2012上海高考应用文义.doc

应用文写作之书信 -劝诫/鼓励朋友或同学一 写作结构指导开头：称呼第一段：开门见山地说明写信的意图，即信的开头要交待的事由。 第二段：交代信中所反映的主要问题的看法和建议，不同内容可以分段。第三段：表达美好祝愿，期待对方回信。结尾：结束语和署名二 常用句型I am writing to share with you my opinion about it.Its quite natural/understandable for you to do, however,uFrom my point of view, you should never go to extremes.I hope my advice can be of some help to you.I wonder if you can take my suggestions into consideration.I am looking forward to your good news.三 优秀范文欣赏2003年上海高考作文及范例 你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写信，谈谈你的看法和建议。受信人：徐海青 寄信人：黄平 写信日期：2003年六月八日 June 8, 2003Dear Xu Haiqing,You said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you couldnt afford to buy the best brands. So you felt very depressed. There are different views on peoples wear. The following are my ideas about it.Firstly, you shouldnt put too much emphasis on physical appearance. You must always remember the most important task for you today is to concentrate your attention on your studies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your examinations.A famous saying goes, “Frugality is the mother of virtue.” So, secondly, you must understand that it is a fine virtue to learn live in frugality. Since your family is not able to provide you with enough money to buy clothes of the best brands, it is all the more necessary for you to try every means to lighten the financial burden of your family. You will find the virtue of frugality will benefit you a lot in your later life.I hope you understand what I mean. I am sure you will take a positive attitude towards life and will be happy again when you read my letter. (205 words) Yours, Huangping四 实战练习假设你是John，你的朋友Angela在数学学习上遇到一些困难，上课听不懂，课后作业也不能独立完成，几次考试都不及格，她很苦恼，感到自卑，甚至想辍学。请你给她写封信，谈谈你的看法和建议。-申请/ 自荐信一 写作结构指导开头：称呼第一段：介绍自己，开门见山地说明写信的意图，即信的开头要交待的事由。 第二段：阐明申请或自荐的原因、自己的优势或理由第三段：表达美好祝愿，期待对方回信。结尾：结束语和署名二 常用句型I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in . I would like to write a letter to tell you that.I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising.I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the one hand, . On the other hand, . I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenienceI am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.三，高考作文点评假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1 个人情况：年龄，性别，学历2 个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况3 承诺：提供最佳服务注意：1 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3 生词：申请apply (v.),application(n.) 志愿者volunteerDear Sir / Madam: My name is Lihua .I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. 思考：避免每句都用第一人称I开头；内容要点1.年龄、性别2.学历及英语水平3.爱好体育、熟悉本地4.善于交往、乐于助人5.承诺6.合适的结尾【同学范文1】第一档（很差）1-5分Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Lihua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.I am an 18 girl. As a local people, I know the roads and Buildings very clear. I like sports very much. By several years training, I am almost good at every sports.Now I am a student. In school, my English is good, I am also a Kind girl. When I know someone is in difficulty, I will give him or her to defeat it.The Games will be held in the city where I am live. I would like to a volunteer, if the dream comes true, I will try my best to improve the level of my service. As a volunteer is my gloary. I wish I can become one.Best wishes for you.点评：【同学范文2】第二档（较差）5-10分Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Lihua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.I am a 17 years old girl. And I am a senior 2 students in NO.1 Senior School of . My English is good and I am good at PE.I like to do things for others. Because I think helping others is helping myself. When someone has difficult in doing things, I am always ready to help him. And I like to communication is the bridge of the world. Because the world is a big family.I hear that the Games will be held in this place where I lives. I hope to be a volunteer. Because by this, I can lean about the world and take exercise. I can provide the best service for the Games. I know the situation here. I believe I can do well. 点评：要点安排混乱，部分要点理解错误；拼写、语法错误较多，部分句型结构有问题；【同学范文3】第三档（适当）11-15分Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Lihua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. I am a brave boy of 16 years old. I can speak English fluently. Besides, I do well in getting on well(用词重复) with other students. I am glad to help others. I know all interesting places here.If I become a member of volunteers, I will try my best to introduce my hometown to visitors. I will take them to taste all kinds of food and let them know our Chinese culture. I am sure that none of them would leave feeling disappointed. （这部分不错）On the other hand, I wish the Games had a happy end.I apply for being a volunteer, I hope you can allow me to be a volunteer. I will do well in it and it and try my best to work. Thank you.点评：缺少部分要点，如爱好体育、熟悉本地、善于交往、乐于助人等；承诺部分比较精彩。 【同学范文4】第四档（好）16-20分Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Lihua,I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Acian Games.I am a warm-hearted boy of 17, who is still studying in Middle School. I want to be a member of them.English is what I am good at, as well as sports. I have no difficulty in communicating with foreigner, because I can speak English fluently and do well in communication. It is my duty to help others and as a local one, I know quite well about our district.If I am a volunteer, I will try my best to serve others. For me, a volunteer is not only a glorious job, but a good way to get close to sports. If I can be one of the members, I will be very happy and honorable.Please accept my application for being a volunteer, and I have been ready to make contribution to the Games.点评：能通过使用多变的句式和高级的词组增强文章表现力，英语功底比较扎实。 【同学范文5】第五档（很好）21-25分My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. Im a boy of 17 years old and right now Im studying in the No. 2 Senior High School. There are several reasons why I want to apply. First of all, I take great interest in sports and do well in English, especially spoken English. This can help me communicate with foreigners smoothly. Secondly, Im very familiar with our city. And its quite easy for me to show the way to strangers. Most important of all, I like to make friends with people and try my best to help them.If I can become a volunteer, I promise that Ill provide the best service with foreign guests. And I will do a good job.(116词)点评：结构安排合理；内容非常连贯；用词准确，能用到一定复杂语法结构。优秀作文欣赏2009上海高考英语作文2009某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺（gardening）、烹饪（cooking）、防身术（self-defence）、护理（nursing）。假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括：l 你感兴趣的课程l 你期望从这门课程中学到什么l 为什么想学这些内容平均分14.4难度值0.58标准差3.76区分度0.78Dear Sir/Madam,It is said that a summer camp is to be held by your school and a few courses are available to choose from. I am interested in gardening, in that I believe it features my character and personal benefits.During the learning period, I expect to gain some unexpected knowledge. A radical technique Id like to obtain is to know how to tell difference species of plants and flowers apart. This helps me to have a clearer outlook of those in my garden. Furthermore, the proper cutting time and frequency to water are some other skills I want to learn. A little knowledge concerning choosing suitable soil or reasonable positions will also be a good choice.The main reason why I choose gardening is that I want to help my parents with their work in the domestic garden. In addition, I find that we students generally lack the knowledge of gardening, missing a chance to have a word with nature, so that knowing the surroundings is imperative. Last but not least, by attending the courses, I will have a meaningful summer vacation, and drowning myself between plants will by all means add a brilliant touch to my life.Best wishes. I hope to receive your reply at your convenience. Yours, Wang Yuehua三 实战练习国外某网站将举办新一轮网上讨论活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括：1.自我简介 2. 写信目的 3.话题：我们应该感恩（ thankful）4. 推荐的理由 5. 预祝活动成功Dear editor,应用文写作之报告/发言稿一写作结构指导开头：致辞对象第一段：介绍自己，开门见山地说明报告或发言的意图。 第二段：根据写作的具体要求，有次序、有条理的阐明报告的内容第三段：表达美好祝愿，结语，感谢。二常用句型Good afternoon, Ladies and gentlemen.Welcome to. Now let me introduceto you.I hope my introduction can give you a general idea about and wish you a good trip in.Thats all. Thank you.三优秀范文欣赏有一批要到中国投资（invest）的外国企业家在我国某城市参观考察。假定你是接待人员，要向外宾们简要介绍这个城市的概况，请你用英语写一篇100词左右的发言稿，包括以下几点内容： 1、 这是一座新兴的现代化城市，建于本世纪80年代初。 2、 海陆空交通便利，又有一条与北京相连的高速公路（freeway）正式启用。 3、 自然资源（resources）丰富，电力能源充足。 4、 社会次序良好，政府多方面支持外国投资者。说明性短文：简单打招呼；自我介绍；并说明发言的目的。 列出信息中的信息。 词组有：ladies and gentleman, a new modern city, set up, the early 1980s, by air, by sea, by land, another freeway, be used, connect with, be rich in, natural resources, energy resources, support foreign visitors. 词组列出后，判断体裁是发言稿(说明文)，可用一般现在时来书写，把句子组合一番后，文章即可大体成型。 Ladies and Gentleman, Welcome to our city. Now let me introduce our city to you. Our city is a new modern city. It was set up in the early 1980s, but it has been developing rapidly. From here you can travel to anywhere by sea, by air or by land. Recently another freeway connected with Beijing has started being used. The places around our city are rich in natural resources. And we have enough supply of electricity and energy resources. The public equipment is very nice. Besides the government of our country and our city support foreign investors in many ways. We except more and more foreign friends to invest in our city. Thats all. Thank you. 117有一批要到上海投资的外国企业家来上海参观考察。 假定你是接待人员，要想外宾们简要介绍这个城市的概况，请你用英语写一篇120-150字左右的发言稿。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen.说明性短文：简单打招呼；自我介绍；并说明发言的目的。城市概况应包括：人口、地理位置、经济发展状况、交通和文化等。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen.Welcome to Shanghai. I am your receptionist. Now I would like to give a brief introduction about it.Shanghai is the biggest city in China with a population of 16 million. It is located on the coast of the East Sea. The Huangpu River runs from north to south through the city, across which are Nanpu Bridge, Xvpu Bridge, Lupu Bridge and Yangpu Bridge. It has highly developed transport network, including highway, railway, waterway and airway. It is quite easy for people at home and abroad to travel to Shanghai.The economy of Shanghai has been increasing at an amazing speed since our countrys open and reform policy was carried out, which attracts more and more overseas entrepreneurs to invest here. Meanwhile, the Shanghai government has been trying its best to improve its investment environment and offer a favorable policy to foreign entrepreneurs.Shanghai is also a cultural city with a long history. There are many places of interest, such as Longhua Temple, Yu Garden Jade Buddha Temple and also many tourist destinations, such as the Bund, the Oriental Pearl TV Tower, and Peoples S