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英语作文模板,我去年用的,结合网上搜集的资料加上自己的想法总结的,你们没事可以看下,有些陈述性句子我感觉还是不错的,基本万能吧。补充一点,经验而谈,考英语时候一般发试卷前会把草稿纸先发给你,这时候你可以在草稿纸上把你背好的模版默写到草稿纸上,因为这时候算是大脑最平静的时候,当然你进考场之间还可以把作文模版再背一遍。以免到时候看到不是自己熟悉的作文心里一着急背的有用的陈述性的句子都忘记了。退一万步讲,即使作文不会写,起码蒙也能把背好的陈述性的句子给抄上去充字数。一般你往草稿纸上默写是不会管你的,我考的那会卷纸发下来之前我就把一张草稿纸默写满了,当时写作文的时候一点都不心急,就一个字,爽!补充:看到有人问到用这个模板得多少分的,去年我得的分是不低 根据网上估的选择题 算下来20分的大作文有13+ 可能这里有出入 不过去年的作文比较大众化 没有模板也可以编出来。还有关于说用模板低分的问题,大家可以把开头几句陈述性的句子打乱下顺序,比如图表作文,开头的陈述性句子都是:1There has been a discussion recently about apicture in which _。2_。3_。4The picturesconvey a clear and strong message to us that_。我们可以倒一下过来:4The picturesconvey a clear and strong message to us that_。1There has been a discussion recently about apicture in which _。2_。3_。4The picturesconvey a clear and strong message to us that_。或者你自己写个开头 加个倒装什么的 绝对亮瞎改卷老师的24K真金狗眼2011-12-2应试作文杀招 根据曹其军老师讲稿整理 总原则之一: 应试作文以又臭又长为好:臭全是废话(改卷老师不会看你的内容的);长是很多废话的堆积;所以,考研作文要写到280300字为好。 总原则之二: 要有固定,漂亮的“外表” 分析历年试题,考研出题类型不外乎四种:(问题)单向类、(好现象)单向类、双向类、图表加前三种。 一、(问题)单向 格式总共是三段 段一:S1+S2+S3+S4+S5 (Ssentence)共5句话,一共60字左右,下面给出每句话可以套用的格式,这些漂亮的格式是一定要牢记和熟背的! S1是介绍,固定格式有 1The past few years(decades)have witnessed us (our society) faced with the issue of 2. In recent years there has been a growing concern among the general public over the issue of 3. Nothing can be more serious (upsetting ,outstanding, meaningful) than the issue of S2+S3运用Flex 技巧进行扩展和包装,这些Flex 技巧在后面详细给出,要熟背! 运用statistics: According to a recent survey made by Dr. Cao, head of sociology department at Beijing University,70%.;and 30%.(在此直接用数字,不要写英文,一般写两句随便给出两个数据足够) S4 “同一份调查还表明(又给出另一个数据) The same survey also shows that +(又一数据) S5 收尾,与S1呼应,“由此可见,问题已经非常严重了” It can be concluded, therefore, that the issue ofhas become more and more serious (harmful). 段二:120140字左右 开头:S1 : 10 words 1. To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon (issue,tendency), various reasons (causes) have been put forward. 2.The above problem (phenomenon) may well give rise to some effects (consequences) as follow. S2+S3+S4: 50 words 开始列举了,但是千万不要用那些滥词:first,second,firstly,secondly,印象分会降低,要用些漂亮的词,尽可能用短语: In the very beginning, +S2 In the first place, In the second place, In the end, +S3 +S4 What is more, Last but S2,S3,S4 在简单阐述了各自一个观点之后,就开始进行Flex扩展,扩展可运用Quotation 或是Example达到增加6080字: Quotation: To illustrate the point, lets take a look at what (President Cliton) said in an article :“。” 所以,整个第二段是核心段,基本结构是: 开头S1(10字) + S2 扩展 S3 50字 扩展 共扩展60-80字 S4 扩展 段三(解决方法,suggestions) 100 words S1 15 words 1.We should take immediate measures, for if the present situation continues as before, serious outcome will come up. 2. It is high time that (immediate measures be taken now.) (such a problem be put an end to.) (a reform be made.) S2+S3+S4+S5+S6 100 words or so S2 On one hand, we should urge our government to lay down stricter rules to forbid S3 Should anyone dare to break the law, he to she should be put into jail for 5 years. S4 In addition , our government should put in more money to protect ( encourage) . S5 On the other hand, we should try every means to enhance the public awareness of the issue of. S6 Only through these measures, I firmly believe, will the above-discussed problem be efficiently resolved.二、(好现象)单向类 段一 介绍 60 字 段二 分析 重要性原因(或结果 benefits) 做法 段三 结论(要重视) 段一 介绍 开头:Nothing can be more outstanding (meaningful ) than 接下来运用的扩展和(问题)单向类相同 段二 分析 (1)开头: The above phenomenon may well give rise to some benefits as follow. (2) benefits 社会的 经济的 个人的 (3)做法 As the phenomenon is important ,we can approach it in the following ways. 接下来运用扩展技巧 段三 结论 重视 社会生活 (money, awareness) 个人生活 ( awareness,我的决心等等) 说明:该现象为较大类的,如 希望工程,就可以加上社会的重视;较小的如 交朋友,信念如明灯,就只用个人生活的做法。 开头:It goes without saying that due attention should be paid to the phenomenon. 三、双向类 (一) A1 VS A2 = contrast “对照”即是一个事物的两方面做比较,如看电视的利弊,出国留学等等,A1好,A2坏;或是A1坏,A2好; (二)A VS B = compare 对比 即是两个事物做比较,如锻炼是跑步好还是做操好等,A B同好或是同不好 但是两种题型结构都是一样的,如下: 段一 摆擂台,展现“两”面 段二 回到A (A1) 单向分析 原因,或结果,重要性,做法 段三 回到B (A2) 段四 结尾 选择类 A or B 表态类(用死不表态法) A1 vs A2 段一 1When it comes to the issue (phenomenon) of ( tuition fee;TV effects), different people have radically different opinions. Some people hold onto the idea that . Other people ,however, deem that. 2. As regards the issue of,there is a popular discussion. Some people Other people ,however, 段二 开头: because of the following factors. 接下来和单向类的段二相同 段三 开头 By comparison, A or B In the similar way, By contrast, A1 VS A2 Quite on the contrary, 接下来和单向类段二相同 段四 表态类(死不表态法) Just as any coin has two sides, its no exception with the issue of . Actually the issue is just like a double-edged sword,and we should try every means to avoid its harmfulness while at the same time, making the most of its advantages. 选择类 As discussed above, each side has its advantages and disadvantages. If Im allowed to make a decision, I prefer A to B ( B to A) , for the following reasons. On one hand,. On the other hand, 应试作文杀招 之二 四、图表类 此类作文是近年来的热点,但这类作文只有段一和前三类不同,其他都一样的来写. 每一幅图画(表),尤其是cartoon, 是要表达一个philosophy(哲理),因此,段一就是描述这一哲理的段落,但是描述的时候只用一到两句话来“轻描淡写”说出这个哲理即可。 近年来几乎考的都是cartoon,但是一定不要陷如误区以为要对cartoon进行大量的描写,象今年考的养老的cartoon,其实就两句话描述一下画面就马上引出你的结论,接着就开始拿问题类作文的格式一套,so easy! 段一: 一、“从这幅漫画中我们可以得出这样一个结论:” 1.As can be seen from the cartoon,we are able to arrive at a conclusion that 2. As shown from the above picture, one point is obvious. (1)两张图1Upon carefully observation, we will find that the two pictures above are closely related in meaning. 2In the upper one,_。3In the lower one, however,_。4The pictures convey a clear and strong message to us that_。 (2)一张图1There has been a discussion recently about a picture in which _。2_。3_。4The pictures convey a clear and strong message to us that_。用以上两个模板对付所有的Describe要求的首段应该不成问题了。有模板撑着,只要在划横线的地方随便对图片做一些描写就OK了。二、如果是graph作文,则一定会有数据,就一定会表现出一定的趋势(tendency,trend) There has been a gradual(slow,sharp) increase(decrease) in the number (amount, size ) of over the past few years (decades). There has been increaseof .while there has been decrease of . 将趋势描述出来后,再在graph上找出两个同类数据来支持我们的结论就ok了。不要将graph上的所有数据都列举出来。 段二,段三,段四就和单向或双向作文一模一样了。第二段的提问方式目前有两种:Interrept(点明旨意)和example(举例)。我们分别“对症下药”(1) Interrept(点明旨意)型的:1The picture is based on the realities of society. 2Just like the person in the picture, some people_. 3_。4_。5Such cases can be found in almost all walks of life. (2) example(举例):1Since many of the philosophic principle we adhere to are adstracted from the daily life, it is easy to find that examples in the world around us. 2The idea illustrated in this picture is no exception. 3For example_。4_。5_。6In fact, everyone has surely seen similar evidence of this truth in the their own life.一般有模板撑着,在空缺的地方补上一两句简单的话就可以了。、关键是第三段,大多数情况是Comment(评论),一般都是就事论事,很难找到通打一切的模板。这就显出了曹其军的高明之处。据我们曹爷分析,但凡评论或建议,抽象后就只够两个方面了:好的和不好的。所以只要准备两个高度抽象的评论段落,就OK了。好在我们曹爷已经为我们想好了。请看:(1)对于不好现象的评论:Considering the current issue and worsening situation, we should call for some immediate action imposed by the authorities. In other words, our government of various levels must make relevant plans or rules to guarantee a proper order and justice. Beside, the general public should also be made aware that any prompt solution is of benefit to all. Therefore, its the duty of ordinary people to actively participate in the action.(2)对于好现象的评论:So far its not difficult to see that a positive attitude should be maintained here. For one thing, each one of us must be aware of its significance and possible beneficial effects. This way we can translate into proper action in daily life. For the other, some positive action should also be encouraged in the whole society.把上面两段狂背下来。这里要说的是,在第三段的提问中,Suggest(给建议)就等于Comment(评论),Implication(联系实际),就套第二段的example(举例)即可。三大扩展技巧Flex 扩展技巧是帮助自己在没话可说的时候达到快速增加作文字数的最有效的方法,运用flex的目的就是想让文章长就长,爱短就短。因此可以熟练运用flex来控制字数。 一、Quotation 引用 就是随便找一个人出来,介绍他一番,引用他的话,然后说我就是这样想的。(大约增加50字)而且引用此人的话一定要用:“。”这样的直接引语格式,直接用现在时的时态,避免自己在时态上出错。 To illustrate the point, lets take a look at what President Bush said in an article: “”. 二、Example 举例(可以通过天花乱坠的想象来达到) 如:只要一举例,凡是好事就说象my friend,Jerry,怎么怎么样;而凡是坏事就说象my neighbor 如何如何。 e.g. 2000年考研作文图画是为什么船多而鱼少了呢? 举例:我邻居20人,每人每天吃5条鱼,吃一年下来,可想而知道。据了解,有70%的中国家庭都是这么干的!(这几句用英文写出来,嘿嘿,你看看有多少字了?) 因此从上面这个例子你可以发现你在作文当中写的什么内容不要害怕其是否真实,因为内容改卷老师是不会留意的,你的目标就是把作文写的尽可能的长还有段首段尾的句子足够漂亮。 三、 Statistics 统计数字 就是随便找数字,成立一个统计结果,格式可以参考我们在问题类作文段一时候的举例。 最后强调: 1上面用英文列出的句式一定要熟记背牢,当然,你再另外总结一些类似的句式,尤其是能大量用上考研单词的句式。 2四类作文的结构要熟记,三大Flex要时时会用,常常是无法想象或没有东西可写的时候,Flex就要派上用场。 3训练作文可以从12月上旬开始,就拿历年的考题来,先判断是哪类作文,然后用中文把整篇文章的结构先构思出来,如今年的cartoon,说的是养老足球赛,段一就简单描述一下画面马上引出,现在养老的问题得到社会的越来越多的重视,接着段二就开始分析为什么会出现儿女不愿意养老的原因,第一,第二,第三是因为什么什么,每一点原因进行扩展;段三就提出对策(因为是问题类作文)。 后话:考研英语真的存在一些运气成分,四级没过,不怕,六级没过,更不能怕。你要做的,踏踏实实过好每一天。因为我就是四级没过工科考59分的一个民办三本普通学生不过在研一的时候还是用用功把四级给过了,下半年把学位英语过了,也是刚查到,现在研二在帝都实习了,做it安全方面的,虽不是码农也是一个it民工啊。与后来者共勉吧。加油,你是我的,注定会是我的!1、it is apparent that the author of the drawing tries to reveal to us: a finishing line always leads to another starting point. 显而易见的是,作者的绘画试图向我们揭示:终点线总是导致另一个起点。 2、Such stimulating stories are not rare in our daily life . the most persuasive example is Madam Curies ,a world well-knowned female scientist. She was awarded twice the nobel prize for physics and for chemistry, within less than 10years. It is rather a unique thing in history of science in the whole world 这种刺激的故事并不罕见,在我们的日常生活。最有说服力的例子是居里夫人,一个世界著名的女科学家。她获得了两次诺贝尔奖的物理学和化学,在不到10年。在整个世界的科学历史上这是一个相当独一无二的事情3、The harm caused by tobacco consumption is experiencing a similar upwardtrend-statistics indicates that 30000 people die of smoking and related diseases every year. 烟草消费所造成的危害也日益增长统计数据表明,每年有30000人死于和吸烟有关的疾病。 4、what the drawing is trying to express is very conspicuous ,it shows people who are ,moreover ,at the bottom of the picture are four huge characters, meaning “sports” and “health” ,which targets reminding us that sports and health are intrinsically connected. 这幅图试图表达的信息是非常明显的,这表明人们.,此外,在图的底部四个巨大的字,意思是“运动”和“健康”的目标,这提醒我们,运动和健康是有着内在的联系。5、the picture describes the scene of a very typical family workshop which we might find in every neighborhood in china . 图片描述的情景,一个非常典型的家庭作坊,我们可能会在中国的每一个家庭社区中发现它们。第二段 1、this picture does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon 这幅画反映了一个发人深省的社会现象 2、the message conveyed in the picture seems to be that people tend to underestimate their abilities and magnify difficulties when confronted with challenges. But in fact , it is not the case. 信息传递的画面似乎是因为人们往往低估自己的能力和放大困难时,面临的挑战。但事实上,它不是这样的。 3、nevertheless,given the pessimistic statistics at the present, we can still predict optimistically that tobacco consumption will decline based on several emerging tendencies . in the first place , there is an extensive public awareness of the negative impact of smoking, and as a result ,more people resist the temptation of cigarettes. In the second place, governments are setting more regulations to limit tobacco production . the effectiveness of such policy was testified by the prompt drop of the tobacco production from A to B ,as see in the picture. 然而,目前的数据非常悲观,我们可以乐观地预测烟草消费将下降的基础上出现的几种倾向。在第一个地方,有一个广泛的公众意识的负面影响吸烟,因此,越来越多的人拒绝香烟的诱惑。此外,各国ZF正在制定各项措施限制烟草的生产。可以从画面中看到,从甲地到乙地对这种政策进行了迅速下降的烟草生产。(这个翻译的不是很好) 4、as a result , the integration of poor living conditions and work pressure leads naturally to their poor health and short life-span ,just as the picture shows us. 因此,恶劣的生活条件和巨大的工作压力自然导致他们较差的健康和较短的寿命,正如图中告诉我们的。 5、the picture is thought-provoking in that it endeavors to convince its audience that we can actually exercise anywhere , as long as wu have the awareness of preserving heath by exercise. 这幅画是发人深省的,它竭力说服听众,我们其实可以在任何地方运动,只要我们有意识的锻炼保持健康。6、the artist uses this unique metaphor in order to endow us with the concept that to habitually exercise is like to deposit money bit by bit in the bank. 艺术家用这种独特的隐喻,赋予我们的观念,锻炼身体的习惯就像是把钱存点滴在银行。 7、the sanitation problem of family workshops in the food industry has existed for a long time . it can be mainly attributed to two factors . the first and perhaps key factor is ignorance toward sanitation . the other reason lies on some businessmens short of occupational disciplines . 家庭作坊的卫生问题在食品工业中存在已久。这可以归因于主要因素。第一个也是最重要的因素是无知的卫生。另一个原因在于一些商家缺乏职业纪律。 8、the tremendous contrast presented by the drawing alarmingly reminds us of the detrimental deterioration of oceanic ecosystem by the greediness of mankind. 该图所显示出来的巨大反差使我们警醒地意识到海洋生态系统造成了人类的贪婪 第三段1、I maintain that effective measures must be taken to put an end to this phenomenon .firstly, we need to advocate social responsibility and professional ethics in each field . secondly, strict regulations should be enacted and enforced to create a harmonious and orderly society .only through the combined efforts of government and society can we forcefully and completely climinate this “tumor”. 我认为必须采取有效的措施来结束这种现象。首先,我们需要提倡社会责任和职业道德在每个领域。其次,应该制定和执行严格的规定建立一个和谐和有序的社会。只有通过ZF和社会的共同努力,才能有力和彻底消除其“肿瘤”。 2、judging form the analysis above , we may safely come to the conclusion that the daunting problem demands effective countermeasures. Most importantly, the government needs to implement inspection. In addition, 从以上的分析,我们可以得出结论,严峻的问题,需要有效的对策。最重要的是,ZF需要实施检查。此外. 3、 all in all , I firmly believe that sports are not the business of a small group of athletes, but a life-long pursuit that every person should bear in mind and endeavor to put it into practice . not only do sports benefit individuals , the improvement of nations health would be
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