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应试策略1、 扣题2、 观点明朗3、 结构合理（分三段，每段以总-分-总形式）（1） Topic sentence(主题）（2） 论点（分论点）（3） Conclusion（总结）4、 不要标新立异5、 语言使用 1、中式英语（1）Failure is the mother of success（2）Success always goes behind failure（3）There is bamboo in ones heart（4）One has a well-thought-out plan2、词性乱用（1）As we all know , no one can always success in ones daily life and work Succeed vi （2）I have some difficult in sleeping at night nowadays Difficulty n （3）You dont play the game like I do As（4）Its such small that you cannot see it So3、时序错乱（1）They come always late to school Always come, be Eg：Ever ,never seldom soon sometimes almost scacely ,hardly ,nearly ,even （2）I should have not gone there Should not have Eg：Never , seldom ,rarely ,neither ,nor not only ,nosooner ,hardly（3）Never I have heard of such a thing Never have I 4、词的累赘（1）I first began to feel sick when we went into the classroom（2）In this modern world of today ,people like being dressed well（3）I cannot hardly read his letter because of his illegible handwriting5、成分不足(1)However.I think not necessary to worry about failure(2)I dont think it is necessary to worry about failure(3)I dont think it necessary to worry about failure6、代词的指示关系含糊（1）She told my sister that she was wrong（2）Im wrong”she said to my sister7、缺少逻辑主语（1）To get up early , the clock was set at six（2）To get up early,he set the clock at six8、缺少修饰语（1）we have many well-known scientists at home and abroad（2）We have many scientists well-known at home and abroad（3）The Japanese mountaineer sent us the full story of his rescue from Tibet（4）From Tibet the Japanese mountaineer sent us the full story of his rescue六、句子生动1、使用等立分句（相当于中文排比句）（1）As he is a hero,I honour him ; as he is a coward ,I sneak at him（2）A man is judged not only by what he says but also by what he doesEg：And , not only . but also , either or neither .nor both .and2、 使用从句（1）John is a new student. He comes from a southern province.He speaks a dialect . We find it to understand his dialect John ,a new studentfrom a southern province,speak a dialect which is difficult for us to understand（2）While waiting for the meeting to begin.they talked about each other. They talked about the womans volleyball team. The team had won victories in Tokyo While waiting for the meeting to begin,they talked about the victories won by the womens volleyball team in Tokyo3、 使用成语（1）through thick and thin（2）To set a thief to catch a thief（3）To come up smiling（4）To come down in the world（5）To get to the bottom of（6）Butterflies in ones stomach4、使用比喻性语句（1）as thin as as a water（2）As thick as hail（3）As white as a sheet（4)As thick as a thieves (5)As lively as a grig5、 使用反义词（1）Art is long ,but life is short（2）Win this point ,or the game is lost (3) no pain，no gain Self help is the best help 二 段落Paragraph1 topic sentence2development sentence3 concluding sentenceTopic (sentence) My brother is studying accounting.He enrolled in a business school last June and passed all of his course in the first semester with ease.He is taking international accounting now , and he will take two more courses in accounting next year2development ,(sentence)At school students need to increase their knowledge in an organized way .1They should acquire sufficient vocabulary in science for effective communication and learn something important in everyday life , such as knowledge that is useful for his health , for his safety , and for an understanding of his surrounding3结尾句 （ concluding sentence）Doctors can now examine babies before they are born,this is done with an instrument which allows doctors to see a baby while it is still in the mother. Such examinations before birth may eventually decrease the number of children who die in their first year of life段落的特征段落的整体性（unity）连贯性 Make our cities greener1绿化的现状2绿化的好处（3如何实现绿化In some large cities , sometimes you will find that there are few trees and there is little glass. People usually walkin the sun along the street . There are a lot of tall buildings but with few trees around . The air in the cities is often dirty . If you fly in an airplane over these cities , you will find they are greyWell,if there are more trees and grass and flowers,what will happen?First,the air will be cleaner,and with the sweet smell of flowers and leaves .And the cities will be more beautiful. The whole city will be beautiful, thewhole city will be full of parks and gardens.The cities will throw off their grey coats and put on green ones.whats more to make cities greener is also to better the climate, and owing to this ,birds will come back ,we can hear them singing againIn order to make our cities greener,we should plant more trees , more grass ,more flowers .but what is more important is to look after the newly planted trees, which need our care and help. We should give them enough water and food . we should prevent them from being hurt by naughty children. If we can keep on doing these, we will have more and more green cities段落的连贯性 coherence段落的长短Television presents a vivid world in front of us.with it ,we can see the news ,play ,film and sports ,etc.Television in our time serves as a very enjoyable entertainment for us . Television can also play an educational role in our daily life . besides regular courses for thestudents who study courses on TV.we can also watch various educational programmes .Among them E nglish on Sundayis my favorite. However, television can also be harmful.It will hurt one