2017初三二模作文模板汇编.doc

海量资源，欢迎共阅2016-2017学年初三二模写作文体区县二模写作话题记叙文长宁Astoryabout_一个关于的故事徐汇Apartyfor/to_议论文黄浦是好习惯虹口我的生活乐趣普陀Ourlastclassmeetinginjuniorhighschool奉贤_makemeabetterperson崇明Iamanindependentboy(girl)静安_,anewwayoflife!松江SomethingIwanttodoformyfamily嘉定IlikereadingEnglish_浦东Ienjoy(reading,traveling,doingsports.)应用文杨浦Thingswecandomakeourcityabetterplace金山Iamspecial闵行假设你是小明（XiaoMing），是美国中学生Tony的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给Tony写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍上海良好的公共交通服务。写作一般联系学生生活实际，由上图可知，考试作文偏向议论文，因此本文将着重分析静安、虹口、黄浦、浦东、奉贤这5个区的作文范例，并罗列出学生写作可以直接用的开头结尾。当然，开头和结尾的方式不能太落于俗套，要有一定的新意，一般一两句即可，结尾要点题，有所立意。【静安区】94. Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“_,anewwayoflife!”(请以“_，一种崭新的生活方式”为题，从以下图片中选择其中一张图片，举例表述你的思考和理由，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格）WeixinMobikePointsforreference:1. Whichwaydoyouchoosetowriteabout?2. Whydoyouthinkitanewwayoflife?3. Couldyougivesomesuggestionsinordertomakebetteruseofit?【参考范文】Asweallknow,weareenjoyingtheconvenienceofournewwaysoflife,includingmobike.WecaneasilyfindapublicbikeeverywhereinShanghainowandweneverworryaboutwheretoparkit.Ridingabicycledoesgoodtoourhealthandtheenvironmentaswell.However,Weshoulduseapublicbikeproperly.Wecantuseitifwereyoungerthan12.Weshouldtakegoodcareofitinsteadofdamagingit.Weshouldparkitinaparkingspotafterusingit.Publicbikesbringusalotofadvantages,soweshouldprotectthemsothattheycanserveuslonger.【虹口区】94.Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Myjoyofliving”（以“我的生活乐趣”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）生活有艰辛，也有乐趣，你的生活乐趣是什么？你为何觉得这是你的乐趣所在？你是怎么想的？怎么做的？【参考范文】Thereisnodoubtthatweallhavetofacedifficultiesandstressinlife,soweshoulddevelopawayofjoyinourdailylife.Inmyopinion,myjoyoflifeistolistentolightmusic.WheneverIamstuckintroubleorfeeldepressed,Iwillsparemyselfsometimetolistentolightmusicbecauseitcanhelpmeadjustmyselfandmakemecalmdownagain.IthinkonlyinthiswaycanIdealwiththeproblemsImfacedwithbetterortreatotherpeoplemoreproperly.Aboveall,thatsmyjoyoflivingandIthinkthatyoucanhaveatrynexttime.Ihopeyouwillgetbenefitfromit.【黄浦区】94.In60to120words,writeaboutthetopic“isagoodhabit”.（以“是好习惯”为题，写一篇60-120个词的短文，标点符号不占格）一个好的习惯会让我们终身受益。什么是好习惯？请分享你的一个好习惯，说说你是怎么养成的？它给你带来哪些好处。请结合生活实际，谈谈你的体验或想法。（注意：短文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）【参考范文】SavingMoneyIsaGoodHabitSpeakingofgoodhabits,savingmoneyisundoubtedlyoneofthem.Insteadofspendingtomorrowsmoney,Iprefertosavemoney.Inordertolearntocutdownunnecessarycost,Iwillthinktwicebeforespendingmoneyonthoseclothesthatmaynotsuitmyself,whichbenefitsmealot.Firstofall,thesenseofsavingmoneyhelpsmearrangemydailylifeproperly.Whatsmore,savingmoney,toacertainextent,meansIcanhandleemergencyquickly.Inaddition,savingmoneyisnotonlyatraditionalvirtuebutausefulstrategyinlife.Justastheoldsaying,apennysavedisapennyearned,sosavingmoneymakesmefeelsafeabouttomorrow.【浦东】94. Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Ienjoy(reading,traveling,doingsports.)”请以“我喜欢做”为题目，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。要求内容贴切，意思连贯。请在答题纸上补充完整题目（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分）Usethefollowingasyourreference:Whatdoyouenjoydoing?Whydoyouenjoydoingit?Whatcanyouget/learnfromit?【参考范文】IenjoyplayingbasketballHobbiesareimportantforourlives.Someenjoyreading,othersenjoytravelling,collection,andsoon.Ienjoyplayingbasketball,acompetitiveandexcitingballgame.Whenplayingbasketball,Ineedtokeeprunningandjumping,soitconsumesalotofenergy,anddoesgoodtomyheartandlungs.Besides,Ineedtoworkwellwithotherteamplayersinordertowinthegame.InthiswayIvelearnthowtocooperatewithothersandhowtoplaybytherules.Inaword,playingbasketball,asanimportantpartofmylife,helpsmebecomestrongerbothphysicallyandmentally.【奉贤区】94.Writingatleast60wordsonthetopic“_makemeabetterperson”(以“_成就更好的自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分）【参考范文】UnderstandingotherpeoplemakesmeabetterpersonAsisknowntoall,everyoneisaspecialunitythathashisownmindandstory.Whenfacingthesimilarcircumstances,theymaymakedifferentchoices.Everydecisionwemakeandeveryactionwedomakeusbeadifferentpersonfromothers.Soitisveryimportanttounderstandothersespeciallywhenwegetalongwithotherpeople.Thereareseveralreasons.First,understandingcanavoidquarrelsamongpeople.Ifweputourselvesinotherpeoplesshoes,wecanunderstandothersbetter,whichcanavoidmisunderstandingsthatmaybreakotherpeoplesheart.Second,understandingisalsoaself-cultivation.Everyonehastheirowndifficulties,whichmeansthatwecantimposeourmindsonotherpeople.Ialwaysremindmyselfofunderstandingothersandfromwhatwehavediscussedabove,Ithinkthatunderstandingotherpeoplemakesmeabetterperson.分析：【静安区】Asweallknow,weareenjoyingtheconvenienceofournewwaysoflife,includingmobike.分析：这句话点题概括了我们的现状，引出话题Publicbikesbringusalotofadvantages,soweshouldprotectthemsothattheycanserveuslonger.分析：这句话点题总结了自行车的好处，比较级的运用恰到好处。比较级其实每篇文章都可以运用，去描述现在和过去的对比。【虹口区】Thereisnodoubtthatweallhavetofacedifficultiesandstressinlife,soweshoulddevelopawayofjoyinourdailylife.Inmyopinion.分析：这句话概括了我们都会遇到困难，引出我的观点Aboveall,thatsmyjoyoflivingandIthinkthatyoucanhaveatrynexttime.Ihopeyouwillgetbenefitfromit.分析：这句话总结并展望未来【黄浦区】Speakingofgoodhabits,savingmoneyisundoubtedlyoneofthem.分析：这句话点题好习惯，引出观点Justastheoldsaying,apennysavedisapennyearned,sosavingmoneymakesmefeelsafeabouttomorrow.分析：这句话用谚语进行总结【浦东】Hobbiesareimportantforourlives.Someenjoyreading,othersenjoytravelling,collection,andsoon.分析：这句话点题爱好的重要性Inaword,playingbasketball,asanimportantpartofmylife,helpsmebecomestrongerbothphysicallyandmentally.分析：这句话总结概括我的爱好：打篮球【奉贤区】Asisknowntoall,everyoneisaspecialunitythathashisownmindandstory.分析：这句话一句话点题Ialwaysremindmyselfofunderstandingothersandfromwhatwehavediscussedabove,Ithinkthatunderstandingotherpeoplema