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Howtoteachwriting February29 2012Cindy 施礼 JincaiNorthSecondarySchool Lecture LanguageSkills Speaking Listening Writing Reading Theproductapproach Theprocessapproach PartI processandproduct Anexample8AU1Howtowriteapersonalletter Theproductapproach Thisisatraditionalapproach inwhichstudentsareencouragedtomimicamodeltext whichisusuallypresentedandanalysedatanearlystage Thestagesofproductwriting ThewaystoimprovemyEnglish Writing Example2 Theprocessapproach paysattentiontothevariousstagesthatanypieceofwritingthatgoesthrough Inexamwritingtasks thestudents abilitytoplanquicklyandlaterreadbackthroughwhattheyhavewritteninordertomakeanynecessarycorrectionsisextremelyimportant Lookatthewritingprocessbelowandputitinalogicalorder thinkingaboutthetopic whoyouarewritingtoandwhymakingnotes researcheditingforfinaldraftbrainstormingideasmakingthefirstdraftplanningandoutlining Theprocessofwriting thinkingaboutthetopic whoyouarewritingtoandwhy2 brainstormingideas3 makingnotes research4 planningandoutlining5 makingthefirstdraft6 editingforfinaldraft II Theprocessofwriting Planning Drafting Editing FinalVersion 1 Planning Generatingideasbybrainstorminganddiscussion Selectthebestideasforinclusion Decideontheinformationforeachparagraphandtheorderoftheparagraphs notedownvariousideas thinkingaboutthetopic whoyouarewritingtoandwhy Wecanaskstudentstoorganiseideasintoamindmap spidergram orlinearform Thisstagehelpstomaketherelationshipofideasmoreobvious whichhelpsstudentswiththestructureoftheirtexts Whatdoyouoftendoonyourcomputer Forstudy Forentertainment Forcommunication Forstudy typearticles makepowerpointpresentations searchforusefulinformation reade booksandnewspapers learnEnglish calculatemathsproblems Weoften onthecomputer Computersare toourstudies forentertainment playgames watchmovies listentomusic dosomeshopping editandwatchphotos booktickets Weoften onthecomputer Computersmakeourlivesmore forcommunication sendinstantmessages chatwithfriends sende mailsore cards Weoften onthecomputer Computersmakeit forustocommunicatewitheachother 2 Drafting writeoutaroughversion Thisisdoneinclassandfrequentlyinpairsorgroups 3 Editing self check peercheck Whathastobechecked TheWritingEvaluationCriteriaisveryimportant writeacleancopyofthecorrectedversion 4 Finalversion Itwillbedisplayedonthebackwalloftheclassroomorpublishedontheteacher blog Asummaryofthedifferences PartII Criteria TheWritingEvaluationCriteriaofGradeNine Gettingonlineisn tagoodidea Inmyopinion gettingonlineisn tagoodideaforteenagers First therearesomepornographicpicturesorarticlesonthenet whichwoulddoharmtous Second somestudentsspendtoomuchtimechattingontheInternetsothattheyhavenotimetofinishtheirhomework What smore quiteafewteenagershavebecomeaddictedtocomputergames Asaresult theyhavelostinterestintheirstudiesandgotpoormarksinexams Inaword Ibelievethatit snotagoodideaforteenagerstogetonline Howtobeagoodlearner Asscienceandtechnologyaredevelopingquickly wemustkeeplearningsoasnottofallbehind Buthowcanwebegoodlearners Everyonewantstobeagoodlearner butfewpeoplecanreallybecomeapersonwholikeslearningandknowshowtolearn Ithinkifwewanttobegoodlearners wemustfollowthesetips First weshouldalwaysaskquestions Thatcanhelpuslearnmorethings Next weshouldthinkmoreandexplorethethingsthatwearenotsure Inmyopinion thebestwaytolearnistolearnsomethingsthatwearereallyinterestedin Allinall wemusttryourbesttolearnasmanythingsaspossible Weshouldremember oneisnevertoooldtolearn Successinmyeyes Inmyopinion successisastrongfeelingwhichmakesusfeelhappyandproud Ithinksuccessistoreachthegoalswhichyouhaveset Forexample KobehaswonfivechampionsinNBA Heissuccessful isn the Whenhegotthechampions hereachedhisgoal Successalsomeansthatyourdreamshavecometrue Asweallknow Langlang thefamouspianistisverysuccessful Hehadhisconcertsindifferentcountriesandeveryoneenjoyedthem Asamusician hisdreamcametrue Ialsohavedreamsandgoals Toachievemysuccess Iwillbemorediligent Toachievemysuccess Iwillnevergiveup Toachievemysuccess Istillhavealongwaytogo Memorycorner Thereisacornerineveryone smind Memorythereisjustlikeanoldmusicbox classic butnice Andwhenyouopenit yesterdayoncemore IstillrememberthefirstdayofmytriptoEngland TheplaneflewsmoothlythroughthecloudsandlandedsafelyonthelandofLondon Ihadn tbeenasleepduringthewholeflightbecauseIwasveryexcited PartIII Teacher swork ASample Supposeyouhavereceivedaletterfromyourgoodfriend Mike whowasaGrade9student Inhisletter hetoldyouhehadsomeproblemsinhislifeandstudy Hefeltdepressedbecausehealwayshadalotofhomeworktodoandthereweretoomanytestsatschool What smore itwassonoisyathomethathecouldn tfocushisattentiononhisschoolwork CanyouwritealettertoMikeandgivehimsomeadviceaccordingtoyourownexperiences 1 DearMike Howareyou I mveryhappytoreceiveyourletter Iknowyour 2 problem AsaGradeNinestudent Ihavethesameproblems ThoughIusedtoworryaboutthem 3 butI vesolvedthemalready I dliketogiveyousomeadvice Ourteachersalsoaskustodoalotofhomework butIthink 4 finishitintimeifwe 5 useallofourtime Weshouldnotwasteanytime 6 playortalkatschool Iamsurewecanfinishthehomeworkveryquicklyaslongaswe 7 keepourmindonit It snot 8 surprisedthatGrade9studentshavealotoftests Thosetestsarelikeexercises Theydonotdecideyourfuture Don tworrytoomuchaboutthemarks Justtryyourbest Youtoldmethatitwasverynoisyatyourhome IsitbecauseyourparentsarewatchingTVwhileyouaredoingyourhomework Ifitistrue 9 whydon thaveatalkwithyourparentsaboutthisproblem Ithinktheywillunderstandyouandsupportyou Justfollowmyadvice andIthinkyou llbefine 10 yourssincerely Jack Usingthecorrectioncode Date PluralformConj Isitnecessaryinanadverbialclauseofconcession Doyouneedasubjectandamodalverbhere Is useallofourtime appropriatehere Thegerund WW wrongwordWW surprised surprising Seethedifference Doyouneedasubjecthereordoyouwanttouseanothersentencestructuretoexpressyoursuggestion Reg Isthisclosingappropriateforapersonalletter Teacher sCommentsandsuggestions Thisisawell writtenpaper containingsomepersuasiveadvice Theletterstartswithapropergreeting Theconstructionofthebodyisalsoclear keepingeachparagraphengaging Anditcouldbeimprovedifthefirstparagraphwasdividedintotwo Thenyouwouldhaveanopeningparagraphandeachofthefollowingthreeparagraphscontainedapieceofadvice Sinceitisaletter IwishIcouldseethedateonthetopleftofthepaper Ifyoupractisemoreontheaccuracyofsyntaxandclauses suchastheobjectclause theadverbialclauseofconditionandtheadverbialclauseofconcession andselectappropriateandeffectivevocabularytoexpressyourideas youwillbeabletodobetter Goodjob Collectthecommonmistakesandaskstudentstocorrecttheminclass Commonmistakesin ThebestgiftIhaveeverreceived 1 Thecandlesbroughtmelight warmandcomfortable partofspeech 2 Atmyfifthbirthday myfathergavemealovelypuppy wrongpreposition 3 IfellsoexcitedwhenIsawthepresent spellingmistake 4 Theelectronicdictionaryissilveranditissmallenoughtoputitintomypocket necessaryhere 5 Ihavetobecareful becausemymotherdoesn tallowmereadinthebed infinitive Studentsworkingroupsandhelpweakeronescorrectacomposition Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic Ilikereading Whatdoyouliketoread Whydoyouliketoreadthem Whendoyouusuallyreadthem Whatcanyoulearnfromthem IlikereadingnewspapersIlikereadingnewspapersverymuch Therearemanynewsinthenewspapers Ireaditeveryevening SometimesIreaditinthemorning Icanknowwhathappenedeveryday Icanalsolearnmanythingsinit likehowtomakefriendswithothers howtomakemistakesandsoon Nowreadingnewspapersisbecomingoneofmyinterests Correctthegrammaticalmistakes Ilikereadingnewspapers Bysomebody Ilikereadingnewspapersverymuch Therearemanynewsinthenewspapers Ireaditeveryevening SometimesIreaditinthemorning ismuch newspapers them Icanknowwhathappenedeveryday Icanalsolearnmanythingsinit likehowtomakefriendswithothers howtomakemistakesandsoon knowaboutwhatishappeningallaroundtheworld byreadingnewspapers suchashowtomakefriends howtobeawell behavedteenager Nowreadingnewspapersisbecomingoneofmyinterests Nowreadingnewspapershasbecomeoneofmyhobbies Editing Ilike enjoy amkeenon readingnewspapersverymuch 6 Thereismuchnewsinnewspapers Icanknowaboutwhatishappeningallaroundtheworldeveryday Q2 Q1 I mfondofreadingnewspapersbecausethereislocalnews nationalnews worldnews sportsnewsandentertainmentnewsinthem Icanknowaboutwhatishappeningintheworldeasilybyreadingnewspapers Ireadnewspaperseveryevening SometimesIreadtheminthemorning Asastudent Ialwayshavelotsofhomeworktodo SoIusuallyspendhalfanhourreadingtheeveningpapersbeforeIgotobed NowReadingnewspaperseverydayhasbecomeoneofmyhobbies Q3 Icanalsolearnmanythingsinit suchashowtomakefriends howtobeawell behavedteenager Q4 Fromallkindofreports Iu