短文改错分析.doc

短文改错分析 系列 ( 1 )（一） 多词1. 多冠词 不可数名词表示泛指时不用冠词。 Modern people know moue about the health, have better food与by连用的交通工具及air ,land, sea等名词前不用冠词。有些名词school, class, hospital, church, prison, bed , table, town与相应介词连用，表示有关活动时不用冠词。Eg: in prison / at table/ go to school球类运动，棋类游戏前不用冠词。 Play basketball 、play chess most作“非常”解时前不用冠词the She is most pretty.As/ though 引导让步状语从句，构成倒装结构，前置的名词不用冠词。 Child as he is, he knows a lot. (5) 固定搭配中不可多冠词Suddenly , I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd .The dog was taken a care of when we left the house.2. 多介词 we practise for three times every week. but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. l last night, next week , this year, one day, three times直接充当时间状语，前面不用介词For instance, on one night he played strong and loud music till four oclock in the morning.有些动词在汉语中是不及物动词，在英语中是及物动词，由于受汉语的影响，可能多一个介词。Serve for the people ； follow after the teacher； marry with her；Make him as our monitor； play with Tom in a match。 有些表示地点的副词，其意义中一包含 to ，如果在加 to ，则多余on ones way to there ；return to home ； go to upstairs。有些副词或介词词组后加另一个介词，构成复和介词，若后面没有介词宾语，介词多余。同样，有些动词短语是“动词 + 介词”结构，若后面没有介词宾语，介词多余。If you wont go ,I will go instead of. She listened to but heard nothing。有些动词或形容词后接名词或代词时，须加一个介词，但接从句时，必须去掉介词。I never knew about a ride down a river could be so exciting。 I am sorry for that he wont come 。3词义重叠whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher。1）有些词受汉语影响，多一副词或介词，造成词义重叠 return back； repeat again； flee away； enter into； blue colour； stop down； raise up； unpack open。2）定语从句中的一个宾语，已由关系代词取代，再用一个代词是多余的I do remember you having apologized to the old lady I met her last week。 不定式做定语后多了代词。The question is difficult to answer it.We had a lot of cars to wash them.3）单音节的形容词或副词比较级，不能和more；most 重用。People in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past。4）冗言现象Today I visited the Smiths- my first time visit to an American family。We make him our monitor, but he refused. His parents were prevented him from being sent to Tibet. I saw all the whole people in the city playing the chess.5）状语从句与主句之间多一并列连词。Though he tried his best， but he failed。 The more he has ，and the more he wants。As long as you follow my advice, so you must catch up with others in your class.6）充当状语的介词短语与主句之间多一关系代词或关系副词。In the last five years that they have climbed churches。in other places where you are limited to a certain number。7）充当状语的分词与主句之间多一并列连词。 Sitting down，and he began to work。8）从属连词后多一个 that。 She was absent from the meeting because that she was ill。9）复合宾语前多一个that。 I found that her lying on the ground。3固定搭配中多词I was used to watch it every night。 （“过去常常” used to）。in any other words ，I am an only child。（in other words“换句话说”）4行文逻辑上多词 First ，let me tell you something more about myself。（由first 可知是刚开始向别人讲述自己的故事,故只能说something ,而不能加more.）5多不定式to 1） 四看、三使、两听、一感觉后多to He let his mother to wash his coat.2） why not 后多to Why not to borrow even more money from you father-in-low. 3） 情态动词后多 to He should to help us as soon as possible. 4） “除了。以外”后多to We did nothing but to wait for him yesterday.6多not 1） too.to.结构中多 not This film is too useless not to see for our students. 2） unless从句中多not I did not attend his party unless he didnt invite me.7多助动词do, will, shall !) if 、unless 引导的从句不用will, shall You can remember all those words if you will go over then in time. 2）宾从用肯定句 Can you tell us when did they came back?8So.that.、 suchthat 、 such as. 之间的转换1) Our teacher was such angry that he didnt come to his office.2) Mr. Wang was such a good teacher that we all liked.3) Mr. Wang was such a good teacher as we all respected him.4) They had such many book that we had before.5) they are so little girls that we each take one gift to them.6) There are such many cars in the street that we cant get there in time .7) There is such little water in the bowl that we cant water the flowers.多词练习：1) We made several American friends in New York so as toimprove our English better 2) Well sing and dance until a lot of them take part in 3) He promised to come and see us after the supper. 4) Oliver Twist, the hero of the story, he was an orphan. 5) He told me that how important it is to learn English. 6) I learnt of from Joan that Mary had fallen ill. 7) I didnt hear you. Please repeat the sentence again., 8) We must study hard in order to serve for the people better in the future. 9) Dont let the children who are so young to go swimming. 10) Do you know what do these words mean? 11) I have three letters to be answer this afternoon. 12) Having been ill for a long time, so she fell behind her classmates. 13) What a terrible weather we have been having! 14) A hundred of people attended the meeting last night. 15) “You will be late for school unless you will get up at five.” said mother. 16) There was a heavy rain last night. 17) Has he returned back yet? 18) Tell me the best way which to express my thanks. 19) He suggested me that I go to see the manager. 20) I never buy anything unless it is not really needed. 21) You need not to go with me unless you are free now. 22) I am sure it will be dark before we will get there. 23) I dont know if they will come, but if they will come, please show them the way to my house. 24) I could not make myself understood entirely well. 25) This book is too hard for me to read it 26) He gave us this the book which was bought by Mr. Wang .27) Please you tell us the true , and we will never forget you.28) As he was careless, so he failed 29) In fact they are planning to visit China on next year.30) I was too tired not to walk any further. 31) For instance, on one night he played strong and loud music till four oclock in the morning.32) During these days when we spent our hol