雅思写作‘分论点扩展’--从生活从故事到作文.doc

写作分论点扩展-从生活从故事到作文（按话题分类写作词汇）l 吃青蛙1. should humans exploit small animals as they wish?不行，因为这样会破坏食物链。For example, in some cultures citizens eat frogs, because they believe the meat is delicious. However, this practice has actually hurt/hindered their own benefits in the way where frogs prey on pests such as mosquitoes and flies. Consequently hunting frogs means they are more bothered by the pests. Therefore, in these places, the governments have implements some bans on the sales of frogs. -另外一个吃吃果子狸civet cat不行，因为可能造成不可挽回的灾难性的传染病。In terms of the following example, the answer is no as well. The reason is that eating animals may cause irreversible and catalystic epidemics. -还有一个吃鲸鱼2. some people still do not protect animal and plants. Why? How?3. some people still do not protect the environment. Why? How?回到frogs-原因是因为好吃。In other words, many people hold the value of their own benefits prior to others, because they do not realize the side-effect of their activities. To be specific, (生物链和害虫的例子)。Therefore, government should take certain measures to strengthen citizens awareness of ecological circles. l 全球化2. 坏处：Any integration undermines the diversity in the world. 同样的道理：In the same way/To follow the same deduction,A. 统一语言的好坏A unified language tends to have negative effects on the preservation/development of ethnic minorities tongues. For example, CCTV1, Chinas national TV channel ever reported that a minor language can be only spoken by one person thanks to, ironically, the over-spread of mandarin Chinese. However, various national governments and relevant international organizations such as United Nations Organization of Education, Science and Cultures have been aware of the issue and adopted certain measures to help these minor languages preservation. B. 国外食品的进口/国外快餐的影响/国际贸易的发展The entry of foreign products into a local market tends to have negative effects on the development of local traditional businesses. For example, McDonalds and KFC have distracted much of consumers attention from traditional foods. However, in the long run, this development will promote healthy competition among various brands in domestic markets. Furthermore, local brands will have to improve their products and services, which finally helps the local economy and the enrichment of citizens material life. B. 国际关系的重要性/国际援助对发展中国家的影响。The political or economic interference of developed countries into developing countries (and 同化政策assimilation policy) tends to have negative effects on the development of the developing countries national characteristics and independent decisions. It has been repeatedly reported that some developing countries get certain financial aid under additional terms of unfairness, namely, they have to sell certain raw materials at lower prices. However, in the long term, the developing countries will finally get away with the control of developed countries, as can be seen in the development of Japan after the Second World War. IMF International Monetary Fundl 全球化的好处国际语言/贸易/食品/关系的一些相关活动tend to 对于有助于不同民族、宗教和文化之间的交流，从而更好的mutual understanding. 进一步来讲，理解是解决争端的根源。总的来说，这些活动都有助于长期的世界和平。_ and relevant activities tend to help the exchanges between different nations, religions and cultures, and hence to reach better mutual understanding, which lies in the source of solutions to disputes. Generally speaking, this trend has some positive effects on the establishment of long-term world peace.3. 教师的不可替代性/电脑技术英特网的发展l 网络美女&qq聊天 VS 老婆&见网友网络的好处：l 什么样的美女都有信息全写论文，以前去图书馆翻书，现在googleShould libraries be eliminated, because the Internet has replaced its function? 07-2-10E-book can replace traditional books? Cet6 2008-6The benefits of the Internet? Cet6 2007-12In which areas, is the Internet more important than teachers? 07-5-19, 08-10-23运用：因特网提供最广泛的信息。例子，过去写论文要去图书馆翻书找很久，现在只用2分钟去google一下，所有相关信息一目了然。The Internet provides the widest range of information. For example, decades ago, a writer has to visit libraries and keep searching for probably hours for right reference books while nowadays can help him out within 2 minutes. l 网络美女有可能是照片处理过的，整容了不好看不出来信息有真有假In which areas are teachers more important? 07-5-19, 07-07-14The defects of the Internet. 运用：网络的信息广泛正是其缺点，因为无法判断信息的真伪。The wideness of information is the defect of the Internet information, because it is very hard to distinguish the false from the true. l 美女看多了分心了distraction,Distraction除了美女还有什么，online games, qq聊天, 娱乐节目entertaining programs恶性的distraction不恰当的内容improper material例如; violence, pornographyThe Internet can replace classroom teaching/ lectures?当然答案是NO，在现阶段contemperarily. The drawback of the Internet.运用：英特网上充满了诱惑，比如说臭名昭著的网络游戏，使无数学生废弃学业。The Internet features a whole range of temptations, namely, the infamous online adventures that numerous students have indulged themselves in giving up their study. For example, many students have indulged themselves in online adventures so that they give up their study. 运用2：05.01.22 Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and suggest some solutions.其中一个重要原因是越来越多的媒体包括英特网、电视对于非法行为的描述，比如说暴力，毒品和卖淫，过于细致。很多缺乏判断力的青少年容易误入歧途。One major reason is that more and more media including TV and the Internet describe material involving illegal activities, such as violence, drugs, and prostitution in an over-detailed way. Many youths who are lack of ability to distinguish the right from the wrong easily err into wrong paths. 扩展运用08.01.12 Some people think the best way of reducing crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, think there are other better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.08.08.16 = 05.07.23Detailed description of crimes on newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society, so this kind of information should be restricted on media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?l 美女看多了2得病：相思病和红眼病More and more people are doing their work and study at home through the Internet. What are the possible effects? 2007-03-31英特网的坏处: 影响人们的心理健康和身体健康 （例子见：科技类话题）l 相对来说，老婆好些，因为看了可以抱不会有心理病，也不会有假老师可以面对面交流，解决问题，改作业当面传授细节；信息的真实性和准确性相对较高运用1：课堂教学提供和老师面对面的交流，通过这种交流可以更加有效的帮助学生提高成绩。一个非常有代表性的例子就是，写作必须要改作文，改作文最好是当面讲授可以搞清楚错在哪里！Class teaching provides face to face communication with teachers, and the communication can thus improve students performance in a more effective way. One good illustration is that an essay written by a student has to be corrected, and face to face correction provides detailed information on why a mistake is a mistake and how it is made. l Qq可以互相交流假的更多见网友我们以前一朋友，见网友都约好地方，远远的等着，打电话，远处先看看，10个里面有8个和现实不一样，长的对不起人，所以搜索费时间The search on the Internet takes much more time than receiving purpose-oriented information from teachers or in classes. l 扩展：电脑技术刚开始贵不贵，重不重，稳定不稳定？4. 科技问题答案是：又贵又重，又不稳定现在呢？答案变成：不贵，不重，也很稳定，千家万户任何技术的发展都可能面临相同的情况：可应用于电视，08-1-10电脑，手机，飞机和环境问题，汽车和环境问题，核能源问题例子：电视机的坏处08-01-10电视长时间看多了会造成近视眼，电视节目也有不当的内容污染小孩的心理健康，比如说黄色暴力。Long time exposure to TV causes poor eyesight problems on viewers, and some improper material including violence and pornography also undermines childrens mental health. 然而这些不好之处都是可以避免的。However, all these disadvantages can be avoided. 首先父母老师应该给与更多的指导和监督在小孩子看电视的时候，而且随着技术的进步我们会有可以屏蔽不良信息的智能软件。First, parents and teacher could give more guidance and supervision to children when they are watching TV, and technological advances will probably bring about sort of intelligent software that can stop unhealthy information. 另外，科技的发展必然是朝着好的方向的，我们已经有了发出较少辐射的液晶电视，很合理的我们可以期待，有一天看电视对我们的视力没有任何伤害。In addition, the development of science and technologies has always been for the better. For instance, we have invented liquid crystal display (LCD) TVs, which emits much less radiation than those produced years before. Therefore, it can be reasonably expected that one day we would enjoy TV without any risk of harms to our eyes. l 请将上面的这个段子里面电视TV全部换成电脑/英特网computers/the Internetl 请将上面的这个段子里面电视TV全部换成手机cell phone; 把eyesight problems 换成higher risk of catching brain cancer; 把LCD TV换成code division multiple access (CDMA) cell phones即可。l 汽车，飞机制造污染l 06.02.18l Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the worlds fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?l 2007.9.8 l Nowadays, more and more people are depending on cars in their daily life. Some people think it has caused problems. What are the problems? Do you think we should encourage people to use cars? (社会现象)l 08.04.05 06.03.25l One long-distance flight consumes fuel which a car uses in several years time, but they cause the same amount of pollution. So some people think that we should discourage non-essential flights, such as tourist travel, rather than to limit the use of cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?l 08.06.14l Many people think cheap air travel should be encouraged because it gives ordinary people freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads to environmental problem, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss the both sides and give your own opinion.l 雅思题目多次考过，应该limit all air flights/ auto transports吗？答案肯定是不行的采取同样的思维，请问不禁止，该怎么办l 答案替代能源例子：我们不能禁止飞机/汽车，因为它们是最重要的交通手段，在现阶段。但是他们确实也污染了环境，尤其是空气污染和噪音污染。Air flights/ Autos can not be banned, because they are among the most important transport vehicles today. However, they do create air pollutions and noises. 很明显，对于空气污染，最好的办法人们早就意识到了，替代无污染能源，比如说太阳能。As to air pollution, apparently people have been aware of the best solution, alternative energy sources that are environment friendly, such as solar energy. 另外对于噪音污染，解决办法早就有了，消音器。As to noises pollution, the solution is already there, sound-killers. 我们面临的问题是两种技术都不够成熟而已，但是我们有理由相信他们都会走向成熟，就像电脑由几十年前笨重，昂贵不稳定发展成今天走进千家万户的笔记本一样。The problem is both technologies are not developed enough. However, it is reasonable to believe they will be, as did computers develop from heavy, expensive and unstable some decades ago to the lap-tops in average households today. 5. 城市问题城市问题不用看就知道肯定是几个方面：交通，环境，犯罪，住房l 根本原因：人多了哪里来的农村剩余劳动力运用：各种城市问题的主要原因是人口暴增，而这又主要是由农村人口大量涌入城市造成的。The major cause of various municipal (ity) problems is the booming of city population, which is mainly caused by a considerable number of the excessive labors from farming areas flooding into cities. l 意外原因: 生活水平提高了有闲钱，时间，精力享受生活Citizens today have more spare money, time, and energy to enjoy life, pursuing the new and exciting, with the improvement in living standards. 运用05.01.22 Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and suggest some solutions.A. 人口太多导致城市管理和安全力量不足，给非法行为更多的活动空间。举个例子，很多农村妇女来到城市找不到工作，沦为妓女。在武汉市，也曾经发生过民工强奸大学生的案件。Too large a population has led to shortage in municipal administration and security forces, providing more space for illegal activities. For instance, many women from rural areas conduct prostitution because they can not find jobs in cities; in Wuhan there were cases where farmer workers raped university student girls. B. 有些富有的人为了追求刺激，就容易走上赌博，吸毒的道路，这样的例子屡见不鲜。Some wealthy people are addicted to gambling or to drug out of curiosity at the beginning, as is commonly seen in cities. 06-05-13: Housing shortage. A. 人多了，住房需求增长，抬高了房价。The increase of residents has led to the rise of housing demand and housing prices in cities. B. 也有部分人的钱太多，想要多买房，作为理财投资。Some people have extra money to buy more houses than they need as investment. 08.02.14 People living in big cities face many problems today. What are the problems? Should the government encourage people to live in regional towns? A. 人口爆炸必然造成过于拥挤，这些在住房和治安问题上尤其明显。举例来说（接犯罪问题例子A）The sharp increase of population logically leads to over-crowdedness, which is evidently seen in housing and security. For instanceB. 越来越多的人将买车看成城市地位的象征，然而不幸的是过多的私车正是城市交通堵塞，空气污染和噪音污染的罪魁祸首。More and more citizens are regarding owning private cars as the symbol of status in cities. However, unfortunately, too many private cars have been the major source of traffic jams, air pollution, and noises pollution in cities. 08.03.08 As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that the user should pay for the cost. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.同上例，但是也接政府类话题6. 政府类话题 l 假设; 国家=一个农场，政府=农场主，人民=绵羊，政府收入=绵羊羊毛+羊奶l Should governments pay for health care system? 05-07-09, 07-01-20l To ensure a healthy life style is more important than to develop medical care system? 08-03-29, 绵羊病了，你给不给看？废话当然给看羊毛出在羊身上病死了去了多的l 运用：政府作为人们的代表和管理者有义务为人民提供完善的福利制度，尤其是医疗系统。有些人认为这样做给政府造成巨大的财经负担，但是从长远的角度来看，提高人民的身体素质最终有利于民族的强大。Governments as the management and representatives of the people 1have the duty to/ 2are obligated to provide well-developed welfare systems, especially health care system, to the people. Some people suggest the practice will cause huge financial burdens on governments, but in the long run, the improvement in peoples overall health helps the national strength. 备注：7. 国际化问题globalizationl 猫国和狗国Do cats and dogs fight against each other?Yes!l We should invent a new international language for global communication. Positive? 05-04-16, 07-08-18，l 创造国际语言影响猫狗大战吗？答案：不l