2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习(一)个人情况.doc

2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习（一）个人情况一、与专题相关的话题项目：Personal information/ Daily routines/ personal interests/ feelings and moods二、与话题相关的知识准备：1.相关单元：七上Unit 2 Daily life, Unit8 Collecting things七下Unit 8 From hobby to career八下unit 8 Life in the future2.语法相关：一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时3.词语相关：描写人物外貌特征的形容词有：tall，short, old, young, thin/slim, strong, heavy, beautiful, attractive, handsome, fat/plump, well built等描写人物性格特征的形容词：kind, friendly, smart, outgoing，funny, cute, serious, clever, quiet, lovely, honest, shy, lovely，hard-working, generous, careful, confident, active等。描写兴趣爱好时可能用到的单词或短语有：hobby, favorite , be interested in, be fond of, enjoy /like doing, be keen on ,be friendly to ,preferto等。4.经典句型：I study at Middle School.Im in Class Grade .I am good at .My best subject is .I am keen on .I am interested in .My hobby is doing.I enjoy doing very much.I think it is to.I study very hard at school.I want to be in the future.I used to be Im interested in I often I practicevery hard. I am glad I want towhenIgrow up. My favourite subject is You are the candle lighting my future.（你就像一支蜡烛,照亮我的前程）二、经典例题：（2009年 广州市中考考题）你叫李华，你校将开展一个题为“All about me”的英文写作活动。请按要求写一篇英语短文。内容包括：1、你的爱好；2、你的优点和缺点；3、用具体事例说明你的某个优点或缺点。注意：1、词数80左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）；2、不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。All about meMy name is Li Hua and Im from Class 2, Junior 3. .解题思路：1.审题：a.本文共有3 个要点b.时态主要采用一般现在时c.人称是_I_2.可能用到的短语和句型a.你的爱好enjoy /like doing,be friendly to ,preferto等。My hobby is doing.I am keen on .b.你的优点hard-working, generous, careful, confident, activeMy best subject is .I am good at .My favourite subject is c.你的缺点Myweakestsubject is .I ampoorat .3.成文：I like playing football and basketball. I am always playing basketball onP.E. lesson. Atmy free times, I often play football with my friends. We are enjoyourself. At study, I goodat maths, but I poorin English. I cant get high grade at my English. I cant get high grade at my English, nowIam domore English exectriseso that I can improve my English. I should do more in my study.点评：整篇文章对要点的把握基本到位，但是拼写和简单的语法错误较多。部分句子的表达过于中式4.检查思路：完成作文自查表：1.如果没有问题的，请在项目后打。2.如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。项目第一次自查第二次自查布局与内容要点人称 时态、主谓一致动词搭配、介词搭配拼写错误好词好句分项分档评分表项目要素给分表内容6分切合题意，体现要点6-5554.54.54-3.53-2.521.510有所发挥准确性6分语 法6-5.554.54-3.543-2.521.510词 汇机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误流畅性3分结构3-2.52-1.5210.50000自评总分：10.55.参考例文：My name is Li Hua and Im from Class 2, Junior 3. I like pop music. Ive collected a lot of CDs and I always do my homework with music on. My friends think I am a happy boy and they like to spend time with me. But Im not a very hard-working student like some of my friends. I often go to movies during weekends, sometimes I watch TV late at night and play sports a lot even before important exams. My parents feel worried about me, but I still do well at school.Maybe I should study harder, then I can learn better.(增加正能量，给老师好印象0三、练习：假如你叫李芳，昨天从报纸上看到海珠区要组织一次“全民学英语”活动，在暑假要招聘一批英语志愿者的广告，你想应聘。请你用英语写一封简短的书信，根据表格提供信息，表示愿意为广州市民服务。姓名李芳年龄15身高160cm健康状况良好性格外向（outgoing）爱好体育运动特长英语,唱歌，跳舞其他情况E-mail address：Dear Sir,I read your advertisement in the newspaper yesterday, I am writing to tell you Id like to work as a volunteer for the Haizhu district.注意：1.词数80-100个2.文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名3.可适当发挥。解题思路：1.审题：a.本文共有个要点b.时态主要采用c.人称是_2.可能用到的词语（写在要点旁边）_3.可能用到的句型_4.成文：_检查思路：完成作文自查表：1.如果没有问题的，请在项目后打。2.如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。项目第一次自查第二次自查布局与内容要点人称 时态、主谓一致动词搭配、介词搭配拼写错误好词好句参考例文：Dear Sir,I read your advertisement in the newspaper yesterday, I am writing to tell you Id like to work as a volunteer for the Haizhu district.My name is Li Fang. I am fifteen, andI am 160 cm. I am an outgoing girl,so I would liketomakefriends with others.In my free time, I like doing some sports,such asrunning, swimming, playing table tennisand so on.I think it is good for ourhealthand I am quite healthy. I am also good at singing and dancing.My bestsubjectisEnglish. I alwaysfind the chance topractise my English. And I won the first prize