2010年广东高考英语基础写作思路点拨与优秀范文选登.doc

111 1 12010年广东高考英语基础写作思路点拨与优秀范文选登(2010广东高考英语基础写作原文)2010年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（广东英语卷） 写作(共两节,满分40分)第一节 基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。内容：公共场所禁烟实施时间：2011年1月1日起实施范围：全国目标：所有室内公共场所无烟措 施：张贴禁烟标志相关数据：(1)吸烟人数：约3 5亿(2)分布：男性75；女性25(3)受二手烟影响人数：约5 4亿(4)因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万年*二手烟：second-hand smoke写作内容 请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯，内容包括：1 禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围；2目标和措施3相关数据。 写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【思路点拨】本次基础写作为应用文中的通讯报道。试题详细地给出了内容要点，为控制性写作。要写好此文，需注意下列三点：一是要认真审题，确定体裁、人称和时态等;二是要运用适当的句型，合理地组织文字;三是切忌照译，要适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。2010广东高考英语基础写作优秀范文选登【优秀范文选登1】The Chinese government has decided that smoking be banned in indoor public places all over the country.This decision ,which will be carried out from January 1st , 2011, aims to bring a complete smoke-free indoor environment. In order to achieve this goal, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places.Statistics show that China has approximately 350,000,000 smokers, among whom 75% are men and 25% are women. Around 540,000,000 people are affected by second-hand smoke,causing 100,000 deaths a year.【优秀范文选登2】The Chinese government has decided to ban smoking in public places across the country. This decision, which aims to make all indoor public places smoke-free, will come into effect from the first of January, 2011. To this end, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places.Currently China has about 350 million smokers, among whom 75 percent are men and 25 percent are women. Around 540 million people are influenced by second-hand smoke, which causes 100,000 deaths per year.【优秀范文选登3】Our country has begun to carry out the policy that prevents smoking in public buildings since January 1st, 2011. The main aim is to make every public rooms have no smoke by posting the sign of preventing smoking. There are 350 million people smoking recently, in which the male hold 75 percent and the female hold 25 percent. Because of these smokers, about 540 million non-smokers are influenced. More than 100 thousand people per year die because of the second-smoke.【优秀范文选登4】The Chinese government has issued a nationwide regulation that smoking is no permitted in public places from January 1, 2011. It required that in-doors public-places must be no-smoking. Whats more, in order to carry it out effectively, putting up signs related to banning smoke was advised by government.Up to now ,350 million Smokers consisting of 75% male and 25% female