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D单元短文改错 目录D单元短文改错1D1 短文改错记叙文1D2 短文改错应用文3D3 短文改错议论文3D4短文改错说明文3D1 短文改错记叙文【英语卷（解析）2015届辽宁省沈阳二中高三12月月考（201412）】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下便条。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除；把多余的词 用斜线（ ）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1；每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。The other day after work, I was walking down the street while I saw a boy riding a nice unicycle, one of those bicycle with only one wheel. Dressing in all pink from head to toe, he was singing a song which was sounded like a kids song. I thought he must be total crazy. Just then, a lady dropped 20-dollar bill on the ground, but he didnt realize it and started to walk away. The guy in pink picked out the money and gave it back to her. After that, he rode on but soon disappeared before the lady could thank him. How a strange and good guy!【答案】【知识点】D1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】第一行：while改为when：was/were doing sth when 是固定搭配；第二行：bicycle改为bicycles，those后应当用复数；dressing 改为dressed，dress是及物动词，与主语是被动关系，故用过去分词形式；第三行：去掉sounded前的was，sound是不及物动词，不能用被动语态；total改为totally，用副词修饰形容词；第四行：dropped后加a，一张20美元的钞票；bill是可数名词；he改为she，此处应当指代的是a lady；第五行：out改为up，pick up是固定短语，捡起；but改为and，上下句是并列关系；第六行：How改为what，固定句型：what a/an adj+可数名词单数=How adj a/an 可数名词单数。【英语卷（解析）2015届河南省安阳一中等天一大联考高三阶段测试（三）（201412）word版】第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改1O处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Unionis strength Whenever youre faced with difficulties or in a dilemma ,cooperation plays an important part in getting you out of troubleThere was a time when I was too proud that I overlooked my classmate refusing to work together with themTherefore it was no doubt that I was left alone suffering from loneliness and failure Unfortunately a teacher impressed on me the value of cooperation From then on ,I learned to help others and turn to my friends for the help whenever I had difficulty finish a task on my own Surely cooperation made a great difference Now I am getting well with my friend My experience has teach me that only if we attach great importance with cooperation can we go beyond ourselves As the saying go United we stand ;divided we fall【答案】【知识点】D1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】第三行：我是如此骄傲，以至于忽略了同学。这里用sothat句型：too改成so；classmate是可数名词，这里用复数：改成classmates第四行：这里考查固定句型： there is no doubt that毫无疑问；老师让他知道合作的重要性，这是幸运的事情：故Unfortunately改为fortunately.第五行：向朋友求助，turn to sb for help。这里是泛指，去掉the。第六行：这里考查的是固定词组：have difficulty in doing “做有困难”，finish改成finishing；get along well with sb，与相处的好，固定短语，在get后加on或along第七行：考查时态：has后面接过去分词构成现在完成时：teach改为taught；考查词组：attach importance to 重视，with改成to；第八行：考查主谓一致：the saying后面接动词的第三人称单数：go改成goes；【英语卷（解析）2015届山西省山大附中高三12月月考（201412）】第一节 短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, Ill think of this experience.【答案】【知识点】D1 短文改错记叙文【文章综述】文章通过作者的一次等车的经历，说明耐心是非常重要的 【答案解析】1.waited后面加for 句意：有一次我在等车来。Wait是不及物动词，waited后面加for2.past改成 passed 句意：30分钟过去了。Past是介词，这句话缺少谓语动词： passed3.feet.改成 foot 句意：我决定步行。On foot步行 4.when 改成than 句意：我已离开公共汽车就到了。使用no sooner. Than，句型5.a 改成 the 句意：如果我选择等下一班车。特指the next bus6.other改成another句意：我还要再等30分钟。Another+数词+名词“另外7.do 改成did 时间状语是Only then用一般过去式：did8.possible 改成possibly句意：不耐烦可能浪费我们投入的所有的努力。修饰waste用副词possibly9.去掉it 这是定语从句，that在定语从句中做宾语，去掉it 10.lose改成losing be close to doing几乎做，lose改成losing【英语卷（解析）2015届山东省日照一中高三上学期第三次阶段复习质量达标检测（201501）】第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。My grandfather and I enjoy fishing. One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and mygrandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.【答案】【知识点】D1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】第二行：1.时态：go went前后时态一致。2.代词误用：oursour.这里要用our作定语。而ours则不能作定语。第三行：3.删掉so,前一分句为as soon as 引导的时间状语从句，主句前再不需要连词。4. 介词误用BeforeAfter根据题意是等了半个小时以后，而不是以前。故用After.第四行：5.副词误用:impatientlyimpient这里是形容词和前面的get形成系表结构。6.连词误用：andbut根据句意需要转折，而不是顺承。第五行：7.主谓一致误用： were was there be 句型中be 和最近的名词保持一致。8.fish前加a.根据题意这里是钓了一条鱼及根据fish后的was,故在此加a.第六行：9.名词复数误用：minuteminutes few修饰的名词要用复数形式。10.非谓语误用：FeltFeeling根据句意，feel 和句子主语之间是主动关系而非被动关系D2 短文改错应用文D3 短文改错议论文【英语卷（解析）2015届河北省衡水中学高三上学期五调考试（201412）word版】第一节：短文改错。请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Editor, I used to be a physician in the childrens department of a hospital. Form time to time I treated children who had poisoned by medicine with older family members. The children didnt know the medicine was danger ; they just knew it tasted sweet. Children easily open the bottle what we now use in China. Some days before I talked about medicines with an American. He showed me a sort of plastic bottle. The design was quite simple and Im sure our Chinese factories could produce these bottles. The top of the bottle can be opened by pressing down on them while turning. This is difficult for most young children to do so , though grown-up can open these bottles very easily. Im certainly that the expense of making such tops would be very small. As a doctor , Id love to see this doing. And most parents would be grateful. Sincerely yours Li Hua【答案】【知识点】D3 短文改错议论文【文章综述】本文讲述作者是名医生对于孩子误食大人药物造成中毒感到很痛心，与美国交流后得知有一种瓶盖可以完全避免这种情况的出现，故写信给编辑呼吁尽快实施。 【答案解析】1. had 后面加been 考查被动语态。Be poisoned by 被。所毒害。2. withfor 考查介词。句意：时不时，我会收治那些被大人的药所误食中毒的孩子。3. dangerdangerous 考查形容词。句意：孩子们不知道这是危险的；4. what -that/which/去掉what 考查宾语从句。the bottle做先行词，定语从句we now use in China缺少宾语故用that/which或者把之省略；5. beforeago 考查副词。句意：许多天后我， 我与美国人谈论此事；6. themit 考查代词。句意：瓶子的顶部只有用力按压旋转才能打开。It代指瓶子。7. to do so 去掉so 考查固定句型。To do 做后置定语用来修饰most young children.8. grown-up-grown-ups 考查名词的复数。句意：虽然这对大人来说很容易打开。9. certainly-certain 考查形容词。句意：我确定做这些盖的费用很小。形容词做表语。10. doingdone 考查动词的用法。See sth done看某事被做。D4短文改错说明文E单元短文改错目录E单元短文改错1E1 短文改错记叙文1E2 短文改错应用文3E3 短文改错议论文3E4 短文改错说明文3 E1 短文改错记叙文【英语卷（解析）2015届黑龙江省哈六中高三上学期期末考试（201501）】：短文改错 (共10分;每小题1分,满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。Cheetahs(猎豹) are the fast land creatures in the world. Why would a cheetah need to be able to running so fastly? The only animal that comes close to the cheetahs amazed speed is its best favorite food, the gazelle(瞪羚). In order to catch up a meal thats as swift as the wind, the cheetah had to develop the ability. It must run as fast as, or faster as, the gazelle. Otherwise, it will face starvation. Cheetahs are a excellent example of the effects of natural selection. There is several species of large cats in the world, but none of them can match the speed of the cheetah.【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】1. fastfastest in the world提示我们要用最高级。2.runningrun be able to 后用动词原形3.fastlyfast fast 既可以做形容词，也可以做副词，英语中无fastly。4.amazedamazing ed修饰人，-ing修饰物5.去掉best favorite=likebest，这里重复，去掉best。6. catch up后加上with catch up with 追上；赶上7.had has 短文整体时态用一般现在时。8. asthan 句中出现faster比较级，故用than。9. aan excellent example元音发音前用an。10. isare several species是复数，故用there are。【英语卷（解析）2015届浙江省重点中学协作体高三上学期第二次适应性测试（201501）word版】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. Id like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time Ill have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They dont want me go out. They are afraid Ill be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文【文章综述】期盼已久的寒假却因以往父母的过多干涉、过分担心而让我变得忐忑不安。我试图说服他们。 【答案解析】1. made makes 考查谓语动词的时态：表达自己现在的感受，故用一般现在时态2. at to 考查固定表达look forward to doing sth.渴望作某事3. movie movies 考查可数名词的单复数：several+可数名词的复数4.thebasketball with my classmates. 去掉the考查零冠词的用法：球类运动前不加冠词5. What How 考查感叹词的用法：How + adj.+ a/an + n. +主语+谓语+ 6. different differently考查副词的用法：副词修饰动词作状语7. go to go 考查宾补动词的用法：want sb. to do sth8. Beside Besides 考查副词词义：besides此外9. keeping kept 考查非谓语动词的用法:keep作定语与被修饰词a bird构成逻辑上的动宾关系，故用过去分词kept表被动10. him them 考查代词的指代：此处指代上文的my parents故用第三人称复数人称代词宾格them【英语卷（解析）2015届浙江省杭州二中高三第二次月考（201412）】第三节：短文改错 （满分10分）下面短文中有10处错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you. the Luckily I was completely free then, so Ill to say “yes”. Ill arrive in Bristol at am around 8 pm in Friday evening.on When father bought me a computer for a birthday present in last year, I felt very excited. As we all know, that computers are getting more usefully nowadays. Much information can be stored in it. We can learn what is lately happened in the world on the Internet. In the past, people have to do lots of work that was very dangerous. Now, computers can do it otherwise. When an exam is come, I do exercises on my computer. Then it will correct them but tell me the right answers.【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】1. for改成as 爸爸给我买了一台电脑作为生日礼物。2. in 去掉 去年last year in多余。3. that 去掉 As we all know,有逗号，是as引导的非限性定语从句，that多余。4. usefully改成useful get变得+形容词。5. it改成them 这里的代词指前面的computers，故用them。6. is改成has 强调对现在造成的影响和结果，用现在完成时。我们通过网络可以了解世界上最近发生的事情7. have改成 had 根据in the past，要用一般过去时。8. otherwise改成instead 以前人们做大量危险的工作，现在电脑取代人们做这项工作。9. come改成coming 由句意可知，考试还没有来临，come用现在正在进行表示将来。10. but改成and 这里没有转折的意思。它会改正错误并且告诉我正确的答案。【英语卷（解析）2015届云南省部分名校高三1月份统一考试（201501）】第一节:短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Kunming is a famous city with long history. Locating in the southwest of China, it is the capital city of Yunnan Province, it is called “the Spring City”. It is said that Kunming got its name over 2000 years ago and it had never changed since then. There is a large number of famous cultural and natural sites here, which have always been attraction to tourists from around the world. Tourists come not only to see the historically sites, but also because that it has beautiful scenery. A walk along the sides of the beautiful Dianchi Lake will offer a feast for everyones eyes. On a word, Kunming, as a famous saying goes, is a city which you will not want to leave once you have come.【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】第一行：1.with long a with a long history 历史悠久； 2. Locating Located 位于，locate要用过去分词做状语；第二行： 3. 第一个it which 此处which引导的非限制性定语从句；4. its 改为its ，此处是形容词性物主代词做定语；第三行：5. had has 从那时到现在，应该用现在完成时态； 6. is are there be 句型应当和be后面的名词保持人称和书的一致，a large number of famous cultural and natural sites是复数，故应该把is改成are第四行：7. attraction attractions attraction “吸引人的事物”是可数名词，对应前面的sites，故用复数形式。第五行：8. historically 改为historical 形容词做定语。9. that去掉 because是从属连词，that 多余；第六行：10.On改为 In，in a word ，固定短语，表示“总之。”【英语改错题的常见错误类型】1、谓语动词的时态和语态2、句子结构和句子完整性3、名词单复数及主谓一致问题4、上下文语意和代词5、介词 固定搭配6、固定（习惯）用法7、形容词和副词是否误用及其比较等级是否正确；8、冠词。取舍与选择是否正确9、连词和从句引导词10、非谓语动词的形式是否正确【英语卷（解析）2015届四川省德阳市高三第一次诊断考试（201412）word版 (1)】第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题15分，满分15分） 请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（、）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：l每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 3，请在答题卡上指定的地方作答。 Indices and gentlemen, its my honor to be here to making a speech in EnglishToday what I m going to share it with you is: always haw, a dreamYou should be dreamer yourselfIf you don t have a dreama plan and a wish, how can you know where you re going? Maybe some of your creams are unrealistic, but as long as you worked hard , your dreams can be realized some daysDreams, on the one hand, is not costly: they dont cost some money Even the poorest person on the world can have creamsOn the other hand, they are expensive, for you have to work terribly hard to make it come true Always lave a dream, ray friends【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】第一行：making改为make，前面的to是不定时，后用动词原形；第二行：be后加a，dreamer可是可数名词，故前面应加不定冠词a；第三行：and改为or，本句是否定句，用or代替and；第四行：worked改为work，前后句都是现在时态，时态要一致；days改为day，some day总有一天，你的梦想会实现；第五行：is 改为 are，主语是dreams，要用复数；some改为any 否定句中用 any代替some；第六行：第一个on改为in，in the world固定短语； 【英语改错题的常见错误类型】1、谓语动词的时态和语态2、句子结构和句子完整性3、名词单复数及主谓一致问题4、上下文语意和代词5、介词 固定搭配6、固定（习惯）用法7、形容词和副词是否误用及其比较等级是否正确；8、冠词。取舍与选择是否正确9、连词和从句引导词10、非谓语动词的形式是否正确第七行：it改为them，代指前面的dreams，用them，不用it。【英语卷（解析）2015届山东省日照市日照一中高三12月校际联合检测（201412）】第一节 短文改错（共10小题，每题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用()划掉。修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词： 2只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。I used to feel I was the sun in my familyBut when my cousin was born，everyone pays more attention to herSo I disliked her and couldnt get along well with her. With time went on，I realized how ridiculous I have been at that timeI tried to find a proper time to apologizeWhen my cousins family came to my home a few day ago，I took my cousin to play outsideIn the way to the playgroundI bought much snacks for herThen we began chatWhen we talked about their childhood，suddenly，I said“sorry”gentlyShe was silently，so I thought that she hadnt heard me clearlyBut after while she said：“Dont say thatIn my memory，you are always friendly”【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础知识。【答案解析】1. pays 改成paid 根据前文的used to过去常常，和我很引导的时间状语从句，此处应用过去时，故pays 改成paid。2. With time went on 改成As time went on 或者 With time going on with不可引导从句，故将With改成As引导时间状语从句或将went改为going，就是改成with + 宾语 + v-ing的with复合结构。3. have been 改成had been 因为主句的realize是过去时，宾语从句必须用过去时态，故have改为had。4. day 改成days a few几个，修饰可数名词的复数形式，故day改为days。5. In the way 改成On the way on the way to在的路上，in the way挡路的，根据题意将On改为On。6. much snacks 改成many snacks snack是可数名词，much修饰不可数名词，故将much改为many。7. chat改成chatting(our chat)或chat前加to begin后跟不定式或v-ing形式作宾语，故chat改成chatting(our chat)或chat前加to。8. their 改成our when引导的从句主语是we，谈论的应该是我们的童年时代，故their 改成our。9. silently改成silent she was应跟形容词作表语，故silently改成silent。10. after while 改成after a while while作名词时表示一段时间其前加不定冠词a，after awhile一段时间以后。【英语卷（解析）2015届吉林省实验中学高三上学期第二次模拟考试（201501）】第一节 短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分, 满分10分)假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下日记。日记中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Mom,The Mothers Day is coming. Im sorry that I am abroadand cant send your flowers, so Im writing to you. Mom, I know I have never expressed my thank to youbefore. But on today, at this special time, I just want to tellyou loudly: I love you, Mom! Thank you so much by notonly giving me life, but also teach me how to be a goodperson. Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom, thoughI may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take yourpart in m