高考英语对比类作文.doc

谋篇布局1 仔细审题，确定体裁格式，选择文章主体时态，弄清中心人称。除第一段对事实一个表述以外，都用一般现在时。中心人称应为他们they认为我们应该。我们会学得更好。2构思-文章结构正反观点对比类的文章: 开头：提出问题主体：陈述不同的观点及其理由结尾：说明自己观点3 选择合适的短语与句型表达论点与论据。表示不同观点的套语v总起:Different people hold different opinions. Opinions are divided. People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem.People take different views on this question.v表达不同观点:of them hold the opinion that of them are in favor of the idea thatPeople who are for/against the idea think The majority of the students are against the idea, arguing/holding the view thatSome people believe that. Others argue that v不同观点之间的衔接:however, of them hold a different view. / of them hold the opposite opinion. people who are against it dont think so. however, each coin has two sides. different from those., people think .on the other hand, people object that .v并列关系：and, as well as, alsov 递进关系：besides, in addition, moreover, whats morev比较、对比：like, unlike, on the contrary, on the other hand4 利用所列短语、句型组句成文，打好草稿。要避免出现汉语式的表达，根据自己所掌握的词汇，在比较有把握的情况下可以大胆使用较高级词汇，使文章增色。5 将草稿写到卷面上并再次审视文章结构。6 最后做一次全面检查，注意文章的文体、格式是否正确，要点是否全面，是否有明显的语法错误和低级的失误，是否有单词拼写错误，字母大小写是不是恰当，词数是否符合要求。注意：1. 书写要尽量避免涂改，保持卷面清洁，酌情加扣分2. 分段，首字母要缩进4-5字符。3. 条理要清晰，思维不要跳跃，4. 句子不要让老师一下看不懂，要避免用很长的长句，容易出错。Some students stick to the opinion that we should bring a cell phone to school, arguing that it is more convenient as they can make phone calls whenever they want. Meanwhile, they can use it as a dictionary or a calculator, from which students can benefit a lot. What is more attractive is that they can use it to listen to the radio or even watch the movie they like to relax themselves. However, there are still a majority of students holding the opposite ideas. Their reasons are listed as follows: First and foremost, by having a phone at hand, they will make too many calls, which is a waste of time and money. Besides, the ring of a call can be disturbing. What worries them most is that some students may surf the internet by a smart phone, reading something harmful. As for me/ as far as I am concerned/ Personally/in my opinion/from my point of view, the problem is not whether or not to bring a mobile phone to school but how to make proper use of it. If a student can use a mobile phone wisely, he can certainly bring it anywhere as he likes. 1. However, there are many students arguing against it. (ying shan)2. The school and family shouldnt put too much emphasis on study or expect too much of us. 3. Judging from all the evidence above, we can safely arrive at the conclusion that our school should (zhang junbei)4. And we can solve the problems we cant work out by means of turning to our teachers for help or exchanging different ideas with each other in class. (Liu)5. However the students who object to the idea hold the view that we deserve a good rest in the summer holidays. As is often the case, the students may have their own arrangements for their holiday. (Zhao shuai) 6. It is indisputable that we can learn more by means of studying at school during the holiday and it contributes to our grades. (tian yichuan)7. On no account can we ignore the importance of teachers. 8. Whats more, it offers easier access to getting the teachers help, which can make a real difference. (zhang zhennan)9. Having studied for such a long time, not only their body but also their mind is in desperate need of a good rest. 10. Theres no denying that a good physical state and a clear mind are the solid foundation for further study.(Ye lingxia)11. We shouldnt fail to take into account the fact that a strong body is the solid foundation for our study. (li Huixuan)12. Personally, I think it is of vital importance that we alternate work and rest/balance between work and rest, for as the saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 13. The majority are against it in an attempt to get a good rest. (Zhou Luyao)14. In my eyes, we shouldnt attach too much importance to the students grades and overlook their health. 15. There is no doubt that our life is far more than study. ( xu Yajie)16. It is foolish to neglect the rest time in order to pursue the improvement in marks. (Zhang mianjing) 对比选择型作文模板：Recently, we have had a heated discussion about whether (主题) should be Some people tend to think that(观点一) They point ou