考研英语作文错误汇总.doc

考研英语写作常见语言错误I词法错误AArticle冠词(1) a. The machines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands to produce what are essential for them to keep alive. b. Machines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands to produce what are essential for them to keep alive. (2) a. Pollution is the biggest problem of the cities. b. Pollution is the biggest problem of cities. (3) a. The housing problem in big cities is rather a headache to both government and people. b. The housing problem in big cities is rather a headache to both the government and people. (4) a. Bicycle is the most common means of transport in our country. b. The bicycle/A bicycle is the most common means of transport in our country. (5) a. On the contrary, the percentages of milk and meat are on a rise. b. On the contrary, the percentages of milk and meat are on the rise. (6) a. We cant avoid being beaten by the others. b. We cant avoid being beaten by others. (7) a. And once the artificial-intelligent robots were put into use, what would these clever people do to their producers?b. And once robots with artificial-intelligence were put into use, what would these clever people do to their producers?(8) a. For an example, with the wide adoption of the automatic working apparatuses, more and more people will lose their jobs in the future. b. For example, with the wide adoption of the automatic working apparatuses, more and more people will lose their jobs in the future. (9) a. Almost everyday I open TV at 6:30 p. m. and wait for the news program. b. Almost everyday I turn on the TV at 6:30 p. m. and wait for the news program. (10) a. Then, during the second part, were showed some pictures of the foreign customs. b. Then, during the second part, were showed some pictures of foreign places and customs. (11) a. My favourite programme is called The Animal Word, which is provided by CCTV every Sunday night. b. My favourite programme is called Animal World, which is provided by CCTV every Sunday night. (12) a. It provides us with natural scenes and the life of all kinds of wild animals, with the explanation by the narrator. b. It provides us with views of natural scenes and a look at the life style of all kinds of wild animals, with an explanation by the narrator. (13) a. Not only do the leaders of the countries visit the foreign countries, but also the common people visit abroad. b. Not only do leaders of countries often visit foreign countries, but also the common people visit abroad. (14) a. I think they are the questions of great interest. b. I think they are questions of great interest. (15) a. In short, the bad ads can be classified into two categories. One category has the bad purpose. The advertisers want to sell cigarettes, drinks, guns and so on. The other category of bad ads are those in which the advertiser use violence and sex to promote their sales. b. Generally speaking, the bad ads can be classified into two categories. One category has a bad purpose. The advertisers want to sell things like cigarettes, alcohol, and guns The other category of bad ads are those in which the advertiser use violence and sex to promote their sales. (16) a. This seems to be on fashion now. b. This seems to be in fashion now. (17) a. And also, they treat the firecrackers as the heritage of the Chinese culture. b. And also, they treat firecrackers as the heritage of the Chinese culture. (18) a. Finally we can teach ourselves and learn the new knowledge. b. Finally we can teach ourselves and learn new knowledge. (19) a. Higher English level will help you to find a satisfactory job in the future. b. A higher English level will help you to find a satisfactory job in the future. (20) a. Some students whose major is chemistry, math or physics and so on would think that when they graduate from the college they 11 not apply English any more. b. Some students with majors like chemistry, math or physics would think that when they graduate from college they 11 not use English any more. (21) a. Such opinion leads to surprising waste of water. b. Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water. (22) a. And wide spread of education is also a good reason. b. And the wide spread of education is also a good reason. (23) a. The given graph tells us the changes of life expectancy and infant mortality of the developing countries in 1960 and 1990. b. The given graph tells us the changes of life expectancy and infant mortality in the developing countries in 1960 and 1990. (24) a. There are other countless examples. All in all, we must keep the proverb in mind for lifetimePractice makes perfect. b. There are other countless examples. In a word, we must keep the proverb in mind for a lifetimePractice makes perfect. (25) a. Community services as well as mass media are both golden chances to practice our ability, through which we can learn to cooperate with people, to contribute our intelligence to the society. b. Community services is a golden chance to use our ability, through which we can learn to cooperate with people and contribute our intelligence to society. (26) a. I dont think numbers have anything to do with the luck. b. I dont think numbers have anything to do with luck. BNouns 名词可数名词(1) a. Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recording and films need electricity. b. Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recordings and films need electricity. (2) a. People who suggested this said that one cause of the heavy traffic is traffic accident. b. People who suggested this said that one cause of the heavy traffic is traffic accidents. (3) a. Two solutions have been recommended so far, and each one has both advantage and disadvantage. b. Two solutions have been recommended so far, and each one has both advantages and disadvantages. (4) a. Man has lived in this world for thousands of years. They fight against nature from time to time and they survive. b. Human beings have lived in this world for thousands of years. They have fought against nature from time to time and they have survived. (5) a. As long as we dont give up and believe in ourselves, and in the meantime learn something from failure, we 11 certainly make our marks in the end. b. As long as we dont give up keeping believing in ourselves, and in the meantime learn something from failure, we 11 certainly make our mark in the end. (6) a. With money we can travel widely and have more experience. b. With money we can travel widely and have more experiences. (7) a. What money will bring you depends on your personal belief and goal in life. b. What money will bring you depends on your personal beliefs and goals in life. (8) a. During this process, job interview has arisen and appeared more and more important. b. During this process, the job interview has arisen and appeared more and more important. (9) a. First, the interviewer can tell something about the job to the interviewee such as the wage, the work conditions and some other things which is relevant to the job. b. First, the interviewer can tell something about the job to the interviewee such as the wages, the working conditions and something else which is relevant to the job. (10) a. They think that fresh water comes from such varieties of sources that it is always sufficient for use. b. They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use. (11) a. The primary cause is that we can expand our horizon. b. The primary cause is that we can expand our horizons. (12) a. In their opinion, people who change their job frequently are superficial and tactless. b. In their opinion, people who change their jobs frequently are imprudent and tactless. (13) a. They range from foods, clothes to radios, TV sets, and even some medicine is fake, which has brought a lot of troubles in our daily life. b. They range from foods, clothes to radios, TV sets, and even medicines are fake which has brought a lot of troubles to our daily life. (14) a. First, government should forbid the fake commodities by law. b. First, the government should forbid the fake commodities by law. 不可数名词(1) a. The fresh air and beautiful sceneries will attract people to leave the overcrowded city. b. The fresh air and beautiful scenery will attract people to leave the overcrowded city. (2) a. Nowadays radios and TV play a more and more important role in our daily life. b. Nowadays radio and TV play a more and more important role in our daily life. (3) a. For example, setting off firecrackers often sets fire to buildings, and causes many damages. b. For example, setting off firecrackers often sets fire to buildings, and causes a lot of damage. (4) a. They think only when they are absorbed in one work can they do it well. b. They think only when they are devoted to one job can they do it well. 集合名词(1) a. Even a lot of entertainments such as TV, recordings and films need electricity. b. Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recordings and films need electricity. 名词前的数量(1) a. A great deal of new subjects, which are actually derived from both natural and social science, has come into existence and enrich the sea of human knowledge greatly. b. A great number of new subjects, which are actually derived from both natural and social science, have come into existence and enriched the sea of human knowledge greatly. 用词不当(1) a. They have little chance to find jobs. b. They have little chance to find work. (2) a. They dont get equal pay for equal job. b. They dont get equal pay for equal work. (3) a. For example, in reporting, a reporter can use it (tape recorder) instead of the old means of writing them on a notebook. b. For example, a reporter can use it in interviews instead of the old means of writing them on a notebook. (4) a. Furthermore, tapes which contain sex and violence will lead young people into evil ways and do harm to their growth. b. Furthermore, recordings which contain sex and violence will lead young people into evil ways and do harm to their growth. (5) a. With more and more people coming into this world, human beings are now in danger of food shortage because the land on which man can grow rice remains the same. b. With more and more people coming into this world, human beings are now in danger of food shortage because the amount of land on which man can grow food crops remains the same. (6) a. It can lessen the crowding degree of streets and speed up the flow of traffic. b. It can lessen the crowdedness of streets and speed up the flow of traffic. (7) a. In spite of all this, the greenization progress is relatively slow compared with cities in other countries. b. In spite of all this, the green process is relatively slow compared with cities in other countries. (8) a. In the meantime, the grain requirement in peoples diet consequently kept dropping. b. In the meantime, the grain consumption in peoples diet consequently kept dropping. (9) a. With the development of the standard of living, people now can afford to buy more milk and meat than before. b. With the improvement of the standard of living, people now can afford to buy more milk and meat than before. (10) a. Two new roads were finished at the end of last year, and are expected to open to cars soon. b. Two new roads were finished at the end of last year, and are expected to open to traffic soon. (11) a. There are many reasons which have caused such a change. b. There are many factors which have caused such a change. (12) a. Learning English is not an easy thing. b. Learning English is not an easy task. (13) a. They will push our society to a higher position. b. They will push our society to a higher level of development. (14) a. Through participation, everyone can learn that on the playground he not only competes for himself but also for his team. b. Through participation, everyone can learn that on the playing field he not only competes for himself but also for his team. (15) a. Motorcycles are much cheaper and consume much less oil than cars. b. Motorcycles are much cheaper and consume much less gas than cars. (16) a. I believe one day motorcycles will become the most widely used traffic vehicles in China. b. I believe one day motorcycles will become the most widely used vehicles in China. (17) a. Motorcycles, as a new type of traffic, is accepted by more and more people. b. Motorcycles, as a new type of vehicle, are accepted by more and more people. (18) a. And the most important character is its fast rhythm. b. And the most important character is its fast pace. (19) a. On the one hand, the interviewer can introduce the main thing of the job he will provide to the interviewee, such as the specific things the interviewee should do if he takes the job, and the conditions for the job, and the wage or the profit the interviewee will get. b. On the one hand, the interviewer can introduce the main aspects of the job opening to the interviewee, such as the specific requirements for the job, the working conditions, and the wages and benefits the interviewee will get. (20) a. Now, when a person is hunting for a job, there will always be a job interview. b. Today when a person is hunting for a job, there are almost always job interviews. (21) a. In contrast, still a few of civilians expect the government to call off this regulation. b. However, there are still a few citizens who expect the government to call off this ban. (22) a. Nowadays, there are two-day weekend in China. b. Now there are two-day weekend in China. (23) a. However, some people still believe that fresh water is quite adequate for us. b. However, some people still believe that fresh water supply is quite adequate for us. (24) a. You should practice under the direction of a teacher. b. You should be trained under the direction of an instructor. (25) a. We ignore the natural laws completely and what turned out was a nationwide waste of sources. b. We ignore the natural laws completely and what turned out was a nationwide waste of resources. (26) a. Suppose a student is expected to show up and give his presentation at class soon. He is in such a hurry that he may leave his presentation at home. b. Suppose a student is expected to show up and give his presentation at class soon. He is in such a hurry that he leaves his manuscript at home. (27) a. I think a permanent pursue means nothing stagnant, because whatever career it is, once you devote yourself to it, it will give you pleasure and excitement. b. I think a permanent pursuit means nothing will become stagnant, because whatever career it is, once you devote yourself to it, it can give you pleasure and excitement. (28) a. The magic power of the lucky numbers is just the visions of some people. b. The magic power of the lucky numbers is just the illusions of some people. (29) a. They hope their call numbers, car numbers and other codes will include the number 8. b. They hope their call numbers, car numbers and other codes will all include the figure 8. (30) a. Some people think that certain numbers will bring good luck to them. With such a thought, they always want to get lucky numbers whatever they are doing. b. Some people think that certain numbers will bring good luck to them. With such a belief, they always want to get lucky numbers whatever they are doing. 名词的并列(1) a. This directly causes the problem of the worlds food shortage, housing and lack of jobs. b. This directly causes the problem of the world s food shortage, housing shortage and lack of jobs. 一致(1) a. From the figures, we can see easily that the proportions of grain, fruit and vegetables have declined a little, while that of milk and meat has risen. b. From the figures, we can see easily that the proportion of grain, fruit and vegetables has declined a little, while that of milk and meat has risen. C. Adjectives形容词比较级和最高级(1) a. Husbands and wives are now equal in the family. b. Husbands and wives are now more equal in the family. (2) a. Also, you can hardly fred out that in today s families, women are being busy with dinners whereas men are comfortably sitting in armchairs reading newspapers. b. Also, in today s families it is more and more rare to find women busy with dinners whereas men are comfortably sitting in armchairs reading newspapers. (3) a. And there are times when we fail to do more satisfactory work. b. And there are times when we fail to do satisfactory work. (4) a. I try my best to read more English articles to speed up my reading, because I believe the more I read the faster I can improve my reading comprehension. b. I try my best to read as many English articles as possible to speed up my reading, because I believe the more I read the faster I can improve my reading comprehension. (5) a. So they often spend less time reading, listening and doing some exercises. b. So they often spend less time reading, listening and doing some exercises than others. (6) a. It is my teacher who helps me to overcome a lot more difficulties. b. It is my teacher who helps me to overcome many difficulties. (7) a. In modern society, the relationship between natural science and social science has become more and more close. b. In modern society, the relationship between natural, science and social