广东省高考英语 作文专题三 夹叙夹议型 读写任务.doc

专题三 夹叙夹议型 读写任务 夹叙夹议就是一方面叙述某一事情，一方面又对此事加以分析与评论。这种表达方式中的叙与议是一个有机的整体，“叙”是“议”的基础，即议论不能脱离记叙，必须在记叙的基础上展开；“议”是“叙”的渗透，即议论在记叙的基础上发表，且要有一定的深度与广度。写夹叙夹议类书面表达时，思维要有灵活性，要随着记叙与议论的转换，及时调整思维方式。例题：阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 As I got into a taxi one afternoon, the driver was very angry about something that had happened to him earlier that day. Heres how he told the story：“One of my fares (旅客) left a wallet in my cab this morning. Nearly three hundred dollars in it. I spent more than an hour trying to trace the guy. Finally I found him at his hotel. He took the wallet without a word and glared at me as though Id meant to steal it.” “He didnt give you a reward？” I asked.“Not a cent. But it wasnt the money I wanted，” he fumbled, then exploded,“If the guy had only said something” Why was the driver so upset? All he wanted was something simple, but even more valuable than money: to be thanked for his efforts. In short, what he wanted, what he needed but did not get, was a little bit of gratitude.写作内容 1概括故事的内容要点，以此引入话题，该部分的词数大约30。 2以约120个词就“感激”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下内容要点： (1)什么是感激(gratitude)? (2)感激的表现方式。 (3)表达感激最重要在于真诚(sincere)。 (4)故事的启示和你的结论。 写作要求 1你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。练习(一)阅读下面的短文， 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。During summer holidays, two classmates, Tom and Peter, were traveling in the desert. As they were walking, they had an argument, and Tom was so angry that he slapped Peter hard across the face. Peter felt hurt, but without saying anything, he wrote down in the sand these words: “Today my best friend Tom slapped me in the face.”It was very hot, but they kept on walking and walking until they found an oasis(绿洲), where they decided to take a bath. Suddenly Peter got stuck in the mire(泥潭) and started drowning. Seeing that, Tom rushed over and saved him without any hesitation. After Peter got recovered from the drowning, he wrote with a knife on a stone: “Today my best friend Tom saved my life.”Feeling curious, Tom, who had slapped and saved his best friend, asked Peter, “After I beat you, you wrote something in the sand but just now you put down what I had done on a stone. Why？”Peter replied, “When someone hurts us, we should take it down in the sand where winds of forgiveness can erase it away. But when someone does something good for us, we must carve it in the stone where no wind can ever erase it.” Hearing that, Tom was deeply moved and understood what Peter had said and what he had done.写作内容 请你以“What I Have Learnt From Toms Understanding”为题， 谈谈你读了这个故事以后的感受。内容要点包括： 1以约30个词概括上述故事的要点。 2以约120个词就Peter“被打”和“被救”后的举动发表你的看法， 内容包括： (1)Tom 为什么感动了？他到底明白了什么？ (2)你从这个故事中学到了什么？简要说明其理由。练习(二) 阅读下面的短文， 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。A long time ago, there was a huge apple tree. A little boy loved to come and lay around it every day. They loved to play together. As time went by, the boy had grown up and no longer played around it. One day, he came back and the tree excitedly invited him to play. But the boy said he needed money to buy toys. “Sorry, but I have no money, but you can pick all my apples and sell them，” said the tree. The boy did as told and left happily but never came back. The tree was sad. Many years passed, the boy returned and told him he had to make money to build a house for his family. The tree happily offered his branches for his house. With the branches, the boy left satisfied. The tree was again lonely and sad. Then one hot summer day, the tree was delighted to see the boy back again. “Come and play with me！” The tree said. “I am sad and getting old. I want to go sailing to relax myself. Can you give me a boat？” “Use my trunk to build your boat.” The boy cut the tree trunk and went sailing but never showed up for a long time. The tree was happy, but it was not true. Finally, the boy returned after he left for so many years. “Sorry, my boy. But I dont have anything for you anymore. No more apples for you.” The tree said with tears. The boy replied that he was too old and needed nothing. “Good! Old tree root is the best place to lean on and rest. Come, sit down with me and rest.” The boy sat down and the tree was glad and smiled with tears写作内容 1以约30个词概括上述寓言故事的要点。 2以约120个词， 写出以下内容： (1)故事的寓意及读后感。 (2)假如你是故事中的那个男孩， 你会怎样做？写作要求 1可以使用实例来支持你的论点， 也可以参照阅读材料的内容论述，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。 2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准 概括准确， 语言规范， 内容合适， 篇章连贯。例题【参考范文】 We Cannot Do Without Gratitude The other day I read a story which is about a taxi driver who got mad and disappointed，for he received nothing for his efforts to return the lost wallet to its owner，not even a simple word.The story sets me thinking about gratitude.Gratitude is the feeling of being grateful，the art of receiving gracefully，and the act of showing appreciation for every act of kindness，big or small，that others do for us.Gratitude can take many forms.It can be expressed by a large，dramatic gesture or it can be shown in a small way，like finding a very original and personal way to say thanks for a friends gift.Whatever we do to show our gratitude，we should do it in a sincere manner，for it is the feelings in our hearts that matter the most.The story reminds us how important it is to express our gratitude to the ones who have offered us help.We can never be too grateful.The smiles and the thanks we give help us to build a better world，one that we can all live in and enjoy.练习 (一)【参考范文】 What I Have Learnt From Toms Understanding While traveling in the desert, Tom slapped Peters face, and Peter wrote it down in the sand. But when he was saved, Peter carved that down on a stone, which moved Tom deeply. In this story, Tom was touched by Peters actions because he was ready to forgive others by forgetting unhappy things and he would remember and value it forever in his memory when his life was saved. I think what Tom understood was how to get along well with friends and how to deal with others kindness and rudeness. As for me, not everyone has the same good virtues and behaviors as Peter if such things happen to us. In my eyes, Peter is really our role model. “Attitude is everything！” So lets try to be kind to people who have done something unpleasant to us, and grateful to those who have done us favors. Anyway, true friendship never comes easily.练习 (二)【参考范文】 The fable presents a sentimental story to us in which an apple tree satisfied a boys wishes unconditionally by sacrificing everything for him. All it desired is the boys company. The tree in the fable is affectionate and unselfish. The moral of it is that parental love is so infinite that children should be grateful for that. I was deeply moved by the fable and felt an impulse to praise all the parents. It made me realize how g