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2014高考英语书面表达基础训练题（6）及答案【2014高考英语吉林省长春市调研试题】书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，因陪母亲看病，不能参加明天下午关于美国文化的讲座。请写一封 短信向老师miss clinton请假。内容主要包括：1. 不能听讲座，跟老师表示歉意；2. 向老师陈述缺席理由；3. 询问老师是否有讲座录音或影像，以便日后补听讲座。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当増加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好。dear miss clinton,i am very sorry that _yours, li hua【语篇解读】 书面表达体裁为请假条，题材贴近考生生活。【命题立意】 本试卷书面表达的目的在于考查考生应用已有的语言知识完成一篇应用文（请假条）写作的综合能力。【参考范文】 dear miss clinton, i am very sorry that i will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon, which is on american culture. my mother is ill, and i will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a business trip. i will take care of my mother until she is better, so i have to ask for several days leave. i am very interested in the topic of american culture. it is really a pity that i miss it. i wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture. if so, i can listen to it when it is convenient. thank you very much. yours, li hua【评分标准】 1. 本题总分为25分, 按5个档次给分。2. 评分时, 先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次, 然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次, 最后给分。3. 词数少于80和多于120的, 从总分中减去2分。4. 评分时, 应注意的主要内容是: 内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性、上下文的连贯性。5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予 以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6. 如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。【内容要点】 1. 正确使用表示歉意的语句。 2. 陈述理由：母亲生病，陪她去医院看病。 3. 询问是否有录音，以便过后补听讲座。 4. 语气符合学生向老师请假的情况。【各档次的给分范围和要求】 第五档21分25分完全完成了试题规定的任务。-覆盖了所有内容要点；-应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；-语法或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高词汇 所致；具备较强的语言运用能力；-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档16分20分完全完成了试题规定的任务。-覆盖了所有内容要点；-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求；-语法结构和词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或较高词汇所致； -应用了简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；达到了预期的写作目的。第三档11分15分基本完成了试题规定的任务。-虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容；-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求；-有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解；-应用了简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯；整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档6分10分未恰当完成试题规定的任务。-漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容；-语法结构单调，词汇项目有限；-有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；-较少使用语句间连接成分，内容缺少连贯性；信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档1分5分未完成试题规定的任务。-明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求；-语法结构单调，词汇项目有限；-较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；-缺乏语句间连接成分，内容不连贯；信息未能传达给读者。0分未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。【2013界广东省韶关市】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分） 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。the arrival of world book and copyright day always draws public attention to young peoples reading, but mere temporary attention cannot increase the popularity of reading. the lack of reading books is becoming an increasingly severe problem in china. according to a survey by the united nations educational scientific and cultural organization (unesco), shanghai residents read most in china, with only eight books read a year on average. about 1.3 billion chinese people read less than one book every year, if textbooks are not taken into account. nowadays, childrens spare time is occupied by attending various tutorial classes, taking exam preparation training, and learning piano, painting, dancing, weiqi, or other techniques. childhood is a good period for reading literature. reading can wake up the true nature of children, and good education should fit childrens nature, said zhou yimin, who is also a teacher. scholars are also worried about another adverse impact of the lack of reading. if a child had never read a book from beginning to end before the fourth grade, he or she may lack the ability to read an entire book, said jiang junjing, an experienced teacher. what is worse, it may result in a lack of the ability to grasp the whole situation. children who lacked the ability to read an entire book in childhood may end up being unable to grasp the whole picture or manage the whole team when they grow up. 【写作内容】1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点。2. 以约120词表达你就 “阅读书籍”发表看法，并要包括下列要点：（1）你认为阅读书籍重要吗？为什么？（2）请举例说明你的观点。【写作要求】1. 作文中你可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接引用原文中的句子。2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。【参考范文】任务写作：reading booksaccording to a recent survey, the lack of reading books is a serious problem in china. too busy with school work and tutorial classes, children seldom have chances to read, which raises great concern among the scholars about the serious consequence. i strongly believe that reading books are very important. firstly, as francis bacon put it, “reading makes a full man”. by reading different books, we perfect ourselves mentally. “histories make men wise; poems witty; the mathematics subtitle; natural philosophy deep; moral grave; logic and rhetoric able to contend”. secondly, good books can delight, entertain and educate us. the importance of reading books is gaining new insight or perspectives on issues and helps us to have a new understanding of the world around. we can apply the insight in everyday life or as a way of building upon the knowledge that already encompasses our mind and enrich our lives. one of my favorite book is pride and prejudice written by jane austen. basically, this is a story of courtship and marriage, but through the humorous, sometimes satirical tone of the author, i get to know about how women lived their lives and what the upper and middle class people centered around in the late18th century england. i smile at the wit of mr. bennet, laugh at the mindlessness of mrs. bennet. i am totally impressed by lizzys eloquence when she debated with mr. darcy, and equally moved when mr. darcy finally admitted he had an affection for lizzy. in a word, with this book, i temporarily escape from the 21st century world, entertaining myself and at the same time broadening my horizon. we read books for pleasure. they entertain us. and we read them for profit. they enlighten us. good books draw us into their imaginative worlds and engage us with the power of their invention. they enlarge our understanding of ourselves and deepen our appreciation of life. therefore, i think reading books is very important. 【2013界广东省深圳市一模】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）你接受了一项写作任务，要求英语校报写一篇“校史展览馆”的介绍。写作内容请根据以下信息，介绍你校“校史展览馆”的基本情况。写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 【参考范文】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）located on the 1st floor of the library, the school exhibition hall, which covers an area of about 300 square meters, has a history of more than forty years. with varieties of forms like words, pictures, real objects, videos and so on, it gives us a bird view of the development of our school since 1942. here we can find brief introductions to headmasters of all terms, and the prizes got by outstanding students and teachers. it has also witnessed the advanced teaching concepts and proud achievements. the hall is a great place for us to see the long history and rich culture of our school，which encourages us to study harder, be grateful to our school and serve our motherland.第一节：一、基础写作评分原则1、本题总分为1