书面表达系列讲练.ppt

Welcometomyclass 书面表达系列讲练之怎样使用较高级的词汇赢取高分策略安乡五中彭华 fivebasicstepsonwriting findoutthemainidea 2 graspthekeywords 3 Extendthewords phrasestosentences 4 Rearrangethesesentencesinorder 5 Readthroughthewholepassagetomakesurethatnomistakesaremade Warming up 1 writedownalltheinformation2 useadvancedwordsandvarioussentences3 usesomeconjunctions Whatisagoodpassage 陈述事实等 增强书面表达效果之三大技巧的使用 Lead in 强调句 感叹句 倒装句 祈使句 名词性从句 定语从句 状语从句等 表转折 因果 条件 时间 举例说明 转折but however yet instead ontheotherhand onthecontrary 条件类型if aslongasoncondition that unlessorelse 因果关系since as because of so thus therefore asaresult 表时间when whileafter beforeuntil assoonaslater afterwards 进行举例说明forinstance forexample like suchas 用于陈述事实infact actually asamatteroffacttotellyouthetruth 返回菜单 怎样使用 较高级的词汇 1 注意使用词组 习语来代替一些单词 以增加文采 Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown b Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown Phrases aroundthecornercometotermswithonthegomakesenseofthrowlightuponturnablindeye Idioms 没有付出就没有回报 nopains nogains 有志者事竟成 Wherethere sawillthere saway 2 使用一些地道的英语单词 Victoryisinsight 胜利在望 b Thewayheviewstheworldisverypractical 他看世界的方法很务实 3 避免重复使用某一单词或短语 a Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherprefersto enjoys isfondof loves isinterestedinwatchingtelevision b Hewasdeterminedto madeuphismindtostudyhardinordertocatchupwiththeothers Ex1 Matchthesimplevocabularywiththeadvancedvocabulary 因为because聪明的clever为了inorderto结果asaresult重要的important共同度过spendwith thanksto owingto Intelligent cute forthepurposeof turnout tobe vital significant sharewith Practice underconstruction Ex2 Rewritethesesentencesusingsomecomplicatedwords 1 Hehashadacancer 2 IadmireEdisonalotbecausehedidmuchtotheworld 3 Heishealthy Hehassufferedfrom beendiagnosedacancer IadmireEdisonalotbecauseofhiscontributiontotheworld Heisingoodhealth condition Ex3 Translatethesesentencesusingadvancedwords 1 他对我说的话充耳不闻 HeturnedadeafeartowhatIsaid 2 外面下着倾盆大雨 Itisrainingcatsanddogs 3 1949年中华人民中和国成立了 Theyear1949sawthefoundationofthePRC Agoodideaoccurredtome 4 我突然想到了一个好主意 假如你是李华 你澳大利亚的朋友Johnson来信告知他今年暑假将来中国学习中文 碰巧你所在的大学开设了这样的课程 该课程将于今年 月初开始上课 有初级 中级 高级三个不同层次的班级 每个班都采取小班教学的模式 每班不超过10人 由经验丰富的老师任教 就以上内容请你用英语给Johnson写一封短信 字数 50 60个 Writing mainidea takingacourse runningthecourse keywords threelevers notmorethantenstudents frombeginningtoadvanced 开设课程 月初上课 三个不同层次的班级 每班不超过10人 startinginearlyJune c OuruniversityrunssummerChineselanguagecourseatthreelevelsfrombeginningtoadvanced b AllthecoursesstartinearlyJune e Lessonswillbegiveninsmallclassesofnotmorethantenstudentsbyteacherswhohaverichexperienceinteachingforeignstudents d Ifyoudecidetocomeorneedanymoreinformation doletmeknow a I msogladthatyou replanningtotakeasummercourseinChina DearJohnson I msogladthatyou replanningtotakeasummercourseinChina ouruniversityrunsummerChineselanguagecourseatthreelevelsfrombeginningtoadvanced AllthecoursesstartinearlyJune lessonswillgiveinsmallclassesofnotmorethantenstudentsbyteacherswhohaverichexperienceinteachingforeignstudents Ifyoudecidetocomeorneedanymoreinformation doletmeknow Asithappens Besides What smore asithappens besides what smore runs begiven Summary diction specialpatternsofsentences conjunctions otherwritingskills teachingimportantpoint IV Assignment 假定你是李华 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文 请你根据下列要点写封回信 要点 1