事故类记叙文写作的特点及应对思路.doc

事故类记叙文写作的特点及应对思路读一读My mother drove me to the airport with the windows rolled down. It was seventy-five degrees in Phoenix, the sky a perfect, cloudless blue. I was wearing my favorite shirt-sleeveless, white eyelet lace; I was wearing it as a farewell gesture. My carry-on item was a parka. 第一段：时间： 人物：正在何地点做什么(was doing)天气如何： 人物心情： 常见时间表达 一天：one day, the other day/one day last Friday/about a fortnight ago/in the spring of 2010/once, many years ago/a couple of minutes ago第二天：the next day；the following day/在黎明；正午；半夜-at dawn；noon；midnightIt was almost midnightThe next morning，第二天一早 某年某月某天某小时某分 在1993年9月2日8点半：写作：at half past eight on September 2(nd), 1993.在2006年12月的一个寒冷早上：On a cold morning of December 2006天气表达 Lovely/glorious/fabulousweatherHorrible/miserable/terribleweather Its absolutely freezing(boiling, humid,chilly) outThe day was bright, with a fresh breeze blowing. Every now and then fleecy clouds floated across the skyIt was really hot at but there was a lovely cool breeze.The weather was lovely/nice inand there was quite a breeze 要下雨了 It was clouding overIt was blowing hardIt was a bit foggy开始下雨了 It was raining and it was starting to get dark.It suddenly started pouring down and I had to shelter in a doorway 我被雨淋湿了 Get caught in the rainIm soaked and I just got caught in the rain 心情：高兴 Happy;pleased Feel cheerful Be in a good mood/be in a bad mood Be in quite a good mood Be filled with Happiness/pleasure/joy Face was glowing with happinessDelighted/ecstatic/overjoyed excitedexhilarated One Friday evening I was walking home from school. It was raining and it was starting to get dark. I was waiting at some traffic lights at that time and was feeling really anxious I had just done sth when, suddenly, I heard a scream from somewhere in the lake. 交代动作进行并启下 I was about to do/was going to do when, suddenly, I 感官动词doingI had just done when, suddenly, I noticed I was doing sth when,suddenly,I sawAbout a fortnight ago, I was walking home from school. The weather was lovely/nice outside and there was quite a cool breeze. I was feeling in a good mood. I had just walked past the City Park, when, suddenly, I saw a man in black suit running across the street 一段 Upon hearing that, I ran over toward the lake as fast as possible(hurry to/rush to/dash to)As soon as I I was surprised to find that On a warm morning of December 12th, I was reading a book in BeiHai park. The weather was glorious and there was a lovely breeze. I was in quite a good mood. I had just finished the first chapter when, suddenly, I heard someone crying for help _I was surprised to find that a boy was struggling in the middle of the lake. To my suprise, although there were so many people around him, they just stood by without offering any help. Some were talking to each other; some were afraid because the lake was freezing; I even heard a voice thatWithout any delay(hesitation), I rushed through the crowd, took off my coat and jumped into the water.Lucilky,fortunately, the boy was not far away from the bank (the lake did not seem very deep/shallow), I managed to reach/get him in a coup