论Numerous cases exist to illustrate this point. Take sb for example, but for 主题， sb could not have done sth, let alone dong sth. Take sb for example ,without 主题，how can sb do sth? Without 主题，how . (重复) P80图表作文第一段：引入图表 第二段：论述图表第三段：呼应 正面 负面第一段：写作策略第一句：万能开头句：点出图标的来源Chart given by a certain company a certain organization第二句：图表描述句 图表：柱状图 bar chart 饼状图 pie chart 线形图 line chart 表格 statistics , table chart, chart一、 静态图A makes up 34%, 51% stands for B, 9% refers to C, 6% is defined as DThe total.is divided into four parts, with A and B making up % and % respectively.X % of 主题 is caused by A and B, constituting Y% and Z% respectively.二、 动态图 1+1 点出变化，具体描述看标题：定主题看纵轴：定主语看横轴：找变化The past decade (2005-2013) has witnessed a great change that private car is playing an increasingly important role in peoples means of transportation.As is shown above, the number of.decreased, while the number of .increased rapidly.补充一些表示变化的词上升：surge，climb to , rise, skyrocket, jump to, a steady rise, a