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streetcar 倒装句与省略复习 Infrontofthehousestandsatree Neverwillheforgethisfirsttimeabroad OnlywhenhetoldmedidIrealizewhattroublehewasin Sofastdidherunthatwecouldn tcatchupwithhim Childasheis heknowsmuch 全部倒装 部分倒装 Presentatthemeetingarefamousprofessorswhocomefromdifferentuniversities GonearethedayswhentheChinesepeoplewerelookeddownuponbyforeigners Amongtherareanimalsarecranes blackbears etc 方位 或时间 副词或地点状语 谓语动词 主语Outwentthechildren Nowcomesourturn Underthetreestandsalittleboy 全部倒装 Hereitis Inhecomes 代词作主语时主谓语序不变 部分倒装 1 他一做完报告就被工人们包围了 Nosoonerhadhefinishedhistalkthanhewassurroundedbytheworkers 2 直到我开始工作我才意识到我浪费了多少时间 NotuntilIbegantoworkdidIrealizehowmuchtimeIhadwasted 用于 形容词 或名词 动词 副词 as though 引导的让步状语从句 Prettyassheis sheisnotclever Tryashewould hemightfailagain Childasheis heknowsmuch Muchashetravels hehasneverfoundamorebeautifulplace 倒装句 主句倒装 从句不倒装 if虚拟从句除外 谓语或部分谓语放在主语之前 Translation 一个人只有在离开家时才能体会到家庭的温暖 Onlywhenoneisawayfromhomedoesonerealizehownicehomeis IfIhadhadtime Iwouldhavegonethere HadIhadtime IfIwereyou Iwouldgoabroad WereIyou Ifheshouldcome tellhimtoringmeup Shouldhecome 在虚拟结构中 条件从句的谓语含有were had和should这三个词是 可省去if 将这些词移至主语之前 I llbeawayonabusinesstrip Wouldyoumindlookingaftermycar Notatall I venotimeB I drathernotC I dlikeitD I dbehappyto 不定式的省略 1 Areyouanengineer Yes Iwanttobe 2 didyouvisityourgrandpa Ioughttohave 一些动词后面接不定式时常省略与上文相同的动词 只保留to不定式符号 但不定式后面的be动词和have不省略 最近 一个外国旅游团来湖南韶山旅游 请根据下表内容 以一名导游的身份向客人介绍韶山 词数120左右 韶山伟人毛主席诞生地地理位置湖南省会长沙西南约100公里主要景点毛主席旧居 最吸引人的地方 毛主席在此度过童年 毛泽东纪念馆 可体会他一生的历程 滴水洞 韶山冲西北大约三公里 毛主席晚年曾在此短暂呆过一段时间 LadiesandGentlemen I mgladtobeyourguide WelcometoShaoshan Wishyoutohaveagoodtimehere 26王思洋25李磊虞丹妮楼宇飞赵剑辉吴耀鹏何苗陈昭妃朱舒悦吴遐平陈梦圆李昕璐罗润可朱晓静孙毅鹏 Myfirstdelightis There Thenfollows Wewillfinishthedayby Ourlastdestination stopis 旅游线路 连接句型和结束语 TherearesomanyattractionsinShaoshanthatyouhavetokeepyoureyesopentomakethetripenjoyableandworthwhile bekeptinitsnaturalstateTheattractionthatarousesthegreatestappreciationis Whenyouarriveyouwillberewardedbythespectacularsightof Iguaranteethat Youcanhavephotostakenstandinginfrontoftheamazingcave 朱舒悦 课文thelakeofheaven中相关的词句 赵剑辉 BeingthebirthplaceofChairmanMao Shaoshanislocated100milessouthwestofChangsha Itisanaturereserveandiskeptinitsnaturalstateforvisitorsfromhomeandabroadtoenjoy Shaoshanisaperfectmixtureofnaturalandculturalview However theattractionthatarousesthegreatestappreciationistheFormerResidenceofChairmanMaowhichwitnessesMao sgrowthfromachildtoaremarkableperson Next wewillvisittheMemorialHall gainingawealthofknowledgeaboutthewholelifeofMao TheWater drippingCavewillsurelycatchoursight duetoitsfantasticlandscapeandmildclimate ChairmanMaosettledthereinhislateyears Sincethetripiswellorganized Iamconvicedthatallyourexpenseswillberewarded Inthemeanwhile greatimportancemustbeattachedtoassureyoursafety 坐落在湖南长沙西南约100公里 thecapitalcityofHunanProvince ShaoshangainsanationwidereputationforbeingthebirthplaceofChairmanMao 第一段 地理位置 Locatedabout100kmsouthwestofChangsha Shaoshanisaperfectmixtureofnaturalwondersandhistoricalvalues Thesmallmountainvillageisblessedwiththespectacularsceneryaswellasitshistoricalspots Whenyouarrive youwillberewardedwithbothabreathtakinglandscapeanditshistoricalspots 过渡句 TheattractionthatarousesthegreatestappreciationistheFormerResidenceofChairmanMao ItwasinthisregionthatMaospenthischildhood 主要景点介绍 定语从句 强调句型 doing状语 attendingschoolandhelpinghisfamilywiththefarmwork 补充信息 TheMemorialHall 再现他辉煌的一生 Fromthepicturesandtheobjectsheonceusedondisplay youcandiscoverhowChairmanMaodevotedhiswholelifetoChineserevolution 补充信息 主要景点介绍 定语从句 后置定语 表语从句 recreates recaptureshisextraordinarylifeexperience 3km awayfromthe northwestofShaoshanliesourlastdestination thewater drippingCave whereMaolivedforashortperiodoftimeinhislateyears life 主要景点介绍 倒装句 高级定语从句 Locatedabout100kmsouthwestofChangsha thecapitalcityofHunanProvince ShaoshangainsanationwidereputationforbeingthebirthplaceofChairmanMao Shaoshanisaperfectmixtureofnaturalwondersandhistoricalvalues 过渡句 TheattractionthatarousesthegreatestappreciationistheFormerResidenceofChairmanMao ItwasinthisregionthatMaospenthischildhood attendingschoolandhelpinghisfamilywiththefarmwork TherefollowstheMemorialHall whichrecreates recaptureshisextraordinarylifeexperience Fromthepicturesandtheobjectsheon