安徽省都江堰市高考英语二轮复习 书面表达选习（2）.docVIP

四川都江堰市2016高考英语书面表达二轮选习（2）【2016高考训练】书面表达（满分25分）假设你即将参加你校主题为“preparing myself for college life”的英语演讲比赛。请根据提示写一则简短的英语演讲稿。构想一下你的大学生活和你打算怎么做来适应大学生活。内容要点应包括：1. 确定新的学习目标；2. 学会独立生活；3. 参加各种活动；4. 处理好与同学的关系。注意：1.短文的内容要连贯、完整；2.字数：100 左右(开头己给出的单词不计入单词总数）。preparing myself for college lifehello, everyone! my college life is right around the corner and im getting ready for it. _thats all. thank you!书面表达one possible version: preparing myself for college life hello, everyone! my college life is right around the corner and im getting ready for it. as for me, college life is a brand new experience. in order to get used to college life as soon as possible, i should prepare myself for that from now on. to begin with, after entering college, i intend to set new goals in my studies and stick to them until i succeed. whats more, since i am away from home, it is necessary for me to learn to live independently. without doubt i should do laundary and clean-up all by myself. in my spare time, i will take part in a diversity of activities, such as going to the english corner to practise my spoken english. in addition, getting along with my classmates and teachers at college is another challenge for me, but for sure ill make it. i have a strong belief that my college life will be fabulous. thats all. thank you!读写任务 (共1小题，满分25分)阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150字左右的英语短文。mayor bloomberg has been the mayor of new york city for nearly nine years, but for ten years he has been wearing the same shoes. this is really rare to be seen on a billionaire.“the mayor owns two pairs of work shoes,” said the spokesman. “one day hell wear one, the next the other. when they got worn down, he has them repaired. he could buy any shoes he wanted, but he says since they are comfortable, and they work, theres no need for a new pair.” according to the spokesman, the mayor saves in his footwear and he also keeps it up in his personal as well as governmental finance. “when he buys a cup of coffee, he chooses the smallest size. he buys only what he needs.”such is the mayor of new york city, who cares little about his shoes, avoids wasting money and focuses his attention on his work and his people in the city.but what about our fellow students nowadays? some wear super expensive clothes and shoes; besides, they buy as many as possible, far more than two pairs. they always want the latest, the newest and throw the old ones away though they havent worn them for many times.【写作内容】1. 以约30个词概括以上短文的内容。2. 以约120个词就“勤俭节约”这一主题发表你的感想和看法，内容包括：（1）给出你对这位市长的评价；（2）举一个你尊敬的人勤俭节约的例子，说明他对你的影响；（3）列举你生活中浪费的坏习惯并说说你勤俭节约的决心。【写作要求】1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范内容合适，语篇连贯。参考词汇：节俭的 provident/thrifty【参考范文】读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)参考范文the author introduces to us the mayor of new york city, a man who is rich but provident. the author also points out nowadays some students have the habit of wasting things.when reading the passage, i am deeply moved by the mayor. rich as he is, he has the virtue of saving. he spends money only on what he needs and never wastes money on what is of no use. i think this is really admirable.the mayor reminds me of the great political leader of china, chairman mao. as the chairman of china, mao led a very thrifty life. he used to wear old clothes at home. when his clothes were worn out, he would have them repaired and continued to wear them. he always told others that saving was a good virtue of chinese people.thinking about the two great leaders, i feel deeply ashamed. as a young student who still has to depend on my parents, i have been leading too comfortable a life. i buy whatever i like though i dont really need them. besides, i like new things; when things get “old”, i tend to begin to dislike them and stop using them. now that i realize that this is wrong, im determined that i shall follow the examples of the two great leaders and start to get rid of the bad habits.【2013界广东省揭阳市一模】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）你是校报记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况：时间：三月九日，星期六对象：心理学家 (psychologist) 李教授主题：高三学生如何释放过大压力（overwhelming stress）李教授解读：1原因： 主要是因为学生把高考看得过于重要，把它看成最终目标。2. 建议：（1）最重要的是积极心态；（2）适当运动能够帮助有效释放压力；（3）注意饮食平衡;(4) 保证充足睡眠。词汇：高考the college entrance examination写作内容根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容：1采访的时间、对象和主题；2李教授解读内容。写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分） one possible version:on saturday, march 9th, i had an interview with professor li, a psychologist, about how senior 3 students can release overwhelming stress. according to professor li, the main reason why senior 3 students are suffering overwhelming stress is that most of them attach so much importance to the college entrance examination that they even look on it as their final goal. he suggests that senior 3 students should take a positive attitude towards the exam. they had better do some exercise, which can be a helpful way to release their stress. whats more, theyre supposed to keep a balanced diet and make sure that they have enough sleep.基础写作评分说明：基础写作主要考查学生的语言结构的应用能力，能够应用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。本试题要求学生根据所提供的信息，使用五个句子表达写作内容中所提供的全部内容。命题思想是要求考生在表达这些内容时能够：正确使用采访报道的写作手法。正确使用同位语、分词短语、从句等来整合信息。正确使用时态、时间表达方式等。在评分时，应注意以下几个方面： 1按照评分标准，实行分析法评分：按语言、内容和连贯三项标准分别给分；在语言方面，重点评判句子的语法结构是否正确、用词是否规范；学生是否使用了合适的句型结构。2在内容方面，重点评判学生是否表达全部规定的内容；如果学生在表达完整的内容时，适当添加一些内容，不扣分；3在连贯方面，重点评判五个句子是否构成一篇连贯的短文，逻辑是否合理。（具体内容见评分标准）【写作评分标准】基础写作评分说明 基础写作的评分建议采用分析法，即按照语言、内容和连贯三项指标分别给分，最后累计作为该题的总得分。项目赋分评分标准语言7-8具有很好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性高，词汇方面使用较好，只有少许错误。5-6具有较好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性较好，有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。3-4语言运用能力一般；语法和句子结构基