Module3 Writing.ppt

Writing Module3 Journeytospace Let singasong Astronautshavealreadybeentothemoon Whathavetheydoneonthemoon Lead in Lookandsay They onthemoon They soilonthemoon walk collectsoil havewalked havecollected Lookandsay Theyhavetakenphotosofthemoon However theyhaven tfoundlifeonthemoonyet takephotos notfindlife Let shaveatimetravel Afteralongjourney wehavereachedMars AndwehavedonemanythingsonMars Imaginewhatwehavedoneorhaven tdoneonMars Pre writing Pre writing Lookatthepictureandsaywhatwehave haven tdoneonMars Writingmaterial 假如你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行 在火星上你们参观了很多地方 和外星人踢了一场足球 给地球人传送了信息 但也有些事情还没来得及做 比如没有拍到照片等 你们期待着下一次的火星之旅 请根据上述材料 以 AJourneytoMars 为题写一篇英语短文描述一下你们的火星之旅 要求 1 不少于80个词 2 可以适当拓展 组织 organize外星人 alien While writing Writingtips Usethetense 时态 spelling punctuation capitalization 大写字母 correctly Writeyourpassagecompletelyandcoherently 连贯地 Developyourpassageappropriately 中考书面表达评分标准 1 书写较差 影响阅卷 则降低一个档次给分 2 少于60字 扣2分 3 各等级的给分范围和要求 ModelEssay AJourneytoMarsOurschoolhasorganizedagreattriptoMars Wehaveneverbeentherebefore WewenttoMarsbyspaceship WehavedonemanythingsonMars Forexample wehavevisitedmanyinterestingplacesandhaveswuminthesea Wehavealsoplayedfootballwithaliens Finally wehavesentmessagesbacktotheearth However wehaven ttakenanyphotosyet That sapity ThetripwasveryinterestingandI llneverforgetthetrip Ih