高考英语 书面表达专题指导与练习讲评（图画式作文）练习讲评二课件.ppt

2012届高考英语书面表达 图画式作文 练习讲评二 假设你是李华 在一所中学读书 最近收到美国朋友smith先生的来信 他在网上看到两副图片 希望了解更多的有关情况 请结合下图 给他写一封回信 介绍你校的变化 带来变化的原因和自己的感受 dearmr smith iamsogladtohearfromyou andiamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutourschool wenchuanseniorhighschool 第一步 提炼要点 第一幅图 万川中学 2008 2008年汶川大地震给 我们 学校带来的可怕的灾难 所有建筑变为废墟 以上两点可以直接从图片中得出 根据常识可以推断 夺去很多人的生命 搜索表达的词组或句型wenchuanearthquakein2008bringaterribledisasterto beturnedintoruinsclaimalotoflives 第二幅图 万川中学 2011 变化 呈现新面貌 新建了高楼和操场 搜索表达的词组或句型takeonanewlookgreatchangeshavetakenplace tallbuildingsputupastandardplaygroundbuilt 箭头中的文字表示带来变化的原因 其他省市援建 国际国内捐助 当地人民辛勤建设 workersfromotherprovincesandcitiescameandhelpedtorebuilddonationsfromhomeandabroadlocalpeopleworkedharddayandnight 第二步 译点成句 注意多重表达wenchuanearthquakein2008broughtaterribledisastertoourschool theearthquake whichhappenedin2008inwenchuan broughtaterribledisastertoourschool aterribledisasterhappenedtoourschoolin2008 allofthebuildingswereturnedintoruins allofthebuildingsfelldownandintoruins thedisasterclaimedalotoflives alotofpeoplelosttheirlivesinthedisaster ourschoolistakingonanewlook greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourschool 第二步 译点成句 alotoftallbuildingshavebeenputup astandardplaygroundhasbeenbuilt thousandsofworkersfromotherprovincesandcitiescameandhelpedtorebuildourschool donationsfromhomeandabroadweregiventous thelocalpeopleworkedharddayandnighttorebuildourschool 第三步 连句成篇 注意增加一些细节以及过渡词 组 过渡句等 使上下文连贯 asyouknow theearthquake whichhappenedin2008inwenchuan broughtaterribledisastertoourschool allofthebuildingswereturnedintoruinsandthedisasterclaimedalotoflives timefliesandourschoolistakingonanewlook forexample alotoftallbuildings includingastandardplayground havebeenbuilt youmaywonderwhathasbroughtusthechanges firstofall thousandsofworkersfromotherprovincesandcitiescameandhelpedtorebuildit moreover donationsfromhomeandabroadweregiventous suchasmoney food clothesandsoon additionally localpeopleworkeddayandnight whichcontributedtoitsrestoration 第四步 谈谈感受 围绕 给我们学校带来变化的原因 进行展开 地震可怕 但是阻止不了我们重建家园 我 对人们的无私奉献和支援表示感激 作为灾区的一名学生应该怎么做来作为报答 terribleastheearthquakeis itcanneverpreventusfromrebuildingourhomes i mverygratefulforeveryone sselflessdevotionandassistance asastudentinthedisaster strickenarea i vemadeupmymindtostudyhardertorepaypeople sdeeplove 因为是书信 最后还要加上客套话 如 ihopeyouwillcometoseeforyourselfoneday 参考范文 dearmr smith iamsogladtohearfromyou andiamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutourschool wanchuanseniorhighschool asyouknow theearthquake whichhappenedin2008 broughtaterribledisastertoourschool allofthebuildingswereturnedintoruinsandthedisasterclaimedalotoflives timefliesandourschoolistakingonanewlook forexample alotoftallbuildings includingastandardplayground havebeenbuilt youmaywonderwhathasbroughtusthechanges firstofall thousandsofworkersfromotherprovincesandcitiescameandhelpedtorebuildit moreover donationsfromhomeandabroadweregiventous suchasmoney food clothesandsoon additionally localpeopleworkeddayandnight whichcontributedtoitsrestoration terribleastheearthquakeis itcanneverpreventusfromrebuildingourhomes i mverygratefulforeveryone sselflessdevotionandassistance asastudentinthedisaster strickenarea i vemadeupmymindtostudyhardertorepaypeople sdeeplove ihopeyouwillcometoseeforyourselfoneday yours lihua 同步练习 为纪念汶川大地震三周年 某英文报发起关于灾区新貌的征文活动 请根据以下图片提示 以 greatchanges 为题 用英语写一篇短文应征 内容要点如下 1 某中学灾后三年来的变化 如教学与活动场所 以及师生精神面貌等 2 发生变化的原因 3 你的感想 注意 1 短文标题与开头已给出 不计入总词数 2 可根据图片提示适当发挥 3 词数 120左右 greatchangesiamdeeplyimpressedbythegreatchangesthathavetakenplaceintheschooloverthepastthreeyears 参考范文 greatchangesiamdeeplyimpressedbythegreatchangesthathavetakenplaceintheschooloverthepastthreeyears onmay12 2008 asevereearthquakedestroyedalmosteverythingintheschool leavingbadly damagedbuildings itisnow however takingonanewlook tallbuildingshavebeenputup includingclassroomandlaboratorybuildings andalibrary thereisalsoanewly builtstandardplayground inthenewenvironment teachersandstudentsarelivinghappilyandworkinghard itisreallyamazingthattheonce ruinedplacehasnowturnedintoabeautifulschool fulloflife obviously withoutthehelpoft