高考英语 专题解析写作基础 信息整合四招课件.ppt

信息整合四招 高考作文 特别是基础写作 提供的信息点多 但句数有限 熟练掌握以下四种整合信息的方法非常重要 用介词短语合并句子有两种情况我们常常可以用到 1 介词短语作定语 2 介词短语作状语 典型例题 用介词短语将下列句子合并成一句 1 wastewaterismakingtheriverworseandworse 2 thewastewaterisfromafactory 3 thefactoryliesontheriver 合并 wastewaterfromthefactoryontheriverismakingtheriverworseandworse 课堂练习 用介词短语合并每一组句子 然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文 1 xiaxitownisnotbigbutbeautiful ithasanareaofabout8squarekilometers 2 thereisanoldtowerthere thetowerliesintheeastofthetown thereisariverbehindthetower 3 此题用并列结构合并 thesunrisingfromtheriverwasverybeautiful yesterdaywetookabustheretovisitthetower 4 westartedearly wewantedtoenjoythesunriseonthetopofthetower 5 assoonaswegotthere webegantotakephotos xiaxitown withanareaofabout8squarekilometers isnotbigbutbeautiful intheeastofthetownliesanoldtower behindwhichthereisariver thesunrisingfromtheriverwasverybeautiful andwetookabustheretovisitthetoweryesterday westartedearlyforthepurposeofenjoyingthesunriseonthetopofthetower onarrivingthere webegantotakephotos 课堂练习 课外作业 用介词短语合并每一组句子 然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文 1 aprofessorgaveusatalkthismorning hecamefrombeijinguniversity hetalkedabouthowtolearnenglishwell 2 hetoldusofhisowninterestingexperiencesoflearningenglish welaughedalot 3 histalklastedanhour heaskedussomequestions 4 histalkwasvividandinstructive ilearnedalotfromhistalk 5 iwentbackhome idecidedtoworkhardatenglish aprofessorfrombeijinguniversitygaveusatalkonhowtolearnenglishwellthismorning onhearinghisowninterestingexperiencesoflearningenglish welaughedalot duringtheone hourtalk heaskedussomequestions ilearnedalotfromhisvividandinstructivetalk onmywaybackhome idecidedtoworkhardatenglish 课外作业 在写作中 正确使用非谓语动词 无疑为文章增色不少 非谓语动词包括不定式 现在分词和过去分词 使用时应注意以下几点 1 不定式的动作发生在谓语动词之后 一般情况下 尽量用不定式的主动式 2 现在分词表主动 该动作与谓语动词的动作同时发生或紧接着发生 3 过去分词表被动 或表示该动词的动作在谓语动词的动作之前发生 或没有时间性 4 现在分词的被动式表被动 与谓语动词的动作同时发生 典型例题 用非谓语动词将以下各组句子分别合成一句话 1 1 helookedup 2 hesawabirdinthetree 用不定式合并 helookeduptoseeabirdinthetree 2 1 idon tliketheman 2 themaniswearingapairofdarkglasses 用现在分词合并 idon tlikethemanwearingapairofdarkglasses 3 1 thetempleisvisitedbythousandsofpeopleeveryyear 2 itwasbuilt1 000yearsago 用过去分词合并 thetemple built1 000yearsago isvisitedbythousandsofpeople 课堂练习 用非谓语动词合并每一组句子 然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文 1 i mwritingtoyou iwanttoexpressmysincerethankstogoodman 2 yesterdaymorningiwasknockeddownbyacar iwaswalkingontheroadatthattime 3 iwasseriouslyinjured icouldn tstandup 4 mr lisawwhathadhappenedtome hestoppedataxiandsentmetoahospital 5 idon tknowhisname icallhimgoodman i mwritingtoyoutoexpressmysincerethankstogoodman yesterdaymorningiwasknockeddownbyacarwhilewalkingontheroad seriouslyinjured icouldn tstandup luckily amanstoppedataxiandsentmetoahospitalwhenseeingwhathadhappenedtome notknowinghisname icallhimgoodman 课堂练习 课外作业 用非谓语动词合并每一组句子 然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文 1 onthemorningoflastsundayiwenttothepark iwantedtotakeawalkthere 2 afteronehour swalk igottiredandsatdownonastonebytheroad iwantedtohavearest 3 suddenlyisawanant shewastryinghardtomoveanotherantwhowasdead 4 shefailedmanytimes shemanagedtocarryhimaway 5 isawthatlittlecreaturesalsohavesincereloveashumanbeings iwasgreatlymoved 在写作中 我们运用并列连词合并句子是最常用的手段 常用的并列连词有and but or nor so yet for aswellas both and notonly but also either or neither nor and then since等 典型例句 用并列连词合并下列各组句子 1 1 heisafriendinword 2 heisafriendindeed too 用aswellas合并 heisafriendinwordaswellasindeed 2 1 iknowher 2 iamherbestfriend 用notonly butalso合并 notonlydoiknowher but also iamherbestfriend 课堂练习 用并列连词合并每一组句子 然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文 1 nowadays alotofattentionisfocusedoneducation thefactthatmanychildrenfrommigrantworkers familieshavedroppedoutofschoolisignored 2 thesechildrenarewanderinginthestreetsandotherpublicplaces someofthemcommitcrimes suchastheftandrobbery 3 thegovernmentshouldbeawareoftheimportanceofprovidingeducationforallthechildren theaveragepeopleshouldbeawareoftheimportance too 4 childrenfromnativefamiliescanenjoygoodeducation ihopechildrenfrompeasantworkers familiescanalsoenjoygoodeducation 5 childrenfrompeasantworkers familyarepartofoursociety theywillalsoplayanimportantroleinbuildingourcountryinthefuture nowadays alotofattentionisfocusedoneducation yetthefactthatmanychildrenfrommigrantworkers familieshavedroppedoutofschoolisignored thesechildrenarewanderinginthestreetsandotherpublicplaces andsomeofthemevencommitcrimes suchastheftandrobbery 课堂练习 thegovernment aswellastheaveragepeopleshouldbeawareoftheimportanceofprovidingeducationforallthechildren ihopechildrennotonlyfromnativefamiliesbutalsofrompeasant workers familiescanenjoygoodeducation childrenfrommigrantworkers familiesarepartofoursociety andtheywillalsoplayanimportantroleinbuildingourcountryinthefuture 课外作业 用并列连词合并每一组句子 然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文 1 today twoofmyfriendswentfishingbybike ialsowentfishingbybike 2 westartedoffat6 00wegottolongwanglakeat6 30 3 itwasalittlehot thefishdidn tseemtohaveagoodappetite ionlygot10fishduringtheday 4 wehadlunchinalittlerestaurantbythelake wereturnedhomeat5 30p m 5 tiredthoughiwas ifelthappy ithoughtitwasoneofmymostmeaningfuldaysduringthesummerholidays twoofmyfriendsandiwentfishingbybiketoday westartedoffat6 00andgottolongwanglakeat6 30 ionlygot10fishduringtheday asitwasalittlehotandthefishdidn tseemtohaveagoodappetite wehadlunchinalittlerestaurantbythelakeandreturnedhomeat5 30p m tiredthoughiwas ifelthappy ithoughtitwasoneofmymostmeaningfuldaysduringthesummerholidays 课外作业 要使文章漂亮 在写作中不可能不使用主从复合句 最常用的从句是状语从句 主语从句 表语从句 宾语从句和定语从句 典型例句 1 1 chinaisthethirdlargestcountryintheworld 2 everyoneknowsit 用定语从句合并 aseveryoneknows chinaisthethirdlargestcountryintheworld 2 1 itwasraininghard 2 wekeptonworking 用状语从句合并 althoughitwasraininghard wekeptonworking 课堂练习 用主从复合句合并每一组句子 然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文 1 iliveinasmalltown itisabout20kilometersawayfromthecity 2 inthepast weplantedmanytreeshere now notreescanbeseenexceptheavysmokeanddarkrivers 3 tenyearsago manyfactorieshavebeenbuilt heavysmokeandwastewaterfromthefactoriesareletintotheskyandtheriverswithoutanythingdonetothem 4 somemorefactoriesaregoingtobesetup peopletoldmethat 5 thegovernmentshouldtakemeasurestostopthetownfrombeingfurtherpolluted thisismyopinion iliveinasmalltownwhichisabout20kilometersawayfromthecity althoughweplantedmanytreeshere notreescanbeseennowexceptheavysmokeanddarkrivers thereasonisthatsincetenyearsago manyfactorieshavebeenbuilt fromwhereheavysmokeandwastewaterareletintotheskyandtheriverswithoutanythingdonetothem itissaidthatsomemorefactorieswillbesetuphere ithinkthegovernmentshouldtakemeasurestostopthetownfrombeingfurtherpolluted 课外作业 用主从复合句合并每一组句子 然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文 1 thedroughtislikelytocontinuetillmayandnosubstantialrainfallisexpectedaheadoftherainyseason thedroughtstartedfromlastautumn 2 ithasleft18millionresidentsand11 7millionheadsoflivestockintheregionwithwatershortagesandcauseddirecteconomiclossof23 7billionyuan expertsestimate 3 thegovernmentwouldorganizemorethan1 100engineersandworkersfromacrossthecountrytodigwellsinthecountry ssouthwest itisreported 4 morethan1 600wellswillbedrilled theywillprovide200 000cubicmetersofdrinkingwaterperdayfor2millionpeopleand1millionheadsoflivestock 5 1 400ofthewellsareexpectedtofinishdiggingbymay10 oneoftheengineerstoldme thedrought whichstartedfromlastautumn islikelytocontinuetillmayandnosubstantialrainfallisexpectedaheadoftherainyseason expertsestimatethatithasleft18millionresidentsand11 7millionheadsoflivestockintheregionwithwatershortagesandcauseddirecteconomiclossof23 7billionyuan 课外作业 itisreportedthatthegovernmentwouldorganizemorethan1 100engineersandworkersfromacrossthecountrytodigwellsinthecountry ssouthwest morethan1 600wellswillbedrilled whichwillprovide200 000cubicmetersofdrinkingwaterperdayfor2millionpeopleand1millionheadsoflivestock oneoftheengineerstoldmethat1 400ofthewellsareexpectedtobefinisheddiggingbymay10 一 合并句子用以上四种手段合并下列各组句子 然后将这5组句子组成一篇通顺自然的短文 1 atrafficaccidenthappenedatthecrossroadofyuanlinroad yangguangtown theaccidenthappenedat9 00a m onfebruary 2 ataxicrashedintotheleftsideofatruck itcausedonedeathandtwoinjuries 3 thetruckdriverwasslightlyinjured thetaxidriverwaskilledandthepassengerinthetaxiwasseriouslyinjured 4 thetaxididn tstopatthetrafficlights itwentonrunningatahighspeedwhentheredlightwason saidawitness 5 thepolicewanttoknowtherealreason therealreasonisbeinginvestigated atrafficaccidenthappenedatthecrossroadofyuanlinroad yangguangtown at9 00a m onfebruary ataxicrashedintotheleftsideofatruck causingonedeathandtwoinjuries thetruckdriverwasslightlyinjured butthetaxidriverwaskilledandthepassengerinthetaxiwasseriouslyinjured thetaxididn tstopatthetrafficlightsbutwentonrunningatahighspeedwhentheredlightwason saidawitness however therealreasonisbeinginvestigated 一 合并句子 1 昨天 我们在班里进行了一场讨论 1 yesterdaywehadadiscu