Writing必修2 Unit4.ppt

Unit4Wildlifeprotection AnEnglishletterincludes3parts astart body 正文 anending Thelanguageyouusedependsonhowwellyouknowthepersonyouarewritingto Let sobservethefollowingstartsandendings 常用的信件开头和结束语 Analysetheletteryouaregoingtowrite Start DearWWFStyle AnEnglishletterTense 一般现在时Person IEnding Anformalending Body Para1 Showthepurposeofyourletter Para2 Giveyoursuggestions Para3 Expressyourhopeandwishes Supportingsentences建议信正文常用的表达 1 I mwritingtogivesomesuggestionstoimprove 写信的目的 2 Isuggestthat 3 Firstly Isuggestdoing suggestthat Iadvisethat 4 Secondly weshould can 5 Bydoingthis 6 Thirdly itwouldbeagoodideaif 7 First Moreimportantly Lastbutnotleast 最后但最重要的是 层次 逻辑8 IfIwereyou Iwould 9 Whynot Let s 10 Weshallsparenoeffortto 不遗余力 11 Itisnecessaryforusto 12 Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration 13 Iwouldappreciateitif 如果 我将不胜感激 14 Ibelievethatwithyourhelp 15 I mlookingforwardtoyourreply 16 Itistimeweputallourgreatplansintopractice DearWWF Myhometownisoneofthefewhabitatsofthegoldenmonkey I msosadthatthislovelyanimalisendangerednow Ihopethatyoucanhelpthegoldenmonkey Firstly Isuggestthatweshouldstartafoundationforthegoldenmonkey Thenpeoplewhowouldliketohelpprotectthemonkeycandonate Secondly makingeducationalprogramswouldbeagoodideaforsavingthegoldenmonkey Asaveryimportantorganization WWFshould provideknowledgeandinformationaboutthegoldenmonkeyformorepeople Thirdly WWFshouldcooperatewithlocalgovernmentsandschools Itisnecessarytohavesomelong termprojects whichwouldattractmorevolunteersandmorefunds Ibelievethatwithyourhelpthegoldenmonkeywillsurvivebetter Pleasehelpthem Yourssincerely LiMing onPage67 PlantoencouragemorebirdstovisitthewasteareaneartheparkTherearefewbirdsinourtownandwewouldliketoencouragethemtoreturntolivehere Wefoundtherewasadirtyareanearthepark Weclearedallthe Heading theplan Theproblemandouridea rubbishaway Thenwebegantoplanournewdesignforthearea First wemadeaplanandadrawingtoshowwhattheareawouldbelikewhenitwasfinished Thenweaskedourparentstomakethebirdhousesandfeedingtrays Preparingthesite theplananddrawing whatwedidandwhy Wedecidedthatthebirdtablesshouldbemadeofwoodbecausetheywillneedtolastalongtimeoutside Thefeedingtraysshouldbeputonthetablesorhungfromthebrachesofthetreessothebirdscaneasilygetatthem Alsothebirdwatchersneedtoseethebirds eating Thenestingboxesshouldbehungfromthetreessothebirdscanfeelsafeabouttheireggs Birdnestsshouldnotbeputclosetothegroundorcatsorotheranimalswillbeabletotaketheeggs Thewatercontainers shouldbeputintheopenairsotheycanbechangedwithoutthebirdsgettingupsetortooexcited Theobserversshouldbeputbehindlowbushessotheycanseethebirdsbutnotupsetthem Finally weputoutbirdfoodandwatereverydaysothatthebirdswouldcometotheirnewarea Soonwe