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编制人：杨红 段慧 审核人：_ 责任领导 _ 班级 姓名: 小组评价 教师评价 Book 7写作实战演练UNIT 1 假如你是李华，是英文黑板报的负责人，学校要求你在励志栏里介绍一位身残志坚的大学生。李智华（一名优秀的大学生）1984年生，小时候因一场大火失去双臂，成为残疾人面对残疾，开朗乐观，没有闲坐着顾影自怜，学会了适应身体的残疾1、因照顾生病的母亲，没有机会上高中，却靠自学，2003年考上大学 ；2、2004年， 被中国逻辑与语言函授学校评为“十佳学习之星”同时，还成为青少年的好榜样1、最重要的是，积极去适应身体的残疾；2、积极、乐观、坚强，残疾人也能像其他人一样过上丰富多彩的生活。有用的词汇及句型。Meeting with her disability, she is outgoing and has learned to adapt to her disability rather than just sit around feeling sorry for herself.adapt to(介词+VING)， sit around，feel sorry for ，have gain access to do，pass the university entrance exams ，be awarded ，“star of ten excellent students” ，Chinese Logical and Linguistic Correspondence School（中国逻辑与语言函授学校） ，lead a rich and full life，_UNIT2Last week, our class had a discussion about_(是否我们应该拥有机器人。) _(大家的观点各异).Some people suggest that we should have robots. They think_(尽管机器人仅仅是机器却能够使我们的生活更方便。) Also，_(机器人能帮助我们做家务和一些危险的工作。). Whats more, they are very clever._(当我们伤心难过时，机器人会安慰我们。) However,_(另外一些人持有不同的观点。)They _(坚持认为机器人会使我们变得懒惰、笨拙。)_, (在我看来) the first opinion is reasonable because robots are not only hardworking and reliable but also can go to the places that humans cannot.Unit3 短文改错（共有十处错误）I often dream of being a teacher. I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, play with them, watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. Without enough knowledges, you can never teach good. Besides, you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him. Though I am a student now, but I will work very hard to make my dream comes true.UNIT4假如你是李华，你的朋友Kate 来信询问，前几天你作为青年志愿者参加了学校组织的到某山区小学捐赠学习用品的情况。请你写信介绍当天活动见闻。信的开头和结尾已经给出。不限制句子数写 作 要 点所见学校简陋，教室用木头和泥石块建成，没有教学设备和多媒体，仅有教科书和黑板所做分发捐赠的图书、文具；送礼品，分享午餐所闻孩子们来自偏僻的村庄，渴望刻苦学习、改变生活，否则，就会过贫困的生活 所感志愿工作是一项殊荣(）it is a privilege to have participated in the voluntary workDear Kate, Thank you for your letter. It was wonderful to hear from you. I know you are dying to know all about my voluntary work which I participated in the other day, so Ive included a video with some photos which will help you picture the primary school._ By the way, its getting late and I have to preview tomorrows lessons and do my homework. Please write soon. UNIT5面对中国学生的“出国热”，人们褒贬不一。根据以下提示谈谈出国留学的利与弊，并表明你对这一现象的观点。词数120左右。有些人认为: 1.在国外学习给人新的体验,令人很兴奋.2.不仅能提高英语水平,还能了解国外的文化和习俗,增长见识.3.可以学习国外的先进文化和技术.另一些人认为:1.开始很难适应国外的生活,尤其是跟别人交流很难.2.在国外生活可能会觉得很孤单,无助.3.在国外学习要学会照顾自己.否则,会有很多麻烦.相关词汇study abroad gain more knowledge/broaden ones horizon(增长见识), learn to be independent advanced technology, adjust to/adapt to /get used to, feel lonely, helpless 表达观点的句式：1.Some people are in favor of studying abroad./ Some people think studying abroad has more advantages than disadvantages.2.Others are against studying abroad. They think/Others think studying abroad is not good for us.3.As far as sb is concerned/In my opinion写作实战演练 参考答案UNIT1Born in 1984 ，Li Zhihua is an excellent university student who lost both her arms in a fire when she was just a little girl. Meeting with her physical disability, she is outgoing and has learned to adapt to her disability rather than just sit around feeling sorry for herself. Though she had no access to receive any education from the high school because of taking care of her sick mother, she passed the university entrance exams by learning herself in 2003. What more, a year later, she was awarded “star of ten excellent students” of Chinese Logical and Linguistic Correspondence School and set a good example to teenagers. Above all, she is active, optimistic and determined and what she has experienced in her life is that the disabled can lead as rich and full a life as others do. UNIT2Last week, our class had a discussion about whether we should have robots. Opinions vary from person to person.Some people suggest that we should have robots. They think that robots could make our life more convenient though they are just machines. Also, robots can help us do housework and some dangerous work. Whats more, they are very clever and when we feel very sad they can give us comfort. However, other people hold a different point of view. They insist that robots can make us become lazy and clumsy.In my opinion, the first opinion is reasonable because robots are not only hardworking and reliable but also can go to the places that humans cannot.UNIT3I often dream of being a teacher. I dream of standing in(改成on) the platform in the classroom and give(改成giving) lessons to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, play with them, (此处添加and) watch them growing up. I am always young when I was (改成am)staying with them. I know there(改成it) is not easy to be a teacher. Without enough knowledges(改成knowledge), you can never teach good(改成well). Besides, you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him(改为them). Though I am a student now, but (but去掉)I will work very hard to make my dream comes (改为come) trueUNIT4Dear Kate, Thank you for your letter. It was wonderful to hear from you. I know you are dying to know all about my voluntary work which I participated in the other day, so Ive included a video with some photos which will help you picture the primary school. It is a simple school. Its classrooms are made of wood pieces and muddy stones. There is no teaching or multi-media equipment in the classroom, but just some textbooks and a blackboard. However, the children are trying to adapt to these conditions. The moment we arrived at the school we distributed the donated books and learning supplies. Then we gave presents and shared the fast lunch food with them. I chatted with some of the children. They come from the remote villages . They are dying to make a difference to their lives by studying hard. Otherwise, they will still lead a poor life in the future. I think it is a privilege to have participated in the voluntary work and it is really a pleasure to help others in need. By the way, its getting late and I have to preview tomorrows lessons and do my homework. Please write soon. UNIT5Nowadays, studying abroad is becoming more and more popular. Hence, people often hold discussions about whether we should go abroad to have furth