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主题写作 (一)人物故事篇话题分析人物故事类书面表达一般针对考生熟悉的著名人物或者同学、朋友来设题，要求考生对人物进行描写。主要涉及描写人物的简历、变化以及自己对此人物的看法等。此类试题通常以要点提示或者表格提示的方式来考查。常用表达1My friend Jenny comes from New York. 2She has a round face and often wears a pair of glasses. 3He often helps his classmates with the homework, and also helps the people in trouble. 4I want to be a person like Helen from now and get along well with everyone. 5I miss so many good friends, especially my best friendDavid. 6He is a 15-year-old student, who is outgoing. 7He is good at playing basketball. 8I hope that he will become a famous person in the future and we can keep in touch with each other. 典型例题在初中三年的英语学习中，Daniel的善良和助人为乐等优秀品质给同学们留下了深刻的印象。请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇题为“My Friend Daniel”的短文。注意：1. 词数：80词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；2. 文章必须包含表格所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。Daniel Appearance Likes Dislikes sports Personality helpfulhelp the old cross the road kindwork at the Helping Hands Club creativecreate a TV program What can you learn from him？My Friend Daniel My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He _【审题思路】1找出关键点：外貌、爱好、性格特征；2列出提纲。从以上三个方面简单列出提纲；3明确时态：主要使用一般现在时；4确定人称：第三人称。【写作模板】【佳作赏析】 My Friend Daniel My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He has a round face and often wears a pair of glasses (结合要点：描写图片中人物的长相). He is good at playing computer games (结合要点：写擅长玩电脑游戏), but(转折词的使用，使行文跌宕起伏) he dislikes sports. He has many good personalities. He is helpful (结合要点：写乐于助人). He often(频度副词的使用，使文章流畅自然) helps his classmates with the homework, and also(副词的使用，使文章过渡自然) helps the old cross the road. He is kind to others (结合要点：写对人友善). He works at the Helping Hands Club. He is willing to help the people in need. He is also creative (结合要点：写有创造性). For example(举例说明，使文章生动), he can create a TV program. He is generous to his friends (结合要点：适当展开). He likes to share his things with them. So (so一词引出作者学到的内容) I want to be a person like Daniel from now and get along well with everyone. 挑战自我 亲爱的同学，你即将初中毕业了。在这三年的学习生活中，你一定结交了许多好朋友，请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下你的好朋友Li Lei。要点如下：1他乐于助人，性格外向，兴趣广泛；2他成绩优秀，经常在学习上帮助我；3我准备送他一个以表达感谢；4我对他的祝福和希望。注意：1词数80100；开头已写好，不计入总词数；2短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friendLi Lei.He is a 15-year-old student, who is outgoing. He is always willing to help others. He has lots of interests such as swimming, reading and drawing. He is good at all the subjects and he often helps me with my lessons so that I can keep up with my classmates. We are going to leave school. Ill send him a pen to thank him for helping me so much. I hope that he will become a famous person in the future. And we can keep in touch with each other. 主题写作 (二)健康生活篇话题分析命题者经常在考生熟悉的健康生活问题上进行设题，试题主要涉及健康问题、饮食习惯、食品安全等。此类试题主要以要点提示或者表格提示的方式来查。常用表达1Many young people like eating junk food very much. 2Here is some advice on how to keep healthy. 3We must have healthy food rather than junk food. 4Though junk food is delicious, I prefer traditional Chinese food. 5To keep healthy, we should eat less junk food.6Its a good idea to have more healthy food like fruit and vegetables. 典型例题近来，中小学生的健康问题日益引起人们的关注。请用英语就该问题谈谈你的看法。内容包括：1. 列举中小学生面临的健康问题。2谈谈怎样才能保持健康。注意：词数：6080词【审题思路】1谋篇布局：根据试题的内容要点提示可以将文章分为两部分，一部分写“中小学生面临的健康问题”，另一部分写自己对“怎样才能保持健康”的一些看法。2时态：一般现在时 3人称：第三人称(列举健康问题)；第一人称(表达自己的观点) 【写作模板】【佳作赏析】 Many students like eating junk food very much (结合要点：写中学生面临的饮食健康问题). They have poor eyesight (结合要点：写中学生面临的身体健康问题) because they dont have the right way to read (because引导的原因状语从句). And (连接词，使之与上文连贯) they often play computer games for several hours (结合要点：写中学生面临的娱乐健康问题) Here are some suggestions (here引导的倒装句) on how to keep healthy (“疑问词动词不定式”作宾语) in our life. We must have healthy food, rather than junk food. Reading in a right way (动名词短语作主语) is good for our eyesight. We should stay away from computer games. If we can do these things (if引导的条件状语从句), I think(结合要点：明确提出观点) we will keep fit.挑战自我健康生活关系到青少年的成长。最近，你们班就KFC(肯德基)食品的优缺点进行了讨论。请你根据下表提示简要描述同学们的看法，并发表自己的观点。优点(advantages) 缺点(disadvantages) 学生的看法美味时尚体验西餐太贵不安全垃圾食品你的观点 要求：1可适当发挥，但必须包含表格所提供的信息；2词数：80100(短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)。Recently, our class held a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of KFC._One possible version: Recently, our class held a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of KFC. Here are the results of it. On one hand, KFC has its advantages. Its delicious and eating in KFC is a kind of fashion. Its also a good way to experience western food. On the other hand, KFC also has its disadvantages. Most food in KFC is junk food, which is bad for our health. Besides, the food may not be safe because its not fresh. Whats more, the food in KFC is usually very expensive.Though KFC is delicious, I prefer traditional Chinese food which is more delicious. To keep healthy, we should eat less junk food. Its a good idea to have more healthy food like vegetables and fruit, just as the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.主题写作 (三)计划愿望篇话题分析对未来的计划和设想进行设题时，要求考生对题目中涉及的计划或打算进行描述，同时表达自己的愿望及计划实施的效果等。此类试题主要考查考生用一般将来时描述行动或计划的能力。常用表达1The summer/winter holiday is coming. 2Im going to have a good rest and relax myself. 3Im sure Ill have an interesting and meaningful holiday.4If possible, Id like to go to Beijing for a visit of the Great Wall. 5We are going to meet at the school gate at 7：00 on Sunday morning. 6I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. 7I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. 8I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge.典型例题紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了，你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请根据下面方框内的提示写一篇短文，谈谈你的假期计划。暑假计划1.好好休息，学会放松2.读书，因为读书既有趣又能学到很多知识3.陪父母聊天，帮他们做家务4.参加社会活动，了解社会5. 注意：1词数：80100；2方框内容不必逐字翻译，可适当发挥。参考词汇：knowledge知识，social activities社会活动【审题思路】1分析题干：由试题的要求可得知对暑假计划的描写要点：休息、学习、活动以及自己的适当发挥部分；2时态：一般将来时；3人称：第一人称。【写作模板】【佳作赏析】 The summer holiday is coming (现在进行时态表示将来). Im going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself (结合要点：描写好好休息，学会放松). I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge (because引导的原因状语从句中动名词作主语). I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework (结合要点：写陪父母聊天，帮他们做家务). I am going to take part in the social activities (结合要点：描写参加社会活动) so that (so that引导的目的状语从句) I can know more about the society. If possible, Id like to go to Beijing for a visit of the Great Wall (适当发挥拓展). Im sure Ill have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.挑战自我 初三毕业在即，你班将组织一次课外活动。假如你是班长，请根据提示内容，用英文写一篇80词左右的活动计划。内容要点：1下周日早上8点在校门口集合，下午2点返回；2坐公交车前往寸金公园 (Cunjin Park)；3唱歌、跳舞、野餐、与老师合影；4带齐食物、饮料等；5注意安全和防火。要求：1包含所给要点，可适当发挥；2不要逐词翻译，词数80左右。(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。)参考词汇：at the school gate (在学校门口)；activity(活动); keep away from fire (远离火)Our class is going to have a picnic in Cunjin Park next Sunday _One possible version: Our class is going to have a picnic in Cunjin Park next Sunday. We are going to meet at the school gate at 8：00 am. on Sunday morning. And we will be back at 2：00 pm. We plan to take a bus to Cunjin Park. We will have many activities there, such as singing, dancing, having a picnic and taking photos with our teachers. Im sure we will have a lot of fun. I will ask my classmates to take plenty of food and drink. We should pay attention to the safety. And we must keep away from fire all the time.主题写作 (四)假日、旅行篇 话题分析该主题命题主要涉及节日习俗、节假日活动、旅游景点、旅游线路以及写游览日记等。此类试题主要利用要点提示的方式来考查。常用表达1Its a good idea to go traveling during the summer vacation.2I think the best place to visit is the Great Wall.3We can see many ancient buildings, including palaces, temples and towers in Xian.4Youd better go with your friends or family.5I am going to travel to London with my parents after the final exam.6Well be away for about seven days.7I hope that you can provide me with some information about the customs of France.8I would like to travel to some exciting places this summer holiday.典型例题 旅游可以让人身心放松，增长见识初中毕业在即，很多同学想利用暑假去旅游。请你根据下面的内容提示，写一篇短文，通过你校英语论坛，向大家推荐一个好去处，并给出旅行建议。内容提示：1Where is the best place to go?2What is the place special for?3What should you pay attention to?要求：1.中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；280词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Its a good idea to go traveling during the summer vacation. I think the best place to visit is _【审题思路】1主旨：旅游的益处；2要点：(1)可以去的最好的地方；(2)这个地方的特殊之处；(3)旅游的注意事项；3时态：一般现在时；4人称：第一人称。 【写作模板】【佳作赏析】 Its a good idea to go traveling during the summer vacation. I think the best place to visit is the Palace Museum(结合要点：点明旅游的最好的地方). As_we_all_know (非限制性定语从句，高级用法), the Palace Museum, also known as the Purple Forbidden City, is_wonderful and famous_for (be famous for“因而著名，增加了文章的亮点) its long history in the world. We can see a lot of ancient buildings, including palaces, temples and towers (结合要点：描述其特殊的地方). If_we_want_to_visit_the_Palace_Museum_(条件状语从句，用一般现在时表示将来), we should pay_attention_to (pay attention to“注意”，高级短语) our safety. We_had_better (had better“最好”，后跟动词原形，增强了语言表达能力) go with our friends or our family(结合要点：提出合理的建议). 挑战自我假如你叫李华，是某中学初三学生。你计划于毕业考试后去英格兰旅行。请根据下列提示给你的英格兰笔友写一封信，告诉他你的安排并就相关问题向他询问。1考试结束后和父母一起去英格兰旅行；2计划在英格兰停留十天；3向他询问英格兰的风俗习惯；4请他建议去英格兰哪些地方旅行。注意：1信的开头和结尾已替你写好，不计入总词数；260词左右。Dear Ben，How is everything? _ I am looking forward to your reply.Yours truly，Li Hua One possible version: Dear Ben，How is everything? I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam. Well stay there for about ten days. But I dont know much about it. I hope that you can provide me with some information about the customs of England. I would like to travel to exciting places in England. Please introduce some interesting places to me.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours truly，Li Hua主题写作 (五)快乐成长篇 话题分析成长方面的设题经常是要求考生针对成长过程中可能遇到的问题进行简要描述，提出自己的观点、建议等。主要涉及如何释放学习压力、调节情绪，如何处理同学关系等。此类试题通常以要点提示的方式来考查。常用表达1Molly is an easygoing girl who gets along well with everyone. 2We should put more time and energy into study and try to be a student with both a kind heart and good grades. 3We all want to grow happily and healthily, so we have to do some things.4Life is not always full of sunshine. When we are in trouble, we should be brave enough to deal with problems. 5The more knowledge you have, the more confidence you will have. 典型例题 对学生综合素质评价的方式多种多样，同伴互评是其中较为有效的方式之一。某班一个小组正在进行阶段性同伴互评活动，如果你是该组组长，请结合本组讨论情况，为本组某位同学写一份激励性评价报告，内容须包含以下要点：the skill/the advantage/the personal quality the student hasone thing the student didsome advice for the student要求：词数80词左右。【审题思路】要点：本文的主题是为同学写一份“激励性评价报告”。文章有三个要点：(1) 同学的情况；(2) 同学所做的一件事情；(3) 给同学的建议。时态：一般现在时人称：第三人称【写作模板】【佳作赏析】 Han Mei is an easygoing girl who gets along well with everyone (定语从句). She is also talented_in (be talented in“有的天赋”，高级词汇) performing. Whats the most important, she is warmhearted (结合要点：写同学的情况). Once she knew a girl in her neighborhood who had so serious an illness that_a_large_amount_of_money_was_needed. (that引导结果状语从句) She called on all the kids to give away pocket money to the unlucky girl. Besides, she organized a charity show to raise more money (结合要点：描写同学的所做的事情).When_the_girl_and_her_parents_got_the_money_(时间状语从句), they were really moved.Han Mei should also put more time and energy into study and try to be a student with both a kind heart and good grades(结合要点：提出建议). 挑战自我假如你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“快乐成长”的英语演讲比赛。请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括：1.保持快乐的心情；2.努力学习；3.积极参加体育锻炼。注意：1词数80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。2可以适当发挥想象，以使行文连贯。Dear friends, we all want to grow happily and healthily, so we have to do some things. _ One possible version：Dear friends, we all want to grow happily and healthily, so we have to do some things.First, we should keep ourselves happy. Life is not always full of sunshine. When we are in trouble, we should be brave enough to deal with problems. Next, we must study hard. The more knowledge we have, the more confidence we will have. Finally, we have to do sports to keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or take a walk after a days study. If we do those things well, we will grow happily and healthily. 主题写作 (六)语言学习篇 话题分析 命题者通常列举语言学习过程中出现的某一现象，要求考生针对该现象进行描述，并提出合理的建议并阐述自己的观点。主要涉及教学方式的变化、课堂学习方式、英语学习方法等。此类试题多以要点提示的方式来考查。常用表达1I enjoy learning English, but I am not good at it. 2It is hard for me to understand other people when they talk. 3I find English grammar is very hard to learn. 4Could you please tell me how to improve my spoken English? 5In English class, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary. 6We should take part in all kinds of activities, such as reading, writing, having discussions and playing games. 7Its very important to be confident when you learn a foreign language. 8I think that doing lots of listening, speaking, reading and writing practice is the secret of becoming a good language learner. 典型例题假如你是韩梅，对英语很感兴趣，但不知如何提高英语听、说、读、写的能力，语法对你来说也是一大难题。因此，你打算给你远在加拿大的笔友Kate发一封电子邮件，谈谈这些问题。注意：1. 词数：80词左右；2文中不能出现真实的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息，否则不予评分；3邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Kate，Im writing to you for some questions about learning English._I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours, Han Mei 【审题思路】1找准关键点：英语学习的兴趣，面临的困难；希望得到建议。2写作方式：邮件3时态：一般现在时 4人称：第一人称和第二人称 【写作模板】【佳作赏析】 Dear Kate， Im writing to you for some questions about learning English. I enjoy_learning_(enjoy doing的用法) English, but_(转折词的使用，流畅自然) I dont do well in it (结合要点：写学习英语很棘手). It isnt easy for me to understand other people when they talk. So_(连词的使用，过渡自然) I feel worried._I_think_(引出个人的看法) that doing lots of listening, speaking, reading and writing practice (动名词作主语) is the secret of becoming a good language learner (结合要点：写成为好的语言学习者的秘诀). Another thing that I find very hard (that引导的定语从句) is English grammar (结合要点：写出了英语语法很难). However(副词的使用，自然连贯), it is very necessary for me. Could you please tell me how you learn English in Canada (结合要点：提出问题)? Are you the same as we Chinese students? I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours, Han Mei 挑战自我回想三年的英语学习历程，丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下了许多难忘的回忆。请你以“What should we do in English class？”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做，才能使英语学习更有效。提示：1.Listen to the teacher. 2Take part in activities. 3Be confident in ourselves.要求：1.须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2词数：6080词。参考词汇：take notes, work in groups with， not be afraid of What should we do in English class? In English class, we should_One possible version: What should we do in English class?In English class, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary. Try to answer questions in English. We should take part in all kinds of activities, like reading, writing, having discussions and playing games. We need to work in groups with our classmates to help each other and learn from each other. Its very important to be confident. Speak English loudly in front of the class and never be afraid of making mistakes. In this way, we can make much progress. 主题写作 (七)环境保护篇 话题分析与环保相关的书面表达通常是先列举环境中出现的某一现象，要求考生先就该现象进行描述，然后提出建议，最后阐述自己的观点。主要涉及低碳生活、节约资源、保护环境等。此类试题通常以要点提示的方式来考查。常用表达1Its important for us to live a lowcarbon life to protect the environment. 2The environmental pollution is more and more serious today. 3Peoples health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. 4In order to live a better life, its time for us to protect our world.5We should recycle, reduce and reuse things, for this saves money and reduces pollution.6I think saving paper is necessary, so I often make full use of paper. 7I hope our world will be more and more beautiful. 典型例题节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起。Li Ming 是一个注重“低碳生活”的中学生，假设你是他，请以“My Low-carbon Life”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。要点：1每天步行上学； 2离开教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；3不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环使用水；4不使用塑料袋； 5充分使用纸张。参考词汇：on foot, turn off, tap, reuse, make full use of, plastic bag 【审题思路】1明确主旨：节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起；2写作要点：见提示点15；3时态：一般现在时；4人称：第一人称。【写作模板】【佳作赏析】 My Low-carbon LifeMy name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I go to school on foot every day(结合要点：说明每天步行上学). I always_(副词的使用使行文流畅) remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans when_I_leave_the_classroom_(when引导的时间状语从句). When I am not using water, I always turn off the tap (结合要点：描写关掉水龙头). I often_(副词的使用使行文流畅自然) reuse water, for example, when I finish washing the clothes, I use the water to clean the floor(结合要点：适当发挥). I never use plastic bags (结合要点：描写不使用塑料袋). I think saving paper is necessary, so_(so的使用使文章过渡自然) I often make full use of paper (结合要点：描写充分利用纸张). Its important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment (it作形式主语，动词不定式为真正主语). 挑战自我环境问题影响着