高考英语 书面表达课件.ppt

guidanceonwriting 审题 logic 逻辑性 keywords 信息词 keysentences 信息句 genre 体裁 person 人称 tense 时态 请仔细观看左边漫画 结合自己的实际生活 写一篇关于 节能环保 的英语短文 要求 1简要描述图中的现象 2分析产生这种现象的原因 如 没有良好的习惯等 3提出你的建议 提示 图中在睡觉的是小明 妇女是他的母亲 ascanbeseeninthepicture lateatmid night xiaoming asleepwithtv whichalwaysannoyshismother andhismotherenters himforforgettingtoturntvoff task1 amodelwithsomemissingkeywords answersvaries falls on complaining para 1 case sense awareness para 2 thepictureistryingtoconvinceusofafactthatwearewastingelectricityandignoretheimportanceofsaving resources whatisitthataccountsforthe above firstly lackof ofsavingenergyisamajorcause which ofcourse leadstosuchabadhabit secondly therebeingnostrictlawstoobeyinsociety thepublicwilleasilyforgettheirduty energy environmentally para 3 therefore ifweintendtolivean friendlylife weshouldmakeitourhabittoturnoffelectricalequipment inaword whatweshoulddoisto ourenvironmentthroughsmallthingsinourdailylife everytinyactioncounts protect withthedevelopmentofscience ourearthisbecomingdirtierthanbefore butmanypeoplehavenotrealizedtheproblemnow tojudgewhethertheycanbeusedinthewriting illogical thepictureistalkingaboutmotherandtheson thesonissleepingandthemotheristryingtoturnoffthetv hearingthesoundof zzz xiaoming smothercametothetvandshoutedangrily whydoyoualwaysforgettoturnofftv butthereplyfromxiaomingwasjustmore zzzzz toosimple informal task2 makealistofkeysentencesinthemodelwriting ascanbeseeninthepicture thepictureistryingtoconvinceusofafactthat whatisitthataccountsfortheabovecase firstly secondly therefore ifyouintendto inshort inaword whatweshoulddois everytinyactioncounts bevaluable task3 let simitatemorekeysentences 1 xiaomingfallsasleepwith leavingtvon whichalwaysannoyshismother 模仿要点 with n 宾补 模仿1 somebodyissleepingintheclassnow hiseyesareopen somebodyissleepingintheclassnow withhiseyesopen 模仿2 thepigisstandinghere withsunglasseson 2hismotherentered complaininghimforforgettingtoturntvoff 模仿要点 主句 现在分词 作状语 模仿1 thechildrenwatchedthegameandstoodforanhour thechildrenstoodforanhour thegame watching 模仿2 thebabyjumpsintotheair scoreagoal scoreagoal进球 hopingto attemptingto aimingto 模仿3 男孩手拿一本书坐在桌边 正努力在书中寻找如何解开粽子的方法 theboyissittingatthetable findhowto zongzi 模仿要点 with复合句 现在分词 作状语 withabookinhishand tryingto unwrap 3thepictureistryingtoconvinceusofafactthatwearewastingelectricity 模仿要点 句型thepictureistryingtoconvinceusofafactthat 同从 模仿1 这幅画试图让我们相信这样一个事实 很多年轻人正失去日常生活中的动手能力thepictureistryingto thatmanyoftheyoungarelosingtheirbasichands onabilityineverydaylife convinceusofafact 模仿2 老师想要让我们相信 通过努力我们可以成为最棒的学生 theteacheristryingtoconvinceusofafactthatwecanbetopstudentsthroughhardwork efforts 4what isitthat accountsforthecaseabove 模仿要点 强调句的特殊疑问句 模仿1 到底谁愿意借这么大一笔钱呢 iswillingtolendyousuchalargesumofmoney whoisitthat 模仿2 到底在哪儿你才能借到这么大一笔钱呢 youcanborrowsuchalargesumofmoney