2014年中考英语《书面表达》专题练习.doc

2014年中考英语书面表达专题练习 苏州中考英语作文满分20分，大致划分得分比例是：内容占8分、语言占8分、文章结构占4分。怎样可以拿到17、18分这样的高分，说容易容易，说难也难！ 掌握10字原理，轻松搞定英语作文，稳拿高分！“要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点”要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。因为这种结构清晰。“观点要点总结”让人一目了然。逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first,second,third,finally等还可以使用高级点的，如firstofall(首先)，inaddition,whatsmore,moreover(都是另外的意思)，inaword,allinall(表示总结的)。转折：but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，相信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。其实，英语写作和语文作文是一样的。只要通过自己的表达将中心思想讲通了，便是成功。所以，小编建议动笔之前就要把作文的整体框架、每段内容等都要罗列清楚，尽量一气呵成。当然，平时的积累也很重要，如果自己想说的都表达不出来，那样子岂不是很悲剧。Writing 8 英语课堂上，老师要求学生就与人相处的话题展开讨论。请根据以下你所在小组的讨论结果，以How to get on well with others为题，写一篇英语短文。Suggestions1. Learn to share2. Respect others3.Communicate with each otherMy suggestion_【参考范文】As we all know, good relationship can make us happy and comfortable. But how do we get on well with others? First of all, we should respect others. Everybody has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, its important for us to communicate with each other. We can share happiness and sadness with our friends. Whats more, we should be kind to others and try to offer necessary help to those who are in trouble. In my opinion, treating others in an honest way is also a good way to get on well with others. I am sure these suggestions will help us to get along well with others.Writing 10 请以“如何保护自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 提示：自我保护是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。请谈谈你在生活中怎样进行自我保护（可结合生活中的某一个情景或具体事例，如：面对灾难如何自救，如何预防受骗或侵害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等）。 以下短语仅供参考： ask. for help calm down in danger prevent . from 注意：文中不得出现具体的人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 _【参考范文】How to protect myselfAs a student, I think it important for us to protect ourselves from dangerous situations. For example, if I am in a fire, first of all, I must calm down as soon as possible, for panicking is of no help. Then, Ill call 119 immediately because it is the most effective way to save myself. As well as that, it is best to take the stairs instead of elevators. I think, with positive attitude and careful preparations, I will be able to protect myself from fires. Writing 11 目前，越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教。对于这一现象，存在两种不同观点：有些人认为有必要另一些人认为没有必要跟老师学比自己学好可以巩固课堂所学内容可以学到更多的东西容易养成依赖习惯学生需要时间休息许多培训班和家教以赢利为目的请您根据以上提示，以Is a Training Class of Family Teacher Necessary ?为题，写一篇120 词左右的短文，反映表中内容，并简要阐述自己的观点。文章开头已给出， 不计入总字数。要求：层次清晰，连贯流畅；表达灵活，不要逐字逐句翻译。参考词汇：巩固strengthen； Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it._【参考范文】Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.Some thinks it necessary. Firstly, its more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly, it can strengthen what is learnt in class. Besides, they can learn a lot more. Others think it unnecessary. For one thing, students can easily form the habit of dependence. For another, students need time to relax from time to time. Whats more, the purpose of many training classes and teachers is to make money.In my opinion, whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe its OK for you. But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.Writing 12 健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们非常重要。请以How to keep healthy 为题谈谈你的看法。提示：1. 饮食健康 2. 锻炼身体 3. 良好的生活习惯 要求：1. 词数80100 词 （标题已给出，不计入总词数）。2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。3.文章内容课适当发挥。How To Keep Healthy_ 参考范文：How to Keep Healthy As we all know, it is very important to keep healthy. But do you know how to keep healthy? Firstly, I think we must have enough food to keep us healthy. Breakfast is necessary. It gives us energy for morning. We must also have the right kind of food. Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables, but less junk food. Dont forget to wash your hands before meals. Secondly, its necessary for us to take exercise. Exercise will keep us active and strong. Thirdly, I think staying up is bad for our health. If we cant get enough sleep. We may have a headache. We should go to bed early and get up early. Lastly, listen to music or chatting can also make us feel relaxed.Writing 13 著名作家Francis Bacon曾说过：“ Reading makes a full man.”可见，阅读对于每个人的成长都有着举足轻重的作用。请你根据以下信息提示，结合自己的观点，以“Reading Makes a Full Man” 为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，表达你对阅读的看法和计划。 要求：句子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯。 Why do we need to read?To get knowledge, open the mind, be more intelligent(聪明的), learn a foreign language What can we read?Textbooks, newspapers, magazines What are your reading plans?Reading at leastbooks in the coming holiday _参考范文：Reading Makes a Full ManReading is very important in our life. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us more intelligent. Besides, reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English.Textbooks, newspapers, magazines and other kinds of reading materials can help us know more about the outside world and help us grow into an excellent person.Im planning to read at least 5 books in the coming holiday. And Ill spend more time reading every day in my senior high school life. Reading makes a full man! Lets start reading now.Writing 15 随着空气质量的恶化，阴霾天气现象出现增多，危害加重。近期我国不少地区雾霾天气日渐增多。人们出行戴上了口罩，有的学校还取消了户外活动。为了提高同学们的环保意识，你们班将要举行“环保从身边做起”的主题班会，请你很据以下表格里的内容写一篇发言稿。（以上背景内容无需表述)写作要点1.提倡骑自行车或步行，尽量乘坐公共汽车;2.双面使用纸张;3.少吃口香糖;4.垃圾分类回收;5.房前屋后养花植树。写作要求1. 要点齐全，条理清楚，语言流畅，语法正确，书写规范，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实的人名、校名和地名;3.词数不少于80。短文开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。参考词汇:吃口香糖chew gum (gum为不可数名词)Hello, everyone. Its nice to speak about what we can do to protect the environment _Thats all. Thank you.参考范文Hello, everyone. Its nice to speak about what we can do to protect the environment. First, to reduce air pollution, we should walk or ride a bike instead of taking a taxi or a private car, and take a bus when travelling a long distance. Second, we should reduce the waste we produce. For example, both sides of the paper must be used. Then, try to chew less gum, and rubbish should be sorted and recycled or reused. Last, we must plant as many trees and flowers as possible around our houses. Thus, we can not only make our environment beautiful but also can make our air clean and fresh. Thats all, thank you.Writing 16 如今多数中学生缺失感恩之心，对待家人、老师、朋友等很冷漠，行为方式和价值观令人担忧。作为一名中学生，请你根据下表中所提供的信息以“Learn to express thanks”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。背景认为吃好穿好是应该的，缺失感恩意识。学会感恩（1）感谢父母供养自己上学。（2）感谢老师教给我们许多知识。（3）感谢朋友给予我们鼓励和帮助。对未来的打算（至少两点）要求：1. 短文应包括所提供的所有内容，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2. 词数：80词左右。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。3. 演讲稿中不得提及所在学校及本人姓名。Learn to express thanksGood morning, boys and girls!The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find most Middle School students _ _ _Thank you for your listening!参考范文Learn to express thanksGood morning, boys and girls!The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find most Middle School students dont show any sense of “Thanks”. They think that they are certain of eating well and wearing fashionable clothes.As Middle School students, we should learn to express thanks. We should thank our parents for supporting us to go to school. And we should express thanks to our hardworking teachers who teach us much knowledge. Besides, our friends always give us encouragement and help. In a word, we are lucky in everything. But we should learn to express thanks. In the future, I should study harder to repay our parents and teachers. I should go to my friends to share their happiness and sadness. Thank you for your listening!Writing 20 学校就学生的作业量问题在寒假期间对学生家长进行了调查。多数家长认为作业多有好处，如能巩固所学知识；而部分家长则认为作业过多对孩子的成长不利，如过多地占用了他们发展自己兴趣爱好的时间等。请你用英语就作业量问题进行介绍并表明自己的观点。注意：1. 可以适当增加细节，要求意思连贯，语句通顺；2. 词数90左右。_参考范文How much homework should students do?A survey shows different answers to the question from students parents. Most parents think doing homework as much as possible is good for students study because it can help practice what theyve learned. However, there are several different opinions. Some parents think students are under too much pressure and overworking can do harm to students development. They would rather let their children spend more time doing their favorite things.In my opinion, I dont think doing too much homework is a good idea because it can get in the way of students imaginations. Students arent supposed to drown (淹死) in an ocean of homewo