高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验26.doc

2015届高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达限时测验261假设你是李华，一个英国学生社团下周将到你就读的启明中学进行为期一天的参观访问，你负责接待工作。请根据下面的提示给对方的负责人mr.steven 写一封邮件，商讨参观事宜。1自我介绍；2参观安排；上午参观校园；中午食堂用餐；下午交流活动；晚上举办欢迎晚会；3征询对方的其它要求。注意：1词数：120l50，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。dear mrsteven，im li hua，a student from qiming secondary school2假设你和你朋友在中山公园散步时遇到的一件事，请根据要求写一篇英语短文。【写作内容】时间上星期六下午地点在中山公园的湖边事件我和朋友在散步，湖中一个小女孩在呼救。我们没来得及脱衣服就跳进湖中将她救上岸，对她做了人工呼吸，并在她恢复知觉后，送她去医院。我们还打电话通知她的家长。最终小女孩得救了。评价家长很感激，医生对我们的急救给予高度评价。感受懂得急救只是很重要。参考词汇：急救 first aid【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。【评分标准】结构准确、内容完整和篇章连贯。 _3书面表达（满分20分）最近你校聘请了一名外籍教师,名叫laura。校长安排她给你们上了一堂关于women heroes的课,课后她给你们布置了一个任务:写一篇题目为my mother- a woman i admire most的短文。内容要点：1.母亲生在农村，受过高等教育，2.是一位大学老师。3.我成长的良师益友4.母亲爱家里的每一个人。注意:开头已给出，不计入字数。可适当添加细节，使行文连贯。词数100左右。my mother- a woman i admire mostthe woman whom i admire most is my mother.4根据下面的图画写一篇短文，文章需要包括以下几点：图中文字：三十年前 后来 1. 描述图画所反映的事件； 2. 对图中现象加以分析；3. 针对这个现象提出建议。注意： 1. 考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；2. 词数120词左右3. 词汇：filial piety 孝心5假如你是学生会主席，你要在学校广播上发布口头通知，内容如下：学生会将在12月29日晚（星期六）在科技楼会议大厅举办晚会，欢迎来自美国的朋友。聚会7：00准时开始。节目有音乐、舞蹈、唱歌，最后还要和外国朋友交换礼物。请带上自己的礼物，写上自己的名字和祝福语，欢迎大家踊跃参加。请你写一篇100字左右的英语作文。注意：1、口头通知的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总字数； 2、参考词汇：科技楼：science and technology buildingboy and girls,may i have your attention, please? i have an announcement to make.thats all. thank you. 参考答案1 dear mr. jones,im li hua, a student from qiming secondary school. im in charge of your visit to our school next week and im writing to exchange ideas about the arrangements for you.youll be picked up at the airport and after a short rest, well show you around our campus, which will allow you to get a general impression of our school. then youre supposed to visit our teaching buildings, the school stadium and the dormitories as well. after that, we will have lunch together in the school canteen. in the afternoon, a free talk will be arranged, so we can talk about the school life and different cultures of the two countries. in the evening, there will be a welcome party for you.if you have any other request, please inform me in time so that we can make some possible changes to the visiting schedule.best wishes!yours,li hua【解析】 试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语in charge of负责；picked up接某人；show you around领某人参观；well show you around our campus, which will allow you to get a general impression of our school.这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句；in the afternoon, a free talk will be arranged, so we can talk about the school life and different cultures of the two countries.这个句子so连接两个有因果关系的句子；考点： 提纲类作文2不唯一last saturday afternoon, my friend and i were walking by the lake in zhongshan park when suddenly we heard a girl calling for help in the lake. we hurried to jump into the lake without taking off our clothes, swam towards her and pulled her out. then we made her breathe using mouth-to-mouth way before she came to herself, sent her to hospital and telephoned her parents. afterwards, we were told that the girl was saved because of the timely rescue.her parents were very thankful to us and the doctors thought highly of our first aid, which made us realize that knowing first aid is very important for everyone. 【解析】试题分析：根据题目要求，理解要表达的要点设计好文章的层次段落，考虑所用时态、人称等，把要点串联起来，构成文章框架。选词造句，避难选易。在要点、层次明确的情况下，选用自己最熟悉的单词、句式进行造句如果不会用复杂句就用简单句表达要点；必须用5句话能概括所有的要点。考点：基础写作。点评：好作文应该是紧扣文章主题，遵循特定的文体格式，选用恰当的语言合理组织文章结构，内容统一、连贯，语法、拼写、标点正确，用词恰当。3 the woman i admire mostthe woman whom i admire most is my mother. not only is she my mother, but shes my best friend. my mother was born and grew up in the countryside. the conditions there were very terrible when she was young, but she had a strong will and managed to get away from there. she managed to get a high education and now shes an excellent college teacher. my mother teaches me a lot and she also teaches me how to be a useful person. when im in trouble, she always helps me and encourages me to work hard. being a caring woman, my mother loves both my father and me. she shows great respect towards her parents and loves everybody in the family.【解析】 试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文。最近你校聘请了一名外籍教师,名叫laura。校长安排她给你们上了一堂关于women heroes的课,课后她给你们布置了一个任务:写一篇题目为my mother- a woman i admire most的短文。内容要点： 1.母亲生在农村，受过高等教育，2.是一位大学老师。3.我成长的良师益友 4.母亲爱家里的每一个人。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，这篇文章用一般现在时。上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。【亮点说明】the woman whom i admire most is my mother.包含一个定语从句。being a caring woman, my mother loves both my father and me.这里是现在分词作状语。考点：提纲类书面表达【答案】as we can see, filial piety is prevailing all through the two pictures: in the first picture, the mother is supporting her little daughter while in the second picture, her daughter, who has grown up, is supporting her aged mother instead.what a happy family full of precious love! the two pictures indicate us: we need to show our concern and respect to our parents. however, most of us fail to do this job. first of all, as our lifestyle moves quickly,we are less likely to hold enough awareness on our filial piety. as young men who consider the career as the priority, they often choose to migrate with theirjobs, work around the clock and rest with the work files, leaving parents in empty nests. besides, many people are used to substituting their care for parents with money or gifts. while it is beyond dispute that material support can improve ones living standards, what those aged people need most is the mental satisfaction and love from their children such as a simple call, a short being back home。it is easy to draw this conclusion that, to our parents, nothing can be better than the filial piety from children. whenever possible, we should gather around thetable for a “reunion dinner” with our parents; whether busy or not, we need togive our parents a call and tell them we are fine. only with the sense our filial piety can our parents lead a really happy life.【解析】本文是一篇看图写话。成文时：1.采用三段成文法：(1)描述图画中反映的事件；（2）对图中现象加以分析；（3）针对这个现象提出建议。2.时态：一般现在时。3.人称：第三人称；4.适当使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型，以提高文章的档次。5.使用一些连词和插入语使文章表达自然、流畅。5boys and girls,may i have your attention, please? i have an announcement to make.the student union is going to hold a party on saturday evening, december 29, to welcome our friends fro