2011年-2016全国卷改错及答案

精品文档2011年（全国卷I）One of my unforgettable memory of my school inXinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes.I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going toschool. The smell from it was very good. Since the lunchbell finally rang, my friends and me met under a tall treeand had our lunches. My best friend Aigulie was usedto share her Nang with me. Nang is a specially kind ofcake in Xinjiang. I like them very much. NowAigulie andI study at different colleges or we can only see each otherduring the summer vacation. I think over her a lot and I missthe food and the good time we had together.2011年（全国卷II）Dear George,Its been a week after we left your family and we are now back home. Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C. ,that we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day. However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It was really a nice experience. If youd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. Yours, Mike2012年（全国卷I）Every one of us can make a great efforts to cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only when we have a real need. That wont easy, I know，but we have to start anywhere. Whats more, we can go to work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy smaller cars that burn less oil. Other way is to watch our everyday use of water and electric at home. For example, how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the lights or television when no one else was there? 2012年（全国卷II）Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you opinion about water saving. Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live without water and neither agriculture or industry can go without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. Many countries in the world find we dont have enough water. To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no drinking water should left running. Third, we should find ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.Sincerely, Li Hua2013年新课标1I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. 2013年 (全国一卷）My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.2014年 (全国一卷） Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then-for all these year-we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost! 2014年 (全国二卷）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lesson in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.（2015全国一卷）When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, well live to regret it.（2015全国二卷）One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.2016全国卷一 My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.2016全国卷二The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot. 2011年（全国卷I）76.把memory改为memories。77.在lunches前面加the。78.把hold改为held。79. 把Since改为When/After。80.me改为I 81. 把was去掉。82. 把specially改为special。83. 把them改为it。84. 把or改为and。85. 把over改为of。2011年（全国卷II）76. after-since 77.them-us 78. for-with 79. That改为Where 80.去掉 much 81.staying-stay 82.day-days 83.fly-flew 84.trip 前 a 85.better-more2012年（全国卷I）1. efforts改为effort 2.off改为down 3.把to删掉4. wont be 5. anywhere-somewhere 6. andor 7. Other-Another 8. electricelectricity 9.and改为but 10 television后加on2012年（全国卷II）76.you后加my 77.animal-animals 78.or-nor 79.seemed-seems 80.we-they 81.a-the/this/that 82.though-because/since/as 83. left 改为be left 84.using-used 85.去掉for2013年新课标11.hold改为hold 2.passes改为passed 3.much改为well/clearly 4.shoulder改为shoulders 5.toward改为to/into 6.himself改为him 7. he was改为and he was 8.去a 9.during改为when 10.never改为ever2013年新课标2 1.去of 2.Have改为Having 3.that改为which 4.becomes改为became 5. of day改为of the day 6. Interesting 改为Interestingly 7.by改为with/to 8.drank改为drunk 9. good cup改为good cups 10. grow改为growth2013年 (全国一卷）1.visit改为visited 2.but改为and/so 3. comfortably 改为comfortable 4.were改为was 5.for改为with 6.forwith 7takingtaken take 8dishdishes 9such后加a such 10memine 2013年 (全国二卷）1.before改成 ago; 2. for去掉； 3.Unfortunate改为Unfortunately 4. week 改为weeks； 5.so改为but；6.will改为would；7.myself改为me 8.farther改为far; 9.interested改为interesting; 10.truth前面加the2014年 (全国一卷）2014年 (全国二卷）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lesson There in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. dont much Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day. hoursMy dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers looksand trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the sitlake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our to helpful teachers but also our friends. （2015全国一卷）When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living thought in a city, but I miss my home incountryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. the and Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots withof studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs serious air we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to Many find protect your environment. If we fail to do so, well live to regret it. our/the （2015全国二卷）. 71. parent改为parents 72. on改为in 73. very去掉 72. 74. looks改为looking 75. where改为that 76. begun改为began 77. telling改为told 78. a改为the 79. saw后加his 80. terrible改为terribly 2016全国卷一1 that where 2 去掉but 3 had have 4 honest honesty 5 or and6 using used 7 dreams后加of 8 the a 9 our his 10 steady steadily2016全国卷二答案】1.how改为what 2.chose改为choose 3.take改为taking4.but改为and 5.about后加the6.your改为our7.knowledg