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高考作文冲刺：情景作文：写好情景作文的要素： 要点、语言、细节认真审题 确定要点 描述/叙述具体生动适当细节支撑 语言结构多样 语篇逻辑 交际语言得体 行文流畅1、海淀一模：假设你是红星中学高三一班的李华，上周你们班组织了一次感谢恩师的活动。请根据下面图示，为学校网站写一篇英文稿件，叙述这次活动从准备到结束的完整过程。范文：Last week our class organized an activity to thank our teachers before graduation. On Thursday we had a class meeting to discuss what to do. We came up with many good ideas. Then we decided to send them gifts and do some good deeds.The next day we carried out our plan. Some of us cleaned the teachers office and decorated it with pots of flowers, making it more comfortable for the teachers to work in, others helped wash the cars or bikes and some others gave well-prepared gifts to the teachers, who were very pleased and expressed their best wishes to us.We all felt happy about what we had done for our teachers.2、西城一模：假定你是李华，你校明天将组织来访的外国朋友游览北京，并由你担任导游。请根据下面图示，用英语写一篇讲话稿，准备在今晚向外国朋友简要介绍明天的活动安排。根据题材选择语言交际语言得体对比：1Now Ill introduce to you the arrangement tomorrow.Now, Ill tell you where we are going tomorrow.2. In the evening, you will be watching Beijing Opera.Have you ever heard of Beijing Opera? This evening you will have a chance to watch one. It doesnt matter whether you understand it or not. You may just have a taste of a different culture.范文：Good evening, ladies and gentlemen,My name is Li Hua. I have the honor of being your guide tomorrow. Now Id like to give you a brief introduction to our tour.Well meet at the school gate at 8:00 am and set off by bus. As the old Chinese saying goes, “He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man.” The first place we will visit is that world famous spot. When you are standing on the wall, you will feel amazed at this man-made wonder on earth. After two hours there, well leave for a snack street where varieties of foods will be waiting for you to try. The afternoon tour will begin from the Summer Palace at about 2:00 pm. You can take a boat to enjoy the beautiful scenery in the garden and feel free to look around there until 4:00. In the evening, we will watch a wonderful Beijing Opera which will let you experience a real Chinese culture. After the show, well return to the school at about 9:00 pm.Thanks for your listening and I hope you can enjoy your tour tomorrow.崇文一模假设你叫李华，准备去英国学习语言。在网络上你看到the Big Ben School of English的招生广告，你很感兴趣。请根据下列提示给该校负责人Mr. Williams发邮件咨询以下事宜：l 班额、师资l 住宿条件l 课余活动l 费用所涵盖的项目注意：1.信的开头已为你写好。2.词数不少于60。班额、师资： 1) Id like to know how many students a class will consist of and something about the teachers.2) I want to know the size of a class, I mean how many students a class is made up of. Could you tell me something about the staff? Are they all qualified and responsible teachers? 范文：I saw your advertisement for language courses in London and I am writing to find out more about the courses you offer.I would like to know how many students attend the school, and how many students there are in a class. Could you tell me something about the staff? Are they all qualified and responsible teachers? Besides, I would be interested in having more details of after-class activities. For example, are there any social and sports programs in which I can make more friends? And Im particularly concerned about the cost. What is included in the price of the course? By the way, where will I be living, on campus or in a British family?Im looking forward to your reply.Regards, Li Hua4、海淀二模假如你是李华，你校英语校刊“Our Steps”的招聘启事引起了你的兴趣，请根据下列信息用英文写一封申请信。姓名：李华 性别： 男年龄：16 年级：高一 兴趣：摄影、写作、户外运动其他：活泼、开朗、精力充沛；曾获北京市摄影比赛青少年组二等奖应聘目的：参加社会实践活动，丰富业余生活Dear Harry,Im writing to apply for the photographer for Our Steps.Im Li Hua, a boy of sixteen, presently in my first year of high school. Im outgoing and energetic.Im interested in photography because it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life. Last year I won the second prize in youth group at Beijing Photography Competition. Besides, Im good at writing, which might be helpful for the work. Taking part in all kinds of outdoor activities is also one of my hobbies.I would like to work for Our Steps since it would be a great opportunity for me to join in social activities and enrich my life.Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua5、西城二模：假如你校最近就家长应该如何对待孩子的问题进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1中提供的信息描述调查结果，并针对图表2的其中一个数据所反映的情况写出你的看法。表2表1Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents treat their children. According to Chart 1, three behaviors from parents are considered most welcome among the students. 33.5% of the students feel happy that their parents trust them, laying a basic foundation for family communication. 31.7% are content to be in the equal position with their parents when they are talking with each other. Whats more, 22.7% feel happy to receive constant praise or encouragement from their parents.As is shown in Chart 2, there are also three things that students hate most. Among them, 32% of the students think their parents expect too much of them, thus, putting added pressure to them. While all parents love their children and want the best for them, but if too high, or beyond their real ability, children will have a feeling of failure, and will be discouraged. I think parents should have practical expectations for their children. This way, the children will feel more confident about themselves and really make a difference in the future. 6. 东城二模第一节：情景作文高考在即，就怎样度过高考后的长假，中学生英语报在你校作了一个调研，结果如下。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一份报告，送交该报。内容应包括数据显示的结果，及就某一项数据发表你的看法。词数：不少于60。开头已经给出。生词注释：雅思考试IELTS (International English Language Testing System)Dear editor, Recently, we have had a survey on “how you will spend the summer vacation after high school”. About 300 students took part in the survey. The result is as follows: About 10 percent of the students are going to make use of the long vacation to learn how to drive a car, as they have reached eighteenthe required age for driving. About 18 percent of the students choose to take a course to study for IELTS. They are trying to prepare themselves for a further study abroad. Nearly half of the students are going to travel to famous scenic spots at home and abroad. About one quarter of the students prefer to stay at home, spending their summer vacation in a leisure way, watching TV, reading books or having parties with friends. I think the reason why so many students choose to spend their vacation traveling is that they want to see more of China and the world and I am one of them. I think if we want to broaden our horizon and keep pace with the changing world, travels are the best way. Yours, Li Hua范文2：（不增加细节，用连词将所有要点连起来：）About 10 percent of the students are going to make use of the long vacation to learn how to drive a car. While about 18 percent of the students choose to take a course to study for IELTS. Besides, nearly half of the students are going to travel to famous scenic spots at home and abroad. The rest of the students, about one quarter of the students prefer to stay at home, watching TV, reading books or having parties with friends. I think the reason why so many students choose to spend their vacation traveling is that they want to see more of China and the world and I am one of them. I think if we want to broaden our horizon and keep pace with the changing world, travels are the best way. 开放作文：写好开放作文的要素：扣题、逻辑、达意认真审题/图 确定主旨/立意 评论扣题/自圆其说 结论精彩能说什么说什么，能说多少说多少，逻辑与达意最重要。1. 西城二模请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。In your English class, the teacher shows the picture below and asks the class to discuss itYour classmates may have different understandingsLook at the picture carefully and tell the class how YOU understand itIn the picture, two goats are tied to each other with a rope. They both see some grass in opposite directions, and try to pull to get their own food. They are unsuccessful, because the rope is too short to allow them to reach the food at the same time. The picture is trying to tell us that cooperation is better than conflict. Both of the goats want their food at the same time, which causes a conflict between them. However, if they decide to cooperate and eat the grass on the left first, and then the grass on the right, they will both be able to get their food. Thus things will turn into a “win-win” situation. Therefore, remember that sometimes our goal is not that we get something and the other gets nothing, but that all people get what they want. Cooperation will benefit everyone. 2. 崇文二模In the picture we can see a family of three in a car, the parents and their son. The mother is trying to drive eastwards, while the father is trying to drive in the opposite direction. Their son is sitting between them, looking rather confused. It reminds me of a common phenomenon in some families. When it is time that important family decisions should be made, the parent often insists on his or her own opinions, turning a deaf ear to the other. So as a result, conflicts are aroused, making it a very annoying atmosphere at home. The child is sympathetic， not knowing whom he should support. I think parents should try to be a good listener when the other is expressing his or her opinions, trying to think if there is any point in it. Even if he cant agree with him or her, he or she should put out what he thinks in a proper way, thus, a conflict will be avoided. Harmonious family atmosphere will be good for children to grow.高考作文回放：2005年:主旨： The little boy (standing in front of a mirror,) is imagining that he has grown up into a strong man like Yao Ming. Everybody has a dream in his mind.范文：The little boy (standing in front of a mirror,) is imagining that he has grown up into a strong man like Yao Ming.In my opinion, the picture shows that everyone has a dream in his mind. As a child, he is always thinking about what he will be when growing up, or rather what he wants to be twenty or thirty years later. Its the dream that gives us power to get close to success. With the dream deep inside, we will spare no effort to realize it despite the trouble we are faced with.2006年：主旨： The striking differences between the two, the girl and the old man, show rapid changes in peoples life in China.范文：I think the artist wants to show changes in the city. The man stands for the old generation in China: he is looking at the laptop in great curiosity, unable to figure out what it is. The girl, on the other hand, is totally different: she has long hair and wears a fashionable short skirt. While the man doesnt know anything about the laptop, she plays with it skillfully. The striking differences between the two show rapid changes in peoples life in China.2007年：主旨： The grown-up young birds are flying away to explore the wonder of the world, leaving their mother in a nest alone. 范文：The picture shows a mother bird seeing her dearly-beloved children-the young birds flying away. The young birds are ready to explore the wonder of the world. It seems they never have enough time to say goodbye to their mother, who has raised them up with love and care. They just leave their mother an empty nest. The similar things happen in our real life. We are young and eager to see the world, when we have strong wings to fly on our own. We, just like these birds are