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英语书面表达写作指导 之 漫画作文 议论类 议论类 Tasks 1 Todealwithdifficultyinwritingaboutcartoons2 Tolearnthebasicstructureofcartoonwriting3 Tolearnsomeusefulexpressionsofcartoonwriting Difficulties 1 读图2 解意3 谋篇 谋篇 3parts 1 describethepicture2 interpretitsmeaning3 giveyouropinionsaboutthephenomenon Part1Describethepicture Thepictureistalkingabout shows Thepictureshowsacommonphenomenon Thepicturedescribesaninterestingphenomenon Inthepicture thereare is are doing Thepictureaboveisabout Let slookatthepictureabove first Let spractise Describethepicture Thepictureistalkingaboutastoryaboutneighborhood Twoladieslivingintheoppositeapartmentssay hello whentheyhappentomeeteachotherinthecorridor Oneofthemsays Imovedhere5yearsago butInevermetyoubefore CouldIaskyournameplease Theothersays Ihavebeenherefor6years HowshouldIcallyou 根据下面的漫画 用英语写一篇短文 先对漫画进行描述 然后提出自己的看法 Essay Fromthecartoonabovewecanseeastudenttryinghisbesttoreachthefullscoreofalltheimportantsubjectsthathehastolearnatschool andpeoplearoundarecheeringforhimtogoon Whilehiseffortsarefocusedonhisstudies hehasobviouslyignoredotherimportantaspects psychologyandmoralstandards Part2Interpretthepicture Itseemsveryridiculous However thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere Itistheexactreflectionof Thepictureindicatethatwe Nowadays itisacommonphenomenonthat Thisisasatirical 讽刺的 cartoonwhichdescribesvividlyakindofcommonphenomenonamong Paragraph2 Topicstatement Thiscartoon phenomenon Thiscartoonisavividdescriptionofacommonphenomenon littleattentionispaidtostudents overalldevelopment Asamatteroffact studentsoftoday ssocietyshoulddevelopinallaspects academically physically psychologicallyandmorally Whenequippedwithacademicknowledge we llbeabletohelpsocietytoadvanceinscienceandtechnology However thiswillnotbepossiblewithoutgoodhealth Ofcourse psychological Paragraph2 developmentandhighmoralstandardsarealsoofvitalimportance becausetheyhelpustofaceupsanddownsinlifemoreconfidently andhelpustofindtherightplaceinoursocietyandmakecontributionstoourcountry Part3Giveyouropinions Ithink believethatAsfarasI mconcerned Inmyopinion Frommypointofview Paragraph3 Conclusion Therefore asstudents weneedto acorrectattitudetowardsourstudiesandteachersandparentsshouldalso ahealthyenvironmentforus Enjoythisexcellentending Inmyview thisphenomenonisnogoodtous nortooursociety It stimethatwetooksomemeasurestoimproveit Peoplelivinginthesamezonecanbeorganizedtohavesomeactivitiestogether Weshouldcallonpeopletobefriendlytoeachother Asapopularsongsays Ifeverybodygivesalittlelovetoeachother theworldwillbecometheseaoflove 谋篇 3parts 1 describethepicture2 interpretitsmeaning3 giveyouropinionsaboutthephenomenon 请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文 描述这种现象 说明其产生的原因 并发表你的看法 Thiscartoontellsamiserablestory Asyoucansee ayoungman whoisobviousaseniorhighstudent isgoingawayonatrip AsthetwoChinesecharactersonthestaircasesuggest theyoungmanhasreluctantlygivenupthecomingcollegeentranceexamination TheabovethingsarenowquitecommoninChina Inrecentyears it smoreandmoredifficultforcollegegraduatestofindjobs Theirparentsspendalotofmoneysupportingthemincollegesoruniversities buttheireffortscannotbepaidoff Sotheirparentsbelieveit snousefortheirchildrentogoontocollege Ifeelsorryfortheyoungman butIdon tthinkit sarightdecisionthathehasmade butwhatcanhedo Ithinkthegovernme